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Princess Celestia will always hold herself with unfaltering grace.
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Mmmm I love that tasty, atmospheric, contemplative word vomit :)
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You heard it hear, folks. Jack of a Few Trades likes to eat vomit.
Now, write her smack around Luna's gun.
This was a good story, but I disagree with the idea that Twilight is a crack nut and that's how she's able to read so many books that quick. It's very outside the canons of the show for her to do drugs of any kind, and I don't think her speed-reading abilities matter enough to be explained. Despite that one critique, this is quite the voreable story. Color me impressed!
Love for a sequel.
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…Twilight isn’t in this story.
I'm a sucker for any kind of Celestia introspection, and this one delivers. That music box comparison? Chilling.
sgeez, tell us how you really feel you glue colored christmas ornament.
Ironic then that it's a group of hearts that saves your ass over and over and over and over again. Say hi to those bloody vines your godliness.
Pinkie Pie: exists
Celestia: Why do I hear boss music?
Keep telling yourself that sunshine, maybe one day it'll reflect reality. I'm guessing this is well before Twilights time because hoo boy is this chick nothing but pretentiousness wrapped in god complex wrapped in condescension.
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The description states it is far before Twilight’s time and the whole story takes place in the Everfree castle.
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Thank you! It was probably my favorite thing to shape the story around.
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Then I guessed correctly.
Celestia really needs a good psychologist she sounds insane.
this and its companion piece work so well together--what with celestia's pride and ego here, and luna's growing instability and jealousy she's forced to hide in twitch.
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Luna's piece was something I remember writing in one sitting, shortly after a panic attack of my own. This one was worked on somewhere over the course of a few days to weeks in various chunks. It was a very different process for each, but I'm always glad to see that they complement one another just as much as I intended.
there is too much stuff here. too densely packed. and nothing happens. all these metaphors or imagery or whatever it's called to get across just one single idea?
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Much like the prequel, it takes a simple action (in this case, breathing) and shows how distorted it is under instability and it's all-encompassing effects.