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Ice Star


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    In the ruins of a world they were never truly a part of two fillies travel with only each other as company, yet the elder starts to have doubts about their destination and wonders if everypony she loves is doomed to leave her. (EFNW '16 Finalist)
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This story is a sequel to The Dark Side of the Sun


For any pony, learning magic can be hard. For an Alicorn like Celestia, her mighty magic is even harder to master. Perhaps young Celestia's greatest difficulty with magic is the concept of power. Something so grand lurks only at the edges of her mind, beyond the preoccupations she has about the welfare of her sister and herself.

She's about to learn a bit about power today.


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Celestia nearly yelped and fainted as burning tore through her, igniting every emotion she never even wanted herself to see.

Try "A burning sensation."

7538408 I'm honestly surprised that was the only mistake...:twilightblush:

7538424 I just woke up. Either that or you're getting better.

TBH, I'm a little distracted right now.

7538428 *Thinks of all the comma errors past with a faint shudder*

Maybe...

The campfire was a problem, probably because it didn't exist, as a certain filly wished.

Celestia pursued her lips and stared up at the sickly orange sky,; the sun was much farther in its course.

Celestia tsked softly, for she knew that 'dropping' the bags that were supposedly lost was just an excuse for Luna to play in the snow that had hit the two wanderers now that they had strayed from the coast.

All the world was still, hundreds of years into their travels and the two little fillies had still not found another equine soul.

That's all I can find for now. Maybe Norris the Yogurt guy will take over for me while I'm gone or something.

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Thankies! I'm actually pretty glad I undeleted and revised this story.

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