Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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so if the magic of the prison keeps changelings alive, and chrysy considered ripping the fetus out, would the magic still keep the fetus alive?
on a side note: HOORAY and things are gonna get really awkward really fast
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You're quite welcome! =^u^=
Quite the interesting & yet seemingly small change in part 57; well executed, to the point of efficient, foreshadowing, cute, and nice & *character*-istic! =^_^;= Intriguing too for how Celestia &co will forge her path from this further setback. After all, she finally has something of a moderate challenge now, what with the transportation issue, rebellions, invasions, competency issues in her staff. Funny how she contributed to at least some of it intentionally (like I said, boredom & experimentation, and we can add 'trolling' in a way!), & much of the rest less directly.
So now, she not only has conflicts she can 'resolve' as a slightly more compelling character {I for one am rooting for her even more than I did your anti-heroes of Spike & Luna for instance, which is saying something!}, but even more than I mentioned previously, she has certainly set herself up for one Tartarus of a ride back to the top of the heap ...of dead, screwed, & screwed-up bodies and souls! (cue evil laugh) =^o^=
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By the way, a few possibilities have come to mind that you may find interesting but I don't think I've read in your stories yet (mind you I have yet to start Lesson Applejack & some others). Feel free to adopt, adapt, or ignore:
screws or thumbscrews/hoofscrews (admittedly mostly for the pun-tential of 'getting screwed')
machine sex, sex-bots {possibly some inspired by fan-bits like Sweetie-bot, PONY.MOV's R-DASH 5000, or the artificial intelligences & cyborgs of My Little Portal}
role-playing (as engaging as the storyline is & how known ponies like Trixie have already had alternative in-story roles, it can be relegated to throwaway lines, among side characters, or otherwise out of the main focus; eg classics like oversexed sex ed teacher, corrupt principle or cop/guard, naughty student, smexy librarian, curious virgin; also other show characters & fan-variants whether or not alive elsewhere, eg Fluttershy, Sluttershy or the dog-like Futashy, or tributes to other fictions, or even types of ponies likely to exist in-story like Twilight may play a rebel spy, or herself trying to betray Celestia & possibly even 'succeeding') {that last may've been a fun fake story twist, had I not spoiled it, darn!}
breast enlargement, nipple insertion or even magically enlarged & possibly altered-in-shape nipples for nipple-sex (whether penetrated by or penetrating into something else)
sounding, especially by another penis, but horn or hoof would also be something
piercings on leashes, used to tie together parts of a pony or different ponies, or laced together in another bondage manner, similar kinkyness
Celestia, Twilight or somepony shipping other ponies (or non-ponies, or 'cargo'...)
the last few leaderless dragons, changelings, perhaps a hippogriff or seapony if they could be found to exist, &/or what-not, perhaps magically modified for fun, as personal slaves, sex objects {which of course could work live or not!}, lowest harem members, pimped out on par with whorses, &c ("Bug-bitch betta have my bits! --er energy, whatever!")
Ember roasting on embers? {"You will remember..."}
resurrect somepony or a few, healing the body more thoroughly until they're no longer in the agony of earlier, so to experience an entirely different death than previously, with possibly other pain or pleasure first. For instance, Spike has 'fun' with Ember or Twilight, &/or must endure treatment by them as long as it's entertaining to the goddess & her pet, perhaps with other sources of pain too, like the aforementioned embers or Twilight berating & firing him (as in the Sombra-stairs episode). Or pony-Fluttershy 'gets' to say goodbye to her animal friends in some twisted way like having to hurt & sexually assault them. {The human FS ending was superb, very nice after the somewhat less satisfying pony FS chapters, and you did an excellent job with her in Spikey Wikey, but I guess I like her even in torment; besides, who doesn't want to see Angel get Celestia's brand of fun and Fluttershy turn the tables on him, even 'reward' him with a *certain* kind of carrot stuffing!}
I for one would love to see Philomena, Celestia & perhaps others eat some breezies alive! Perhaps also interesting if Celestia & Twilight shrank almost to their scale for sexy-fun-times, with or without also vore in that form.
death via being devouring by enspelled breezies or parasprites
hoping to see what, if anything, you do with Discord; turning him female or small-membered futaneighri may be a start, perhaps later into an inanimate, inflatable sex-doll or balloon; the wrong kind of prick & *poof*, chaos-spirit souffle fit for a lust goddess!
(Wow, I have exposed myself to some really weird sexual stories & comics over the years. =O.o= "Anime sure is weird.")
Anyway, while I've already been imagining some of what could happen in this direction, I look forward to even the chance you will follow up on that brilliant set-up you made in the human world, whether here or in its own spinoff story! {Now wouldn't that be fitting.} Just how human-psychopathic-tyrant-Molestia parlays her magic and diabolical craftiness into other forms of greater & greater power, or crashes & burns throwing untrained, untested, & possibly underpowered magic against a world with nuclear weaponry, Donald Chrump &c. (Wouldn't it be just like Celestia to screw over even herself like that, just for $#!+s & giggles!) How Sunset Shimmer, Sci-Twilight, possibly human-Sunset, background beings, Crystal Prep, deal with her and get dealt with. The level & flavor of insanity which Maud Pie develops, and especially how she deals with Celestia, if she makes a connection between the other kills of the same night, the rising star of the magical murder & molestation scene, and her mother Cloudy's mention of a demon. =^,.,^=
But yeah, take it or leave it; at least I had fun coming up w/this!
7357318 You should really send things that length via mail if you want me to read them. Otherwise I'll intend on reading it when I have time, but then I'll forget about it because it's not staring at me from my message box.
7357552 Oh, right! Thanks! =^_^;=
I've found it. The edgiest fic on Fimfiction. It's like someone rewrote 100 Days of Blueblood, except with no finesse. I mean, I admire your dedication to your vision.
I'm not reading it though.
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>says story has no finesse
>immediately afterward says hasn't read it
Well at least you admit that your critique is solely based on the description. Good job!
And 100 Days of Blueblood was a good effort which I up-voted, but disappointing at times. Wasted a perfectly good opportunity for graphic necro-sex with Rarity by having it done off-screen. That and he had Rainbow Dash be a nun or something, which kinda confused me, like she wasn't put in the story as much as her name was slapped onto a completely unrelated OC.
Give it credit though; it's much edgier than this if you have an irrational phobia of shit. And it's a hell of a lot hotter if shit gets you off! I'm bad at shit. I mean I try to add it sometimes so I don't leave anyone out, but I can never tell if what I wrote about it was hot or not to scat people since I'm not into it.
I should do some disposal vore, that might be neat for someone or another. I just realized that's kind of something I haven't done. I mean I've done every major type of vore, but never actually dealt with what inevitably happens at the end of the digestion process. Or have I? I don't know, maybe I did and just forgot.
I also tried to put some foot fetish stuff in one story that was based on an image where Sunset was slurping on dead-Twilight's foot, but again, wasn't sure if foot-fetish people would think it was hot since I'm not into it. I guess that's not very 'edgy' though. The foot fetish, not the necrophilia in the same story. What is edgy exactly? Sometimes I get the feeling people that use the word don't actually know what it means, so I looked it up! It apparently means 'new and unusual in a way that is likely to make some people uncomfortable'.
Okay, I guess that makes sense, though that's an interesting definition, as it seems to imply that things that aren't horrifyingly disturbing can also be edgy, like giant pink dildo hats.
I bet when you saw this long paragraph, you thought I was mad and bitching at you, so I should probably take a moment to apologize if you read this whole thing expecting me to get angry at some point. I really hate misleading things like that myself. Like one time recently I read a story that seemed particularly hot until they surprised you at the end that they were only doing 'play rape' instead of real rape. Of course the story description indicated real brutal rape, so that was kind of a let down.
I wonder if that's why people read my stories and seem surprised when the things in the disclaimer are actually in the story. I think maybe stories that chicken-out have taught people that it's never as bad as it looks. Sort of a 'no means yes' mentality I think.
Though I admit play rape can be fun, though I have scared a few guys that way. See the problem is that I don't like using safe words since it's hotter that way, but then the guy has no way of knowing if I am still consenting and role playing well, or if I've actually ceased consenting, so they get nervous and stop. So I've started allowing safe words for that reason, because I can be damned convincing.
Though we ran into a problem with safe words when I wanted someone to tie me up, but my friend who is really into bdsm gave me a great idea to prevent it. Instead of making a safe word, make a safe action. Like for instance, put a tennis ball in the sub's hand, and tell them to hold on to it. If they drop the ball, that's the safe word and you have to untie them.
And when you think about it, this is really a good way to do it even if you're not gagged, because it not only lets the sub communicate that things are too much for them, it also protects subs that are too subordinate for their own good and might THINK they're good for another go or three when they actually aren't. If you drop the ball, it ends whether you meant to or not.
Or course, then I get paranoid that I'll drop the ball, so I end up squeezing it so hard that my fingers are more numb than my plot by the end of it.
I got curious and looked up online to see if there were any other alternative safe word ideas, and some of them were pretty stupid. One suggested 'morse with your eyelids'. I mean are you kidding me? I mean first off, if I'm gagged, I'm often blindfolded as well, secondly, it's hard to control how you blink, I mean it just seems like it'd be easy to accidentally blink a pattern and confuse the dom.
Another was a fingersnap, but see that's a bad idea too, because you end up getting all sweaty and then you can't snap your fingers.
A decent one was to do a 'shave and a haircut' knock, which would be incredibly silly, but I suppose that is the purpose of a safe word, to bring down the mood. Even more silly was a suggestion to hum "Never Gonna Give You Up". There's a method certain to make the dom fall on his ass laughing. That might even work if he really was raping me.
Though I still think holding the object is the best, since it protects the sub from themselves, and really that's who I need to be protected from when I get in a mood to be hurt.
Granted I'm not entirely sub, but when I dom I don't tend to dom as hard as I like to get it when I'm subbing. I also like cosplay, but tend to favor different ones depending on the act. For instance, Rainbow Dash is a good dom cosplay, while I prefer Fluttershy for subbing at this point.
Though come to think of it, it might be really fun to role play Fluttershy as a dom, like really letting herself get 'peeved', or Rainbow Dash as a sub, like broken and humiliated.
Okay, I finished watching what I was watching while I typed, so I guess I'll go do something useful now. Sorry if you feel like you read that whole thing for basically no reason.
7367415 you're right, finesse is probably the wrong word. Restraint perhaps? Like, it looks like you said to yourself: gee, I wonder how many fucked up things I can cram into a single story?!
Anyway, based on your long BDSM ramble I'm going to recommend to you "The Sunday Sessions" and its sequel "Risk-Aware Consensual Pony", I by Chuck Finley. Pretty damn vanilla and "realistic" compared to what you write, but excellently written and I enjoyed them thoroughly.
Also I picture fluttershy as a really strong sub if she was able to let go of her inhibitions in the safety of a BDSM context.
7367415 I liked reading about that. You have the most extreme sexual imagination I know and I was curious to know how that can be emulated in real life sexual acts given the fragility of our human bodies. Out of curiosity, if you could magically repair yourself, would you go all the way to experience a painful gruesome death for real?
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Yo lad can u tag the chapters some way? Like which have scat as a main/one of the main focuses and so on. I was keeping up with the chapters at one point but now... This has become a behemoth
How...could it possibly...be worse?
7876104 Chrysalis is not yet aware of the zombies. She still thinks she's just synchronizing her escape with an attack by the Mother worshipers