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MysteriousStranger


TwiShy, AppleDash and Rarixie lover and writer. Also a gamer. Something else you need to know is that I'm strongly against Alicorn Twilight.

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After one of Pinkie Pie's parties, Twilight decides to help her friend clean up. They end up spending a lot more time together, and nothing will ever be the same between them.

Cover by qaxis

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Comments ( 52 )

Then who do you normally ship pinkie with?

Anypony, this was an experiment :twilightsheepish:

how discoveries are made: an experiment goes good.
And this was a good read. :twilightsmile:

This was a good read. Short and very sweet :pinkiehappy: I would suggest you get someone to look this over though. There were some issues with grammar that wouldn't take too long to fix.

Couldn't fall asleep.
Got up to start writing new story.
Came across this.
Glad I stayed up. :pinkiehappy:

In the last sentence, I didn't read that Pinkie went to her room at first, so I pictured her turning around and face planting. Nice job.

I'm sorry for not getting around to commenting on this earlier--I fell asleep :twilightblush:--but it was great! I love Twinkie, (as you know by now) and this was very cute for a quick one-shot. My favorite part was when they were dancing. I'm glad you decided to write it, and I did enjoy it very much.

Also, it was nice of you to include how Pinkie gained her feelings for Twilight. That scene was adorable, too. Very fluffy. :pinkiesmile: Anyway, you did a good job, buddy! I can't wait to read more from you. :scootangel: As a sidenote... There's never enough Twinkie in the world. ;)

2078564 I'm glad you liked it, I hope this shows my appreciation for what are you doing for me! :raritywink:
Twinkie is very popular, it doesn't needs another author, I'll stick with TwiShy for now! :twilightsmile:
Once again, I'm glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy:

so let me get this straight you dont ship this couple then who do you see pinkie with? i ship raripie too i ship her with everyone but stallions.

2079574 I really don't know... Maybe Rainbow Dash a little :twilightblush:

aww this was cute! :pinkiehappy:. rofl i dont exactly have a fav twilight pairing i like her with all the mane six but rarity. but i do love her with pinkie. they just mesh so well when its written right. :twilightsmile: and this was definitely done right!.

2079938 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:
If you liked it, check my other stories, maybe you can actually see Twilight with somepony else! :raritywink:

2080007 :applejackunsure: i already read your other story. rofl. :pinkiehappy: if you check your "Future Plans" blog you might remember the fact i posted a comment on that you responded to it too. :twilightsheepish:

2080031 I'm oblivious sometimes... :facehoof:
Don't tell me you are watching me too :twilightblush:

2080038 um ehehehe well :eeyup:. :pinkiesmile: it's ok.

Nice little story :yay:
Although I still just can't see twilight and pinkie pie ever getting together. Pinkie Pie is just way too hectic and energetic for twilight, but either way good story :twilightsmile:

2080902 It's possible if written right :raritywink:
Check Blue Dragon's, it inspired me for this story! :pinkiesmile:

2080927 Yeah your probably right when I get a chance I'll have to check out Blue Dragons's story. :twilightsmile:

2081019 Please do, you won't regret it! :twilightsmile:
She writes them very well! :pinkiehappy:

2080902 i don't get flutterdash so i know that feeling fluttershy is too timid and sensitive to be with somepony like Dash. I just cant see flutterdash happening then again i cant see fluttershy with anyone other then Rarity or Applejack. either way twipie and appledash are my OTP so i may be biased :rainbowlaugh:

You know I usually only prefer pinkiedash but great story

well; I liked your Fluttershy x Twilight more... but this story is actually kind of nice. A lot to enjoy really :pinkiehappy:

2348687 Thanks, I like the other one too but I gave this shipping a shot! :pinkiehappy:

Ship ALL the ponies!

Nice story :twilightsmile:

i used to be stuck between twishy or flutterdash but now I no it shud be twipie and flutterdash
:pinkiesmile: :heart: :twilightsmile:
:fluttershyouch: :heart: :rainbowdetermined2:

3133460 Noooo! :raritydespair:
TwiShy, come back to TwiShy, I just did this for a friend! I don't ship FlutterDash! :fluttershbad:

3133460
Comment from a grammar (and spelling) nazi:

Your comment should be:
I used to be stuck between TwiShy or FlutterDash, but now I know it should be TwiPie and FlutterDash.

Firs. Of this have been on my RL list fore some time now finally got time to reading it. :twilightsheepish:
Second. Twipie is not my favorite, hell i have a problem to ship pinkie with anyone to random. But i will find someone for her at some point :rainbowdetermined2:
Third. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :raritycry::raritycry: you got all my feels in this as always. This is why you are a inspiration to me :scootangel:

3817707 And, as I said in the Author's note, I don't ship them! :rainbowlaugh:

Loved the story but I don't like it when both ponies already have feelings for each other. I'm the type of pony that likes relationships with development.:raritywink:

5220306 This was just a gift for a friend who likes this pairing. I really don't ship this couple so, the less people like this fic, the better :rainbowlaugh:
Thanks for commenting! :twilightsmile:

nice story i enjoyed it and ill admit that twipie is growing on me i more or less ship those who are opposite of each other on the mane six like flutterdash and rarijack but i also ship pinkiedash, twishy, and the occasional appledash

5487739 I wrote this fic as a gift for a friend. I don't ship them and I hate to see someone shipping them instead of Twishy because of this fic... :applejackunsure:
Also, I hate FlutterDash :ajbemused:
But, thanks for commenting! :pinkiehappy:

5487748 well sorry mate but its my personnal opinion and im really into opposites attract

5487760 I know... those relationships can't work out, but, if you ship them...

5487771 stoppit right there ya know that if ya mess with me i love shipping people together of course i wont do it on this site id do it on wattpad most likely AWWW i can already see it now id be so cute

5487794 Umm, what? Really, I didn't understand :twilightblush:

5487826 shush and i wont write a story about you

5487897 good though i just might anyways :trixieshiftright: cause im judt that evil mwhahahah

5489237 id check my wattpad periodicly if i were you or i might make it pony related and post it here. who knows?:ajsmug:

5489284 oh you are so fun to mess with i love it

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