Shit I Revised129 storiesThis bookshelf is for stories of mine that have gotten their much-needed revisions and TLC. With only a couple exceptions, all of these will be printed!
Luna is a strange mare. Cadance is only now just starting to see how strange she is when Luna mentions the unthinkable. Maybe she'll learn something new in the process.
[TEEN VERSION] The most enigmatic of monsters will not carry the ugly faces of one. A young draconequus named Discord has yet to learn this, and mortals may never do so. Oh, and the first lamia is created amidst all this turmoil.
Luna is a mischievous filly loosely raised by her sister in a vast world that doubles as the home she barely remembers. Neptune is a humorless king who refuses to leave his home, both of them share a distant past although their paths have split.
In the ruins of a world they were never truly a part of two fillies travel with only each other as company, yet the elder starts to have doubts about their destination and wonders if everypony she loves is doomed to leave her. (EFNW '16 Finalist)
Thousands of years ago, three youngsters roamed the wilds together. Many things happened. Some were good, but others are better off forgotten. There are plenty of those. One has just resurfaced, one that Celestia would rather forget.
At long last, the Two Sisters have returned to what was once their home. They have some exploring to do. In doing so, how shall the gulf between them grow?
Clover the Clever is dead. Or at least she should be. The black void she had expected just didn't seem to come, but an unexpected opportunity for redemption did. She is given a challenge unlike any other: confront the gods, her past, and a future.
A few years after Luna's return it seems that Equestria will finally know an era of peace and appears to be on the verge of a new renaissance. Ponies are happy. Luna is recovering. Celestia is miserable.
A sample of one hundred lies told by a mare named Celestia. After all. How bad could one lie be? How bad could it be to keep lying? How bad is it when you can't stop? How bad is it when you don't want to? What about when you don't know how to?
[TEEN VERSION] Fillydelphia has a problem. Normally, this wouldn't concern a Manehattan mare like Coco Pommel. Most problems don't cost Coco Pommel friends, though.
[TEEN VERSION] Discord comes to Celestia, wanting her help to fix a problem. There is a Smooze in danger of attacking ponies! Celestia had no idea there was more than one Smooze.
A young Celestia is tired of her life as a wanderer and longs for all the luxuries of home. Her best friend Discord is unable to see anything but the best of her.
Bonbon is an ordinary mare who lives a happy, normal life in Ponyville. Her name is definitely Bonbon too. One day, she gets a request to perform a job that does not exist.
Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo need to do an interview for a school project. Fortunately, they have found the right pony to help with their homework assignment. Absolutely nothing whatsoever goes wrong.
The Cutie Mark Crusaders get an important talk from Princess Celestia after the Gabby Gums incident. Nothing whatsoever goes wrong in the process and zero extra-credit assignments are given.
Celestia and Luna are starting on a journey to find their parents that has taken them away from their home. When night falls in the Everfree Forest, how will they spend their first night alone?
Princess Platinum is in mourning after the death of Clover, her faithful companion. Unable to tell others just how deep their bond really was, the noble mare contemplates how the ways she got her hooves dirty to defend that bond.
For any pony, learning magic can be hard. For an Alicorn like Celestia, her mighty magic is even harder to master. Perhaps young Celestia's greatest difficulty with magic is the concept of power. A grand concept like that only lurks in her mind.
Cadance has the most wonderful surprise in the world to share with her beloved Auntie Celestia. In fact, it's the most spectacular, wonderful, and joyous news she has ever had to share in her life. Won't Celestia just love to hear it?
Lumina, the mother of Luna and Celestia, has a terrifying vision and immediately goes to seek advice on its meaning. Hopefully, the primordial spirit of the World Tree will be able to advise her on what to do. Even if it may not be what she wants...
Ever since Twilight Sparkle has taken the steps to princesshood, Ivory Scroll has become obsolete as Ponyville's Mayor-Mare. Nothing could be more devastating to her, and she aims to renew her sense of purpose in the world.
With his reformation at the hooves of Fluttershy, friendship for Discord doesn't seem like an impossibility. Now, he tries to regain a friend that he lost ages ago.
After years among the three pony tribes the Two Sisters fight their first great foe by themselves: King Sombra, the tyrant King of the Crystal Empire. Nothing goes as planned, everything, and everypony are not as they seem.
Late one night, Discord teleports into Twilight Sparkle's library and shakes her from her bed. He demands the unbelievable — a past-midnight pizza party. Twilight has no choice but to suffer the consequences and share a slice with the draconequus.
[EDUCATIONAL] Fluttershy has an absolutely lovely pair of tits that she wants to introduce to Discord. The draconequus isn't so sure if he's up for making friends with these humongous tits.
Twilight Sparkle ceases to be the world's only reincarnated pony when she sees a familiar sight in dreams. Except, it's one that she never remembered before.
Tomorrow, Cadance will turn six hundred and forty eight. Luna decides to visit her ahead of time, in her dreams. One thing is for certain: it will be an unforgettable night.
Sombra, like most self-respecting demon-gods is eager to have some fun with magic tricks, good books, and some pleasant solitude in his dreams. It's too bad his marefriend has other ideas...
On a casual visit to spend time her lover, Luna finds something rather startling. Sombra is in a dress. He says he can explain. How could this possibly go...?
Princess Luna goes on a date with Twilight Sparkle, but something isn't right and Twilight isn't sure what's bothering the other mare. After all, hadn't everything been perfect?
Personally, Celestia has had few surprises — oh, there were a few: the unexpected return of her dear sister, Discord, the Crystal Empire's, and Tirek's escape. But most things, she finds, are nice and calculated... until now.