• Member Since 11th Feb, 2012
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Thunder twister

Mad 'cos Bad



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Thank you! I always love hearing people's thoughts no matter what they may be! Thanks for reading!

Hey there! Thanks for writing the story, it is one of the better short pieces I have read recently. I really liked the way you wrote Lightning Dust here - she was very well characterised in a short amount of words. You also took the story in a different direction to how I though it would go from the sinopsis, and is slowly revealed as the story progresses, it was really well done.

I uh, hope this is what you were looking for - I don't normally leave comments or reviews as it can be a little difficult putting it all into words haha

Thanks for favoriting never forever! I'd love to hear what you liked about! Deuces!

Thank you very much for the fave on Rule of Three!

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