An account of how Night Light and Twilight Velvet, parents of Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle, got together and fell in love (and how Princess Celestia helped).
So, is Celestia going to have to invite Velvet along next time she asks Night Light in to sort out her estrus? I can't imagine Velvet would wanna miss it.
He’d really need to reign himself in if he wanted to get her home without anypony seeing him sticking out in the open, announcing his plans for the evening to the entire city.
I wonder what their neighbors have to say… *Night Light and Velvet open the door to find a tired young stallion waiting outside* "The district residents send their congratulations to this happy couple, and humbly request that you install soundproofing. Oh, and a few others want to ask the lucky stallion what he takes to last eight full hours."
Quite the origin story for Shining Armor. Forged in the fires of the estrus season. Then tempered by a full night of passionate sex and the diamond hard erection of the captian of the royal guard.
Quite fantastic. Not much else to say about it. If you're goal was to make both an erotic and romantic clopfic, you couldn't have succeeded in either respect more.
Okay damn, this story just keeps getting better and better. It's well done and is one of the stories that made me come up the saying. Come for the porn, stay for the story. <-- mine, well I think's its mine. Though with the net that's highly unlikely. ^_^;
Well, yes. The vagina is at times referred to as the "honeypot" due to the fluids also being referred to as "honey". I'm supposing from context that 'mare-honey' is just there as a signifier for our benefit. Seems entirely normal to me.
I can just see how the next day plays out. -------------- (The next day) "Cake delivery for a Mr. Night Light." Inside the box, the cake read 'Congrats on da sex! - Pommel'.
That was like ten kinds of hot. Well done. 3101704 Trust a Sicilian to know the difference between reign and rein. The author should just be glad that death wasn't on the line. Or that Iocane powder wasn't involved in any way. 3102305 Night Light was definitely in before Shining was. i38.photobucket.com/albums/e132/whiterabbit75/mlfw2223-ba_dum_tis.gif
I, um... I can't really... I want to use a better word then good...
I wanna talk about how awesome the emotion was, about how it was both raw and soft at the same time and not really filthy at all. I really like... well, adore, really... I adore the fact that you've used sex as a subject matter, not as a focus. But I can't figure out a better way of putting it, 'cause my brain's sort of scrambled in a mixture of "D'awwthat'ssweet" and, "YEAH! NIGHT LIGHT! GET THE GIRL! YEAHHH, WOOHOO! YOU FUCKIN' DID IT! GO, YOU... YOU ABSOLUTE LEGEND!"
It's a genuine triumph, man, for both of them. I can really feel that four years of Velvet's frustration seeping out of every line. It's so sweet, I can only barely handle it, but it feels genuine, it feels real, you know? I love it. I really do. It's clearly not a story about sex anymore, it's an understanding of the difference between desire and love, the difference between fucking someone and making love to them. It's a story about love, damnit, true love, not just trashy teen romance love. And as far as the theming goes, I think that this was probably your intention from the get-go. Maybe I'm projecting a bit, but all of that... all of that and more shit that I can't even describe because it makes my head spin just imagining it, blended into a background of lust and love...
“You know what else happened in the movie?” she grunted back. “The stallion shut his mouth and fucked her.”
I adore your take on Velvet, so very much.
I've really been enjoying this story, pretty much all the way through thus far. The character interaction is excellent, I could be perfectly happy just reading Velvet, Light, and Pommel bantering. And good job making the sex actually part of the story itself. Too many clop works have some story, and then the sex happens and the story just stops while they fuck, and then maybe it picks up again afterwards. More often it just ends with sex, and the sex has no real impact on the story other than to be a sex scene. Your story doesn't stop when it hits a sex scene, but nicely incorporates the sex into the story itself, developments keep on happening even as things become saucy. Hopefully that makes some kind of sense, because I think you do a great job of it.
...and dammit, but pony sex shouldn't be that hot. Curse you for that.
Beautiful. I really have no other word to describe that last little bit, where it was pure lovemaking. Like, it actually brought a tear to my eye.
As for the rest of the chapter, fantastic as always. Like mentioned by others, I enjoy how you use the sex as a story element, not as the story itself. I've actually stopped midway through a lot of stories because they couldn't keep me engaged, the writing was a half arsed attempt at a lead up to sex.
“The stallion shut his mouth and fucked her.” I burst out laughing at this point, because I could only imagine the exasperated desperation she was feeling.
3322160 Anyone else notice how they fucked in a way that would obviously get her pregnant, all before they even said "I love you"? I don't think she used a magic condom or something, and nothing like that was explained. "Daddy, how did you and mommy get together?" "Well son, I told her not to be such a slut, and I made up for it by telling her I fucked your god and getting an erection, and then had a romantic night where we watched a porno, but she was so horny I had to go home and fuck her senseless, breaking all her furniture. Her vaginal juice tasted pretty good too, hot, sweet, and tangy, like a sweet orange. You wouldn't believe how much cum your mom can hold! Goodnight son" and then Shining armor became a sex slave for a changeling Queen to satisfy his strange sexual fetishes, and had a strange need to put sugar in orange juice.
So, is Celestia going to have to invite Velvet along next time she asks Night Light in to sort out her estrus? I can't imagine Velvet would wanna miss it.
"Reign" should be "rein", as detailed here.
Same here.
...Okay, not gonna lie, that was really freaking hot.
But the part of making love at the end was just sweet and cute.
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They say you learn something new every day. And so I have.
Thanks, and fix'd.
And that is how Shining Armor came into being ladies and gentleman!
Huh. Not bad, not bad at all. Some of the euphemisms damn near sent me into a laughing seizure though.
Mare-honey? Really?
Holy crap...no words can describe...how awesome this chapter is...
You are now officially my favorite author on this site. Descy is just going to have to live with being second.
(How have I not followed you before now!?)
I wonder what their neighbors have to say…
*Night Light and Velvet open the door to find a tired young stallion waiting outside*
"The district residents send their congratulations to this happy couple, and humbly request that you install soundproofing. Oh, and a few others want to ask the lucky stallion what he takes to last eight full hours."
I simply can't have this on my 'Read Later' list any longer.
THIS deserves to be Favorited!
I'm sorry, but I had to.
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Can't believe I missed those... even if it wasn't grammatically correct, rein would be the correct term for any ponyfic.
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This is the song of the story
Heeheehee! Duty.
Now we know where Twilight Sparkle get her hyper Yesses from.
Quite the origin story for Shining Armor.
Forged in the fires of the estrus season.
Then tempered by a full night of passionate sex and the diamond hard erection of the captian of the royal guard.
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"Yeah, yeah, Dad. Up hill, both ways, in the snow, with a size-enhancement spell. We know! You tell it all the time!"
3102111 Damn right it is.
If your erection lasts longer than four hours, consult a doctor.
inb4 Shining Armor
Quite fantastic. Not much else to say about it. If you're goal was to make both an erotic and romantic clopfic, you couldn't have succeeded in either respect more.
This is the best explicit romance fic on the entire goddamn site.
I really seriously wish I could fave something twice. Or possibly 3 times. This is just incredible.
that was pretty damn fucking good
i'dve liked more detail and having stuff drawn out a bit more and whatnot but...
unf.
Oh. My. God. That was the best clop I red on this entire site. I have no words to describe the feelz I have now. Bravo dude, bravo.
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There is a phrase for moments like this. Although its not so much a phrase but a single word. And that word is....
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!
Okay damn, this story just keeps getting better and better.
It's well done and is one of the stories that made me come up the saying. Come for the porn, stay for the story. <-- mine, well I think's its mine. Though with the net that's highly unlikely. ^_^;
Another great chapter! And it was so romantic! I cried tears... From my penis...
Exactly the right mix of romantic and smoking hot.
"...and that's how I met your mother."
Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle just stood there for hours afterwards, a little drool hanging off the edge of the young stallion's mouth.
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Well, yes. The vagina is at times referred to as the "honeypot" due to the fluids also being referred to as "honey". I'm supposing from context that 'mare-honey' is just there as a signifier for our benefit. Seems entirely normal to me.
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SHE SAID IT! SHE SAID THE TITLE OF THE CHAPTER IN THE CHAPTER!!!!
That was both smoking hot and a total tear-jerker at the same time. Raunchy sex and honest, heart-felt romance in one sitting.
LOVED IT.
That was actually rather hot. And incredibly adorable.
I can just see how the next day plays out.
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(The next day)
"Cake delivery for a Mr. Night Light." Inside the box, the cake read 'Congrats on da sex! - Pommel'.
I liked this chapter this much.
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Well that's just great.
All the clopfics I have favorited (not as many as thought I had) decided to update the same day.
Not that I'm complaining, but I have school in an hour. Really doesnt help at all.
This was AMAZING though, random R rated movies are the best
Two things- first, you missed a space,
Second- So that's where Twilight gets that...
That was like ten kinds of hot. Well done.
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Trust a Sicilian to know the difference between reign and rein. The author should just be glad that death wasn't on the line. Or that Iocane powder wasn't involved in any way.
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Night Light was definitely in before Shining was.
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C-C-C-CUM-BO BREAKER
Good!
I, um... I can't really... I want to use a better word then good...
I wanna talk about how awesome the emotion was, about how it was both raw and soft at the same time and not really filthy at all. I really like... well, adore, really... I adore the fact that you've used sex as a subject matter, not as a focus. But I can't figure out a better way of putting it, 'cause my brain's sort of scrambled in a mixture of "D'awwthat'ssweet" and, "YEAH! NIGHT LIGHT! GET THE GIRL! YEAHHH, WOOHOO! YOU FUCKIN' DID IT! GO, YOU... YOU ABSOLUTE LEGEND!"
It's a genuine triumph, man, for both of them. I can really feel that four years of Velvet's frustration seeping out of every line. It's so sweet, I can only barely handle it, but it feels genuine, it feels real, you know? I love it. I really do. It's clearly not a story about sex anymore, it's an understanding of the difference between desire and love, the difference between fucking someone and making love to them. It's a story about love, damnit, true love, not just trashy teen romance love. And as far as the theming goes, I think that this was probably your intention from the get-go. Maybe I'm projecting a bit, but all of that... all of that and more shit that I can't even describe because it makes my head spin just imagining it, blended into a background of lust and love...
Good. It makes it good.
I adore your take on Velvet, so very much.
I've really been enjoying this story, pretty much all the way through thus far. The character interaction is excellent, I could be perfectly happy just reading Velvet, Light, and Pommel bantering. And good job making the sex actually part of the story itself. Too many clop works have some story, and then the sex happens and the story just stops while they fuck, and then maybe it picks up again afterwards. More often it just ends with sex, and the sex has no real impact on the story other than to be a sex scene. Your story doesn't stop when it hits a sex scene, but nicely incorporates the sex into the story itself, developments keep on happening even as things become saucy. Hopefully that makes some kind of sense, because I think you do a great job of it.
...and dammit, but pony sex shouldn't be that hot. Curse you for that.
holy shit that is hot.
Beautiful. I really have no other word to describe that last little bit, where it was pure lovemaking. Like, it actually brought a tear to my eye.
As for the rest of the chapter, fantastic as always. Like mentioned by others, I enjoy how you use the sex as a story element, not as the story itself. I've actually stopped midway through a lot of stories because they couldn't keep me engaged, the writing was a half arsed attempt at a lead up to sex.
“The stallion shut his mouth and fucked her.” I burst out laughing at this point, because I could only imagine the exasperated desperation she was feeling.
3102174 does that mean Shining can only day in the same estrus in which he was forged
3082195 It probably bears mentioning that Shining Armor would get to say the same thing right back...
I don't usually read clop, but when I do, I read really well written and sweet clop.
3322160 Anyone else notice how they fucked in a way that would obviously get her pregnant, all before they even said "I love you"? I don't think she used a magic condom or something, and nothing like that was explained. "Daddy, how did you and mommy get together?" "Well son, I told her not to be such a slut, and I made up for it by telling her I fucked your god and getting an erection, and then had a romantic night where we watched a porno, but she was so horny I had to go home and fuck her senseless, breaking all her furniture. Her vaginal juice tasted pretty good too, hot, sweet, and tangy, like a sweet orange. You wouldn't believe how much cum your mom can hold! Goodnight son"
and then Shining armor became a sex slave for a changeling Queen to satisfy his strange sexual fetishes, and had a strange need to put sugar in orange juice.
3101937 He drinks bananna spider venom. Fun fact, the spiders that are in bananas give you a pant's banana.
Couldn't make cartoon unicorns having sex any more romantic.
"...and nine months later, we had you Shining."
Shining's response
3101937 OH MY GOD! YES!
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Eleven months, for ponies pregnancy lasts eleven months.