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[2/19/2014 9:24:53 PM] Merlos The Mad: Turtle, word on the street is your being you [2/19/2014 9:24:56 PM] Merlos The Mad: stop that

Comments ( 12 )

2434024
Episode doesn't have to relate to the real world, as the word doesn't restrict it to just the show. You can consider it meta but I didn't clarify it enough for it to be meta exactly.

2434032

I actually care not about meta, and quite like it. The description simply confuses me as it makes no sense. But whatever. Won't be the first erotic fic that is good but has one single thing that makes me put forehead shaped dents in my desk...:pinkiecrazy:

im already :facehoof: over that they forgot about the kid in the back

the first thing I thought was, "this one time at band camp" when I read the title.

2434024
It's supposed to be misleading :trollestia:

2435104

Aye I wasn't the only one then :yay:

bahaha :rainbowlaugh:

@TwizzleDragon Isn't Scootaloo meant to be a Trainee or are both her and RD Trainers?

"As if there was another kind" of what, intercourse? Look up the word, I think you'll find there are plenty.

2435173
It's also kind of meh.
The scenario itself and the blatancy of it is funny, but more random funny than comedy funny.
Also there are tense changes, stilted dialogue, typos, and confusing descriptions.

2435431
Nah, Scootaloo is just visiting. She ain't a filly in this.

2436738

KK was just a bit confused when I read it

please continue this!

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