Twilight and Pinkie reminisce about their hidden feelings for each other, and finally decide to do something about it. However, Twilight's nightmares only get worse the closer they become.
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TwiPie! That new ship I like!
I will read this shortly.
I liked it, have a thumbs up and a star.
twinkie?
preread like given
EDIT: this is the type of fic that makes people ship a ship
The prose is a teeny bit wooden, and you didn't quite manage to sell the plot point about Twi actually getting night terrors about having hurt Pinkie (when the theme of the story seems to be Twilight's helpless, bemused confusion in the face of her feelings, the night terrors bit seems a bit too clingy and forthright). That said, there's a very nice purity of emotion here that's quite touching, and I want to see where you take this.
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Thanks!
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You're too kind, but thank you! I have to admit, I do the same thing with other Twinkie fics, though.
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I understand what you're saying. Thanks for telling me that, and I'm glad you liked it! I'll try to be a little more careful with the content so it's more believable. Once again, thank you!
Truth: Pinkie monologues are at least the third best monologues to write ever. Don't even bother checking a fact book, they haven't figured it out yet.
awwe sweet
What he said. And this is a particularly good Pinkie monologue at that.
awwe
Nice. I look forward to see how this goes.
1915183 No i'm not kind i'm serious this fic clearly displays many good canon reasons that twinkie is a possible ship. i judge ships on their believability. some only work in certain circumstances. in one fic i can accept dashmac.
EDIT: just as good if not better. this also describes my feelings for twilight sparkle as well.
1916618 TWINKIE! Awesome shipping name
I feel like I'm betraying TwiShy... Please don't hate me!
I kinda have a clue of how to write her now, thanks!
looking forword 2 more
1918585 give me a good twishy fic and i'll accept twishy
i don't see how twishy would work out really
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Don't worry. You can ship a lot of different couples! (I know I do.)
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Glad to hear it!
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Once Bitten, Twice Shy is probably my favorite TwiShy of all time. It's very well-written, so you should give it a read sometime!
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Thanks!
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Dashmac? I've never seen that before, but it certainly sounds interesting! I see what you mean; if a ship is believable or the author adds the elements that makes it seem that way, it's a better shipping read.
1919871 I don't ship this couple but I read it anyway
1919649 Interesting, I wonder the samething about this shipping
But go read the fic Dragon told you!
This may be angstier than you'd planned. Pinkie takes sadness very seriously, and Twi hates to blurt out things, and that's where you have them. Not that this is a problem or anything.
YOU SUCK! POST THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW!! THIS INSTANT!
what happened hnooo
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I wish I didn't have to torment the characters so much. 
Yeah, it is. I'm a little angry at myself for adding even minor amounts of angst here. This was supposed to be one of those romance stories where, you know, 'love conquers everything,' and now I've added nightmares...
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I'll try to get the next one up soon (if school doesn't get too hectic, tomorrow, probably). I knew I shouldn't have ended the chapter there, but couldn't really help myself.
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You'll see soon!
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No, that was the perfect spot to end it. It's a little abrupt, but it's that moment that leaves you teetering right on the edge, and then, all of the sudden: TO BE CONTINUED! You magnificent bastard you.
Turning interesting, it seems that you enjoy to hurt ponies too!
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It just kinda...happens by itself. This is how it goes down: I'll be writing and think, "Oh, wouldn't this story be even better with this in it? Imagine the touching scenes and the fun it'd be to write. And don't forget how close the circumstances will bring the characters together!" 
I'll take that as a compliment.
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I really do.
1929043 EEYUP!
by no means am i first
EDIT: was not expecting first.
anyway great chapter. i am trying to resist the urge to murder MR. cake now.
Great chapter my friend! The pace was okay by me, I mean, as you said, it's Pinkie. I reeeeally like where it is going; personally, no complaints.
Loved it
Holy crap! They both showed some freaking sense!
Well, till Twilight went and became a huge downer at the end.
You're talking about me?
Well, you got them into their characters and when Pinkie freaked out when she didn't see Twilight? I can imagine her actually doing that! Pinkie, you're so random!
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A lot of stories are like that, and most of the best ones are. I just decided to get to the good part, haha.
Mr. Cake and Mrs. Cake are probably up to something!
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Thanks, and that's a relief! I kept going back and adding details, feeling as if it was moving too fast...
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Glad you like it!
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Logic does that to all of us, doesn't it? Ruins the fun and makes you doubt everything without proof.
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Of course not!
Thanks! I personally liked writing that part out.
1951060 I took 10 chapter for the confession and 5 with them dating. There had to be a sequel!
I giggled on that part and on a few others, good job!
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It really didn't seem like it took that long, though.
When you say it like that...
As for my TwiShy, they started going out on the first chapter. I really cut to the chase there in comparison to this story! lol.
Thanks again, and I'm glad you liked it!
1951100 Anytime my friend!
YOU HAVE HURT FLUTTERSHY WITH THIS CLIFFHANGER!!! YOU JEEEEEEERRRRRRRK!!!!
meep...
awwe I liked it : more
Even when I belong to TwiShy, I enjoy this story... But I do not ship them!
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You don't ship them... yet.
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I agree! The things they put each other through really brings charm to the couple--not to mention the shipping name. Twinkie's just too adorable.
I used it for both of those reasons, heh. I'm glad you like it, and let me know what you thought of how she proved her love.
1978235 Don't count on that my dear friend!
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I think I'm just a sucker for shipping though, and that's why I ship so many different pairings. 
Stuff changes over time...
(TwiShy is still my favorite, though!)
1978270 I stand my word
There's no emotioncon for the feels!!!
It really is a veeery sweet story so far! I absolutely love it!
Not sure what else to say. Just... please update soon, kay?
Thank you for not killing Twilight
This was a beautiful chapter. The way Pinkie proved her love for Twilight by teaching her how to ice skate. I never would have thought of that. I am so glad you didn't cliffhanger this or commit ponycide. The lynch mob after your head would have been enormous. I wonder if Spike will be in any trouble for lying to Twilight.
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(Don't worry, I won't!) 
Yeah, I won't be pushing those limits here. 
As for Spike? You'll see!
I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on the next chapter now.
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Wouldn't that have been a plot twist?
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Thank you! It was something I'd thought of while going over the previous chapters. Ponycide? Nice word!
whoa That was close
awwe
