An account of how Night Light and Twilight Velvet, parents of Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle, got together and fell in love (and how Princess Celestia helped).
Did I miss something? Why was Night Light acting suprised about learning his father was asked by Celestia to do the exact same thing? Pretty sure Celestia told him at the beginning that she did the same thing with his father.
I'm hoping the epilogue is going to be an older, even drunker Pommel recounting sordid (possibly made-up) details of how her daddy became Celestia's fucktoy. Extra points if Twilight is romantically involved with Celestia (well, Cadence got Shining Armor, so she had to change plans).
How many relationships and marriages and families have you hurt or destroyed by seducing stallions away from unwitting mares like--?!”
My money is on Feather Duster being bitter about one of the stallions Celestia had. She blames the princess for not getting the guy. Maybe he actually did leave her, and she never knew why until now.
I'm hoping we'll see this conflict resolved as well.
Oh shit yes this updated! I will honestly say that this fic was the one that convinced me to get an account here so that I could get an email and read this update. Judging by your blog post, I don't have to wait too much longer for the end either. Thanks a ton for doing this!
4296658 I actually really want to know how that works here. Maybe Shining refused her? Or maybe Cadence was okay with it. Even better, what if they had a threesome?
4296671 I was thinking that maybe her father, coltfriend, or some other relative is/was a guard and was passed over for the position of captain in favor of Night Light.
Oh yay! Happy to see that you posted! I do understand why it's taken you such a long time (you should see how long it's been since I've posted a chapter...) but I'm glad you've gotten some good stuff down!
Threesome? What could possibly have given you that idea?
The genre of the story? Velvet still being on an adrenaline high after defending the most beautiful mare in Equestria and admitting to being totally okay with her sexual history (including that with her boyfriend), Celestia being decidedly infatuated at the moment with Night Light (that blush is sort of kind of a pretty big deal if she couldn't even repress it in that situation)...
Celestia encouraged Night Light to seek out Velvet. Velvet is totally okay with Celestia and, more over, sort of thankful at this point that she pushed him into the relationship a bit in the first place... and Night Light is probably slightly confused but surrounded by the two mares he loves and respects most in the world.
Hell, I've been in a threesome with less rationale involved before!
Or, being CarcinoGeneticist, it's all just going to result in a lot of talking and some more fantastic dialogue scenes, and I'm going to feel very silly for thinking about this so much.
“Look, you two just spent a good fifteen minutes arguing about who I will or won’t be sticking my dick into for the foreseeable future, don’t I at least get a say in the matter?”
No, I'm calling the threesome card too. Ok, not seriously. ...Maybe a bit. Not expecting it to really happen. But if it does happen, I wouldn't complain.
Hot damn... Velvet kicks ass. To clear this 'scandal', all Celestia would have to do is take a mate during her estrus that wasn't Captain Of The Guard.
...how old is Big Mac at this point in time, or is he just Lil' Mac?
I actually wrote that part of the chapter ages ago, but I always felt my canon support for that whole plot point was a bit weak, and I only really had a band-aid secondary example of a generic philosopher's stone. The new episode came up during my final editing pass and I immediately realized that spellbook was the exact missing piece I needed to make the whole idea of Magical Overload work and made sure to tweak that scene to include it.
Night Light gulped. Goddess above, that was a really difficult tone of voice to argue with.
Not to mention, sexy as all Hell.
By the goddess, that mare was scary when she got angry.
And he wanted to rut her all the more because of it.
Night Light gulped, and wordlessly followed the other two mares back toward Celestia’s chambers, uncertain fear and tension shooting through his mind and body.
4302375 Can but won't, I'd say. No pony fears Celestia's power any more than they do their own parents.
4300389 I thought for a minute she herself failed to become captain ('not having the parts'), but it'd be weird to end up a librarian after that, I suppose...
4314875 In the official comic books, in the story that describes how Shining Armor got together with Cadence, it's strongly hinted that Velvet is the author of Daring Do because of a small picture in the background of one of the comic panels.
So... Night Light, just after coming down from Celestia's Magical Overload (CMO ), knocks up Twilight Velvet. Shining Armor is born and is a magical prodigy. The next time they plan a little more. Each day after Celestia has a little fun with Night Light, while he's still hopped up on CMO, he boinks () Twilight Velvet, and gives her a hot injection of raw celestial magic. Some time later Twilight Sparkle is born. She's not just a prodigy, she's a magical freakin' powerhouse.
Celestia gets a granddaughter, once removed. (Yeah, I know that's not quite right, but the implication is highly appropriate.)
My first thought going into this was that this was going to be a spy-themed adventure romance story because of all the Bond references and "Secret Service." I was pleasantly surprised when I was squirted in the face with a romantic story with very interesting characters, many moments that had me laugh so much I had to stop to catch my breath, and sex that was well written. I couldn't put this down as soon as I picked it up and I finished this in one day in three sittings. It was fantastic.
The characters really won me over. Pommel is a lovable ass, Velvet is the coolest mare ever, Night Light is respectable in his maturity but at times a little bit too much of a prune, and Celestia is just as much a pony as the rest of them.
In all seriousness, this has become one of my favorite FimFics ever.
So, when confronted with this world-bending information about the mare who is older than Equestria, who raises the sun and lowers the moon every night, who has more power in her tail tip than is in a normal pony's entire body, Feather Duster's immediate reaction is to attempt extortion?
...
Mare! who the fuck do you think you are? Are you a fuckin' ass? Don't you know who the fuck she is? She obviously don't know who the fuck she is.
Intense! No other word to describe it! Love how Twilight has pieces of her Mom's fury, which boarders on scary, insane, epic rage time. :D it was so satisfying when Feather butt got her face smacked off too. :D
You are, as always, an entertaining inspiration! Cant wait for the next chapter!
4327708 AHH!!! It's always surprising to find new things you're a fan of, eh? And I thought my tastes were varied and diverse. Next thing we'll find out is that your choices in music are eclectic. Do you like disco, metal, pop, techno, soundtracks, and rap at all?
Oh yeah, the story. Hoping the next chapter leads to a threesome, with big Night Light getting having a go at the smaller Twilight Velvet.
"Orion", "Dusk Shine", "Gleaming Shield" lol. The other fan name for Night Light, and rule 63 versions of Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armor. Loltastic predecessor names, especially for Dusk Shine, who gets usually gets portrayed as being a bit silly. Caught wondering around as a massive stallion while out looking for a midnight snack. That's pretty silly.
Why isn't the upvote count going up more than once when I've been here clicking on it for the past five minutes? Why can't I give you all of my yes? There's just so much to give...
aw yis
I really liked this chapter
Did I miss something? Why was Night Light acting suprised about learning his father was asked by Celestia to do the exact same thing? Pretty sure Celestia told him at the beginning that she did the same thing with his father.
! Been wondering if this was ever going to see some more love, and Vel's bitch-out was excellent
I'm hoping the epilogue is going to be an older, even drunker Pommel recounting sordid (possibly made-up) details of how her daddy became Celestia's fucktoy. Extra points if Twilight is romantically involved with Celestia (well, Cadence got Shining Armor, so she had to change plans).
My money is on Feather Duster being bitter about one of the stallions Celestia had. She blames the princess for not getting the guy. Maybe he actually did leave her, and she never knew why until now.
I'm hoping we'll see this conflict resolved as well.
Oh shit yes this updated! I will honestly say that this fic was the one that convinced me to get an account here so that I could get an email and read this update. Judging by your blog post, I don't have to wait too much longer for the end either. Thanks a ton for doing this!
4296658 I actually really want to know how that works here. Maybe Shining refused her? Or maybe Cadence was okay with it. Even better, what if they had a threesome?
So... threesome?
4296671 I was thinking that maybe her father, coltfriend, or some other relative is/was a guard and was passed over for the position of captain in favor of Night Light.
4296601 no it was pommel that hinted at it and nightlight did not want to think about it
4297140 somebody is channeling their inner cloudkicker
Oh yay!
Happy to see that you posted! I do understand why it's taken you such a long time (you should see how long it's been since I've posted a chapter...) but I'm glad you've gotten some good stuff down!
And holy crap can I just say I love Velvet?!
OMFG AN UPDATE! SQUEE!!
I have been waiting for this for so bucking long! I gotta go read it again!
Also, pissed off Velvet is best Velvet.
THIS ... WAS ... EPIC!
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Threesome? What could possibly have given you that idea?
The genre of the story? Velvet still being on an adrenaline high after defending the most beautiful mare in Equestria and admitting to being totally okay with her sexual history (including that with her boyfriend), Celestia being decidedly infatuated at the moment with Night Light (that blush is sort of kind of a pretty big deal if she couldn't even repress it in that situation)...
Celestia encouraged Night Light to seek out Velvet. Velvet is totally okay with Celestia and, more over, sort of thankful at this point that she pushed him into the relationship a bit in the first place... and Night Light is probably slightly confused but surrounded by the two mares he loves and respects most in the world.
Hell, I've been in a threesome with less rationale involved before!
Or, being CarcinoGeneticist, it's all just going to result in a lot of talking and some more fantastic dialogue scenes, and I'm going to feel very silly for thinking about this so much.
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Actual quote from next chapter:
“Look, you two just spent a good fifteen minutes arguing about who I will or won’t be sticking my dick into for the foreseeable future, don’t I at least get a say in the matter?”
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No, I'm calling the threesome card too. Ok, not seriously. ...Maybe a bit.
Not expecting it to really happen. But if it does happen, I wouldn't complain.
Man, that girl has a temper.
Hot damn... Velvet kicks ass. To clear this 'scandal', all Celestia would have to do is take a mate during her estrus that wasn't Captain Of The Guard.
...how old is Big Mac at this point in time, or is he just Lil' Mac?
Props for getting Inspiration Manifestation in there straight after the episode. Good timing.
Yay! Update! Finally! :D
Let the CellyNightVelvet night Begin.
A new Chapter
Nice happy end for the 'left Note case'.
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I actually wrote that part of the chapter ages ago, but I always felt my canon support for that whole plot point was a bit weak, and I only really had a band-aid secondary example of a generic philosopher's stone. The new episode came up during my final editing pass and I immediately realized that spellbook was the exact missing piece I needed to make the whole idea of Magical Overload work and made sure to tweak that scene to include it.
Glad it worked for you as well.
That was the most satisfying verbal beat down I have had the pleasure to read in quite a while.
Good show sir. I tip my hat to your skill with the written word.
Now bring on the Estrus Induced 3 Way we've been waiting for .
4299021 Please let this "talk" be hot steamy clop. Hopes!
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Wow, talk about serendipity :-P
And awesome work as always; I really liked this chapter
Not to mention, sexy as all Hell.
And he wanted to rut her all the more because of it.
Threesome
THREESOME!
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Yep, certainly seems that Feather is taking this very seriously.
Probably one of three things: -
One of her relatives almost made guard captain but didn't, she thinks it's because Celestia didn't have the hots for him / her
She fancied one of the guard captains but was not reciprocated.
Her father was a guard captain and split up with her mom, she blames Celestia
4299802 Pommel still needs his "beauty sleep" +1
The librarian does know that Celestia is an immortal goddess that can kill/banish/imprison in an infinite amount of ways... Right?
4302375 Can but won't, I'd say. No pony fears Celestia's power any more than they do their own parents.
4300389 I thought for a minute she herself failed to become captain ('not having the parts'), but it'd be weird to end up a librarian after that, I suppose...
Spring is in the air, and with it...the scent of new chapters. :)
And it got edited right down to the last few weeks, no less. Also, Dusk Shine. :)
Yesssssssssssssss
Diggin' the update. Can't wait for more!
:D
Holy macaroni, that argument scene was INTENSE! I loved it ,
Wait a minute—is Velvet connected to the Daring Do books? (I’m going to assume she isn’t actually Daring Do/A. K. Yearling herself somehow…)
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In the official comic books, in the story that describes how Shining Armor got together with Cadence, it's strongly hinted that Velvet is the author of Daring Do because of a small picture in the background of one of the comic panels.
4315920 What comics?
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The official comic book series published by IDW.
So... Night Light, just after coming down from Celestia's Magical Overload (CMO ), knocks up Twilight Velvet. Shining Armor is born and is a magical prodigy. The next time they plan a little more. Each day after Celestia has a little fun with Night Light, while he's still hopped up on CMO, he boinks () Twilight Velvet, and gives her a hot injection of raw celestial magic. Some time later Twilight Sparkle is born. She's not just a prodigy, she's a magical freakin' powerhouse.
Celestia gets a granddaughter, once removed. (Yeah, I know that's not quite right, but the implication is highly appropriate.)
No!!!! Why did you end it there... I hate cliffhangers so much...
Now I have to wait for the next chapter to come out, and tht could take forever
On a different note, Twilight Velvet just owned that librarian. Wow, that was really impressive.
Nice. Meddle not in the affairs of Twilights, for they are vengeful and quick to anger.
Looking forward to more. Especially since Velvet is about to direct that same humbling mien at Celestia.
Holy mother of Faust...
Remind me to NOT get on Velvet's bad side
Glimmering Shield, Dusk Shine...I see what you did there.
Though I don't she the comics as canon, I see what you did there, too.
My first thought going into this was that this was going to be a spy-themed adventure romance story because of all the Bond references and "Secret Service." I was pleasantly surprised when I was squirted in the face with a romantic story with very interesting characters, many moments that had me laugh so much I had to stop to catch my breath, and sex that was well written. I couldn't put this down as soon as I picked it up and I finished this in one day in three sittings. It was fantastic.
The characters really won me over. Pommel is a lovable ass, Velvet is the coolest mare ever, Night Light is respectable in his maturity but at times a little bit too much of a prune, and Celestia is just as much a pony as the rest of them.
In all seriousness, this has become one of my favorite FimFics ever.
Thank you so much for the great story.
4299223 “For the record, I’m in favor of this idea.”
H--how could you? Where's the rest? Seriously?
So, when confronted with this world-bending information about the mare who is older than Equestria, who raises the sun and lowers the moon every night, who has more power in her tail tip than is in a normal pony's entire body, Feather Duster's immediate reaction is to attempt extortion?
...
Mare! who the fuck do you think you are? Are you a fuckin' ass? Don't you know who the fuck she is? She obviously don't know who the fuck she is.
She's Celestia, bitch!
Intense! No other word to describe it! Love how Twilight has pieces of her Mom's fury, which boarders on scary, insane, epic rage time. :D it was so satisfying when Feather butt got her face smacked off too. :D
You are, as always, an entertaining inspiration! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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AHH!!!
It's always surprising to find new things you're a fan of, eh? And I thought my tastes were varied and diverse. Next thing we'll find out is that your choices in music are eclectic. Do you like disco, metal, pop, techno, soundtracks, and rap at all?
Oh yeah, the story. Hoping the next chapter leads to a threesome, with big Night Light getting having a go at the smaller Twilight Velvet.
"Orion", "Dusk Shine", "Gleaming Shield" lol. The other fan name for Night Light, and rule 63 versions of Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armor. Loltastic predecessor names, especially for Dusk Shine, who gets usually gets portrayed as being a bit silly. Caught wondering around as a massive stallion while out looking for a midnight snack. That's pretty silly.
Why isn't the upvote count going up more than once when I've been here clicking on it for the past five minutes? Why can't I give you all of my yes? There's just so much to give...
So this is the Sparkle lineage... generation upon generation of pure, concentrated awesome.
Why does this not surprise me at all?