Pinkie likes Twilight. Twilight likes Pinkie. They're star gazing together under the moon. Cheesy romance obviously has to occour.
Hope this fanfics is enjoyable for everyone who reads it. Feedback is highly appriciated, specially if I learn something from it :P
Thanks a lot to NotTheOP for editing for me once again, go give him some love!
Thanks to Jesse175 for helping me out whenever I wrote myself into a corner. Also he deserves all credit for the title! He's a good friend of mine and you guys should go check him out :)
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Cute
Really nice; the characterization's very well done. Not entirely sure what's up with the formatting, the line length seems pretty much all over the place, which makes it kind of tough to read. Liked nonetheless though, here be a good story.
Affinity, eh?
I have to admit that I would never have thought of such a good name.
As Ardensfax said, the text is on the left. I have no idea how that happened, but you should probably fix it.
And no problem, I'm happy to help whenever you just need some help
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1444071>>1444176 For some reason it bugged up with the Italics, I'll fix it now :D
Also OP, credit or the name goes to Jesse :)
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Okay. So it wasn't my fault after all.
And remember to congratulate your friend for me.
Best of luck for you, once again.
1444517 Thanks once again :D Also should be fixed now :)
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Great!
Yup, confirming that fact. Everything is back in the normal order.
1444479 Yeah, the italics on this site can be a bit dodgy sometimes.
I really liked this story! It was a sweet, cute, short little one-shot, just what I need when I'm bored at school. Thank you!
The ending couldve been longer, but other than that it was very cute
Oh Twinkie, why must you be so fattening yet delicious?
Well, hallo!
This was really good! Seriously
P.S.: Do you remember me? I'm R. Chase.
i like it, but it could be longer, not saying that it was bad, it is deam good romantic story, bro
1447205 Thanks Chase! :D
1449241 I need to practise writing longer indeed.
Ahhh Twinkie. Beautiful. I highly approve of this.
1504275 Why thank you for your kind words :)
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I'm a gigantic Twinkie fan. I just love pouncing on the newest ones.
1504285 Twinkie is a wonderfull ship indeed.
Aww, cute little story. :3
Awesomely cute!
Twilight's confession could easily be taken as an insincere statement aimed more at getting Pinkie to cheer up...but Pinkie dealing with that bit of ambiguity could easily be covered with a follow-up story to this one. the only other thing I could think of is that, even with the strong emotions at play, Pinkie's out of character a lot. She even asked Twilight not to laugh. :/ Oh well.
2029142 Yeah I decided to bring Pinkie a bit out of character in this one, to prove she can be all cute without being hyper at all times :) I am currently re writing this and extending it, so maybe you'll enjoy it more when it is?
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Personally, I enjoyed it, suspension of disbelief be darned.
Though I sure am curious as to what this is going to be like when you're finished revising :D
....gives me an excuse to reread something that was time well spent to read to begin with.
The idea of showing different sides to Pinkie Pie is awesome because one of the best things about the characters straight-off-the-show is that they're all have multi-layered personalities.
2029672 Thanks :) You'll have to wait a while before reading it though, my inspiration has been at -30% lately :P
Re-read this on a massive search for Twipie, and I'm glad I did. It's one of those stories that can be enjoyed multiple times.
I wonder how Pinkie would have handled a "But I love being friends with you and it makes me really happy that you admitted to feeling that way for me" followed by a hug. I thought Pinkie's immediate reaction to thinking Twilight didn't love her back was pretty much the most inappropriate response possible, it almost holds Twilight's reciprocation for ransom. It's very fortunate that the reader already knows that Twilight is in love with Pinkie Pie before this happened. (which, I'm starting to realize, is actually kind of rare. Hardly anyone pulls off displaying a mutual attraction before a confession)
And it's not like Pinkie Pie hasn't overreacted in the past.
Now onto the next. Now that the browsing features on this site allow me to easily zero in on Twipie, I have a lot of fics to go through XD
Drat. I can't upvote this.
Because I already did.
They just realized they like each other they wouldn't kiss!!!!!!!!
4781960 Hush and enjoy the cute sappy romance story about pastel ponies.