Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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5673825 Thanks. I had actually forgotten where I had seen that before
Sir your fiction is disgusting and DAWM ITS THE BEST THING I READ IN A WHILE (thankss for it)
Headless_Rainbow, please say, that there will be something or someone who can stand against Celestia more than a few chapters and balance her Mary Sueish powers. (Possible Trixie's betrayal of Celestia don't count.)
Please answer to my questquestions:
1. As far of this fic end? How long you plan this story will be? Do you plan to reach 500000 words or at least 300000 words?
2. Equestrian Games will be changed or still the same?
5676604 I have no idea how long it will be. I have an ending in mind, but keep thinking of more things to add prior to the ending. Presently it will probably reach > 200k, but I may think of more.
And well the Equestria Games are more an international thing so other countries are involved. She might could insist on there being a few more competitions like... I don't know... professional raping, vore, to-the-death fighting with compulsory necrophilia at the end, or just the general rape and murder of the teams that did the worst. I don't know. Maybe the Equestria Games is something I should add in there too.
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If you, possible, will add here EG universe then, how about Celestia visit king Sombra in dark mirror universe and makes madness there too? This, possible, will add to the story about 30-50K words. And if that Celestia become a evil than Celestia from DMU become good pony. Celestia1 can help Luna2 to defeat Celestia2 and make Rapequestria2, something like that, or just simple bloody visit to her ex with hundreds of corpses.
Please answer: Do you like this idea or not?
I dunno about everyone else, but I feel like this story is just dragging on and on and on and on. It's just not all that interesting anymore.
5677952 It is sorta. I'm open to ideas though if you have something you'd like to see in it.
5677952
Something a bit like this. There so much deaths in this story. Sometimes I wont to be there some civil moments or plot to rest from all of this. Will be good if there will be not 1 paragraph of plot and rest chapter as rape, but at least 50/50%. Read rape is fun, but when story consist only rape then this not so fun as it would be. The rest is the change of a situation.
5676604 it would most likely be discord
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Nope, Q on Enterprise.
I think about Discord and Lauren Faust as Celestia's and Luna's parents. And as parents they definitely need to appear here and ground her. They need to take away her magic, horn and wings, then cast estrus spell on her and take away her genitals. And Celestia will live as earth pony in heat without sexual relife about million years. Then Discord and Faust have mercy on her and execute her slow and painful. They tie her on the main scuare in Canterlot and drill holes in her body with blunt and rusty drill. (She still don't have genitals.) Celestia will be rutted in this holes by angry mob and when she will be full of sperm she blow up. She will die without deathgasm. Then Faust and Discord would banish her soul into Tartarus, where she will be tortured by her victims. Or they can punish her more and not allow her to have deathgasms in Tartarus too.
Yup, I know that I am evil, but this is what Celestia deserve.
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It is ok if you don't like some ideas, just let know that you read them. I just curious now. I previously mentioned Dark Mirror Universe because 2 reasons:
1. This would make fic longer.
2. In DMU we have evil Cadence. On fimfiction many slutty Cadences, but this is rare to see evil Cadence. I found only one fic.
Still don't know what you think about this idea. Uncertainty is worst thing ever.
Sory if I make you mad through my comments.
And a few questions for you: (This is tradition.)
You already mentioned that there probably will be Lauren Faust and Luna will be back in sort af a way.
1. How long they will be alive? How long they will be in the story?
2. Luna's back in sort a way will be clopable or not? Will be there sex scenes witch revived Luna? (I talk about the same Luna, who executed by Celestia.)
3. 200k words this is with EG vacation or without?
5680757 I should probably finish reading the mirror universe comics to know exactly what I'd be dealing with there. I'd add it in if I felt I could do something with it, and evil Cadence might be amusing.
Spoilers but... Well Lauren Faust will be in for a few chapters, and I was a bit reluctant to drag her out too far. Luna... won't be alive, but will be animate, and get fucked.
200k words include the EG part, which I'm working on now. I'm getting close to caught up, so will probably start putting out chapters once a week unless I can get a good amount ahead again.
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No, it's not just you. The only character that have really evolved in this story for the past 10 chapters has been Shining, who is just a rehashing of Twilight's earlier drop into insanity. Plot-wise half of the last ten chapters didn't really add anything and were just more rape scenarios. Which I fully acknowledge are this story's bread and butter, but it gets pretty blazé without the context of the evolving plot and changing characters.
Honestly, if this story is planned to double to 200k words, I'll probably shove it into my 'wait until completed' library and then skim it when it's eventually done.
5680531 pretty sure that celestia's soul would molest everything in tartarus
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Oops, my mistake. But Celestia will be in Tartarus with her minions. I don't have simpathiy for them. Rapists need be raped too. And she would be not allowed to cum in Tartarus, because if she will be allowed to cum there, then Tartarus will be Haven for her.
That better?
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Thank you wery much for honest answer.
If you want to know about evil Cadence, then you probably would be disappointed when you will read DMU comic, because there main6 and Cadence from DMU only mentioned as aposites to original character, they don't appear here. Cadence probably will be there as princess of rape or/and hate as apposite to love. In original mlp she is one of the most innocent ponyes, in DMU she probably will be one of the most evil ponyes. Also here she have Shining Armor as a pet.
In fic, where she is evil. Cadence acted almost as Celestia here, except rape thing. She executed Celestia and Luna, then she captured another countries and make other races as slaves to ponyes. And she have Chrysalis as pet too. Then our Twilight, through one thousand years go away, found a spell to travel to the alternative universe where Ningtmare Moon doesn't exist, and then war between 2 universes happened. There been funny moment when evil Cadence killed a maid on good Cadence's eyes because good Cadence refused to get laid with her.
A few questions as always:
I don't understand, Luna will be there as some sort of AI with her own mind and ability to talk, fill, and move on her own, or she will be just as
radiomagic controlled doll without even ability to fill the pain? First will be preferable. Or I just translated it wrong?Also, Twilight sleep as Celestia's wife in their bed, or she still sleep in her room alone?
5684667 You ask a lot of questions
Luna would be sentient and yes they will eventually sleep together.
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Sorry, can't do anything with myself.
5684458 totally unable to orgasam
5685404 Every path is the right path.
5685653
live as earth pony in heat without genitals then will be executed and unable to cum in Tartarus. Best punishment for Celestia ever.
5687031 eeyup
>All this fucked up shit
>No urethral penetration
You fucked up.
5696398 No cock vore either
I...am......LOVING THIS!!!