Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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Im done, this is to graphic for my excelent imagination... Thank you for writing a good story but i think im going to take a break.
Because this is just wrong man...
Poor luna...
You don't know how much I wanted some guard, some civvie to walk up behind Celestia and shove a spear into her back. Guess it wasn't meant to be...
I have mixed feelings about the last three chapters.
1. This realy too hot, especially moment with Twilight and guillotine.
2. I am very disappointed that Celestia killed Luna so soon. More funny to Celestia break Luna to submission, when she have only one purpose: die for her mistress pleasure. Only when Luna begins to beg for death, Celestia have mercy and kill her and Luna died happy, knowing that her sister is happy.
I am disappointed thet you give us dessert in the middle of the first dish and simply execute Luna, but scene is too hot . More logical to Celestia save best for last. I аm talking about the feelings not about the metods (For Celestia more pleasurably killing her sister than somepony else, not even Twilight is compatible).
Or may be better for story plot if luna espaped and started guerilla war against Celestia's tyranny then caught second tine, and being executed or won and execute Celestia for her crimes against ponykind and banish celestia's soul to the tartarus.
And I have two ideas for this story (Do not use them if you do not want, it's your story):
1. Twilight found a spell capable back Luna to live with a side-effect: each time when Luna is brought back to life she reborn a few years younger (In the end of the story Luna became a foal) but she saved her memory. And Celestia will be able kill Luna as much as she want.
2. Luna's soul is special and not being fully digested and become one with celestia's soul. luna has the opportunity to watch, hear and feel what Celestia do. At the same time luna can tolk with Celestia. It would be fun when Celestia fuck luna's corpse and Luna can feel and comment anything what Celestia do (Luna's soul being forced watch how Celestia killing other ponyes).
PLEASE comment my ideas. I am very interested to know your opinion about them and realy want to know if they have a chance to appear in that story, or not. Anyway I am not mad if you do not use them, I just want to more Luna in that story.
p.s. Please forgive me for terrible english (google translate).
p.p.s Who know good NORMAL lunestia storyes, because I need restore my mind after that.
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Yup, I wont to Lauren Faust appeared in the end of the story and banished Celestia to the tartarus for her crimes.
We have 2 possible endings:
1. Most possible ending: Celestia killing all ponies in the list and live happy in Rapequestria with ponykind slowly desapiared fron Equis.
2. Most boring and unlikely ending: ponies do not like being raped and overthrow Celestia from the trone. Celestia in that ending blame Chrisalis and execute her then try live like nothing happened. But that impossible.
Yours most realistic ending not happen because in his fics evil always wins.
I should probably be worried about how much I'm enjoying this story.
5451358 Yay corpses!
5451426 Eventually I'm going to run out of crazy things to do.
5452610 Yay!
5457584 Methinks it might take more than a spear to kill her.
5457765 Oh there will be those that get rebellious, for all the good it does.
Well Luna didn't last too long because the story wasn't as much about her at this point, but as far as coming back there might be something like that, in a fucked up sort of way, later on.
5457786 If I involved Lauren Fausticon, she'd probably just end up getting offed too. Not a bad idea actually
5458991 I'm always glad to hear people are liking and/or getting their rocks off to my stories.
I realy hope that Celestia make cannibalist not only legal, but also required.
Yup, only nuke bomb in her ass can stop her.
Yay! And how about consensual and semi-consensual victims, who die for mistress pleasure (Twilight does not count). Wery hot when wictim knows that resistance only increase the pain and obey her mistress orders. Or when prey want die for mistress pleasure.
I am not realy dissapointed that luna not a rebel. I disspointed in her small role in the story. Main villain's sister do nothing in the story, and appear only in 3 chapters. She even not degraded as Twilight.
This very strange for me, because luna one of dearest ponyes to Celestia.
If she appear as pillow it will not be fun, because they do not able to scream and fill the pain, also they don't have a mind and do not react to actions.
Or am I incorrectly translated and misunderstood you?
I wont more Luna not because she is Luna, but because she is main villian's sister.
Tia kill her momy too! And not only Equestria will degrade, but also all realm! Celestia become godness of rape. Summer Sun Celebration will be renamed in Summer Rape Celebration. Ponies gather in the square and choose some who will be sacreficed to Celestia, the rest ponyes divided into two teams and team A snuffed team B. Mass snuff orgy, yay! Then in the end of day all corpses will be collected and cooked, and ponyes have nice holiday dinner.
Are you realy decided to add Lauren Faust?
P.S. How long this story will be?
I cant wait for sombra or tirek to show up hows she gonna stop them now
5464358 also although these are hot im only gonna track this for fap value and to see how much this is gonna blow up in her face after its all over
5462306 Well Luna will be there as a fuck-corpse for a while, but there will be more than that too. And I don't know, now that I've thought about it I probably will add Faust somewhere. And I don't know how long it will be. I'm thinking around 50 chapters, but I keep thinking of more things to add so it will be dragging on for quite a bit.
5464358 Well with Tirek, she'd be able to track him without needing Discord now, so she'd just smash him when he is weak. None of that pansy banishment crap. And yeah, I'm still thinking of how it might blow up in her face, but there are just so many things to do before I get to that! I don't want to do that and then think of something else I should have done.
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Glad to hear that. Any chances to see more canon ponies (Cheerilee, SS, DT, Roseluck, Minuette/Colgate, Coco Pommel, Sunset Shimmer and many other canon characters), who don't belong to your list in the story description? The more the better.
And, how long Twilight will last? I hope she don't die in the middle of the story. Wery interesting to watch how she degraded and slowly turns into tamed mini version of Twilight from "Twilight takes charge", powerless but blood hungry and realy obedient to Celestia. At least she may be live long enough to place her load into cadence's ass.
Sory for being annoying.
5469453 Markiplier: NO! JUST NO! I DON'T WANT ANY!
One of the signs a fandom is in decline is when even the abject fetish material manages to degrade in quality...
5464416 AUNTIE CELESTIA WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO MY MOMMY! wait what are you going to do to me
5479692 Oh stop being such a prude and join Celestia in a threesome with Luna's corpse.
5481054 NO THAT IS MY MOTHER AND I AM WORRIED ABOUT WHAT SHE WOULD DO TO ME I am scared
hedeless brainbone what haz oyu dun
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2dbR2JZmlWo
Don't read this whilst listening to Death Metal, it almost made me sick
You missed a trick, Celestia; you totally should have told Luna before killing her that you were going to eat her soul. You saw how frightened Twilight was of that and the terror and panic from Luna would've been delightful.
Oh and now that Luna is dead, you need to thank Twilight for helping you defeat her. Make sure she knows that her choice could have stopped you, that Luna's death and everything that follows is her fault. I'm sure she'll enjoy thinking that one over.
Wait, why am I trying to help Celestia in this? WTT is wrong with me?
This is also the point where I find it a little hard to believe the actions of the characters. One alicorn suddenly flipping to homicidal I can deal with, but I don't think the average citizen or guard would be as accepting of this as they seem. Especially those who 'used' Luna overnight, as much as there would be enough who would enjoy the chance to do so without legal consequence, I don't think they would be willing to draw the disgust of their peers. Still, it's not as bad here as in Shining's Flurry, where the entire male population of the Crystal Empire seemingly jumped at the chance.
6538797 Oh my god why is that so funny to me
Anyway, this story is great. I never thought I'd consider something so blatantly fucked up to be so damn hot. I've gotten off like 12 different times by reading this.
Celestia's out here thinking she's the North Korean government...
9904353
Tsk, don't compare her to some half-ass tyrant that doesn't even murder-rape people in public.
This oddly sounds like describing something food-related, like chicken...
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Have you considered killing yourself