Perfect ending to a highly entertaining story. I know you'll probably get this a lot, but I'd love to see how that conversation with Cadence and/or Celestia goes.

Most of these chapters make me think of James bond...

Over all, I give this fic a...
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BEAST ENDING.

Thank you for writing this.

And now you write the Twilestia sequel, where Twily finds out that she's the only non-dragon in her 'family unit' to NOT have done unspeakable things to her mentor.

Think of the possibilities! "Helpful advice" from her family! Stern monologues about maintaining the family's reputation ... within Celestia's chambers, at least! Shiny and Cadence not wanting to give up their heat-season shenanigans! Taking tail-pulling to the next, dangerously magic-packed level!

EDIT: The final twist? Scratch out that 'non-dragon' qualifier above. DUN DUN DUNNNNN!

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That was the idea. And it was clever.

Now this is a good ending

10/10 to this fic

Could you please do fic about Twilight discovering this? please?

I kinda want to see at least a one shot detailing Shining, Celestia, and Cadence's time.

All this time I was expecting some hidden motive behind the mating. That celestia was enhancing every Captain of the guard with special genes to pass on to their offspring to produce a very strong breed of unicorn that turned out to be Twilight Sparkle. But I realized that'll only work if the males of the same bloodline became captain of the guard.

oh well, it's still a really good read. I loved chapter 9.

I call for a sequel, do I hear a hear, hear?!

Congratulations, my friend.

We'll see what comes after this sooner than later, I feel...

Can you do another one?

not going to lie.....that was a hilarious way to end a story

The only problem I have with this epilogue is that it makes Celestia look even worse in "A Canterlot Wedding." With only the show canon it can be claimed that Celestia only really knew Shining Armor professionally in his position as Guard Captain and was possibly a little distant with Cadance. So she missed signs that Twilight caught because Twilight knew them both much better than she did. In this continuity she knows them intimately in more ways than one. Yet she still suspected nothing was wrong even after Twilight's behavior should have clued her that something was off. If canon Celestia feels guilty about how she handled the situation this one could well be devastated.

I like how every chapter was the name of a James Bond movie except for: Pussy Galore, Shaken Not Stirred, and Never Say Never Again, and the name of the fic is the name of the 6th movie.

As always, it was great to work with you too on this CG.
It turned out better than I could have hoped and you should be quite deservedly proud of this piece.

short sequel with the first heat season with shining, cadence, and celestia would be amazing ...not needed but amazing well done overall sadly I can only upvote once call the chapter her majesty's secret service for the tie in

Sad that it ended, but in a good way. A satisfying, amusing and appropriately inappropriate.

That...was fucking great! Excellent work!

This story was great! Excellent work!

Awesome

"Should I involve Cadance in this?"

"Why, Shining... I incest upon it."

His own father might have passed away before ever speaking to him of Her Majesty’s Secret Service,

Well, I think we all knew that was coming. Perfect end to this story.

Hooray! And a happy ending for all. Especially Shiny

Twilestia Good End? I mean, Luna's her sister, Cadence is likely only an adoptive niece. Twilight's free and clear for full-relationship status...

Commence read.

A fine end to some crazy shenanigans.

Only for Future Twilight to have to deal with finding these things out.

Now this was a damn good story with a perfect ending and epilogue.

Bravo, good sir. Bravo.

I must admit, it was a really good Story. First I though it would be a simple clop story. But instead I got to read a REAL awesome Story. Don't get me wrong, there are a lot of Clop scenes, but the time between these is good filled.

I have to ask, will there be a sequel? Maybe about Luna?

Glad to see you followed through to the end. a lot of stories start off strong, and either lose steam, or drift away from their intended plot line. You managed to go full circle, complete it, AND name every single chapter in reference to a Bond film or story title

Hah! Hilarious

NL: "Shining... son... there is something important you should know about your mother."
SA: "W-what is it, dad?"
NL: "Twilight Velves is an absolute freak in bed. Let's all hope little Twilight takes after me."

One tiny little thing I'm missing is some kind of reveal regarding Feather Duster. I mean, you hinted at something very interesting there, but we never got to know what exactly her problem was.

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So, I'm not sure if you plan on continuing this in another story, but I'd be really happy if you did. Even if you don't, this story stands as a monolith on its own, and it is going to go down as one of my favorites, and definitely one I'm going to save to re-read now and in the future

If you do plan to continue it, I'd love to see Twilight included in this, quite nicely summed up by this guy:

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Either way, have a follow. This story was damn good great. Talkin' Tony the Tiger levels of awesome, here

Thank you good sir for this fine story.

Excellently done from start to finish, especially the echo of the first sentence. Thank you for a fantastic story of duty and booty.

And here we are. Nice ending, expected, but didn't diminish it in the slightest. Loved the story through and through. And the usual stuff everyone says (which is true, but it's too early and my brain is still half-asleep).

Sad to see it over, but this was a great story. Little disappointed that the Epilogue wasn't quite as funny. The possible implied lesbian incest between Cadance and Celestia wasn't unforeseen, but not something I feel matches the society well. Kinda wanted to see a Twilight freakout as she puts together "The Talk" she got from Twilight Velvet and later Celestia.

Enjoyed reading it, might comeback to read it again someday.

Bittersweet to see this finally finished loved it keep up the good work

Before I read this, if this a harem fic?

Please let it be not

good job everyone, i really liked this story

Wait how Twi freaks out if she learns during which performances was she conceived herself

Great story thogh, entertaining till the last word!

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No it's not a harem fic. You'd probably need more than two leading ladies for a harem story.

4679157 Thank you! I'm tired of being sabotaged by stories that turn into ones!

Hell of a ride. Hell of a ride.11/10, will read again. Any chance of Twilight going into the "family business"?

KNEW IT KNEW IT KNEW IT KNEW IT KNEW IT so boo! to all of you who doubted that shiny was going to pound the royal vag hahahahha

That was awesome. A great fic. What can I say that hasn't already been said in over 600 comments?! I've greenthumbed all your stories on this account (and you have a non-clop account right? Which one is that?).
Again, great work, greenthumbed!! Looking forward to seeing Growth Spurt finishing up, and whatever else you got cooked up.

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I actually don't. This is the only account I've got. I entertained the idea of having a non-smut account for a while, but I never actually ended up finishing any of my non-smut stories.

4682858 Cool. You got many non-smut stories half made? Anything interesting?

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I had a Sparity chapter fic in progress involving Spike and Twilight getting species-swapped where their magic switched as well, meaning Spike would have to learn to master unicorn magic enough to enact a counter-spell, except Rarity is so into his pony form that he faces a dilemma of if he wants to change back at all. It was my first attempt at ponyfic, actually.

Then there was another one starring the CMC with three concurrent plot-lines exploring each of their first romantic crushes. But then canon events shot a bunch of holes through the whole thing and it was sorta dropped, pending significant rewrites.

That's all I can think of off the top of my head.