• Published 2nd Dec 2012
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Walk Softly - darf



Snails gets teased by DT and SS about his dick-size - the reality surprises them WITH SEXY RESULTS.

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Comments ( 77 )

I have never liked Diamond Tiara or Silver Spoon but i'll give this a read :3 seem as how darf wrote it xD

In before feature box. :pinkiehappy:

I'll add more to this comment after I've read it.

Kinky.

FIRSTly I must say: I'll be reading this later

EDIT: Damnit! not first.

Luz
Luz #5 · Dec 2nd, 2012 · · 1 ·

*read later*

... Oh dear.

That's about all I've got to say.

I THOUGHT WE WERE TRYING TO AVOID THE PEDOPHILE PARALLELS

Hm...commence read.

I will be giving this a good read, so expect a really long and thoughtful comment tomorrow.

Uhm... I... Hmmmmm...:applejackunsure:

1727742 You replied to a comment that, for whatever reason, doesn't exist
and your comment doesn't exist either :twilightoops:

1728227 Darf's butthurt, :rainbowkiss:

1728236
i don't see the reason to leave comments with videos posted on them that are along the lines of 'why is this story on this site', or even more inane, 'why are there multiple chapters'
plenty of people have had stuff to say about my stories that has been less than positive, all of which i've left around
the one i deleted was just the opposite of something worth viewing
in addition to that guy apparently looking at my other stories and saying he was going to 'rip them apart' (in what i can only assume is a review)
just
really, what is the point?
if you want to share videos and say things without value, please do so elsewhere

1728249 Hey, I didn't share any video. So calm down. I believe my friend "Atlas Nebula" was the one who did so.

1728258
yeah, hence my explanation of why i deleted his comment
and yours, which was literally just a quote from the lyrics of the song he posted
i'm not 'butthurt', i just don't care for that kind of stuff being posted in the comments to my stories
i learned my lesson after the image macro war on drop the bass
so
sorry if i seemed upset

1728249 Yeah, he's butthurt.
For a guy who writes the kind of stories that he does, he're surprisingly easy to piss off.
Which will make the MPPT3K crew's criticism of his work all the more satisying. :trollestia:
1728258 I'd give you a watch but internet explorer won't let me. :applecry:

1728276
i don't see the part where i seemed upset
but
okay
for posterity's sake i'll leave these comments here, but if you could refrain from posting similarly inane stuff in the future it would be appreciated
thanks

1728271 It's cool man.By the way, this story was awesome! :pinkiehappy:

1728276 I've not been pissed at any point in the conversation :rainbowlaugh:

1728298
Calm friend. We are all part of the community here. Let's just move on from this.

Well sir i read it all the way through, as with all stories i will make a ttept to leave a comment about this that will interest others to read it as well.

Well, i have been on this site for almost 8 months, i have read stories of ever shape and concept but this one, i dub it the fourth best filly clop on site.

Three reasons:

One: Foalfooling is a hard concept to write about, just for it alone gets a +1 because it is looked down apon
Two: The chaters remained true to there personality, given the situation.
Three: Never in my entire life on this is have i ever been tempted- i really mean this,- to actually clop to a story. (and boy, i was really close to actually clopping, i really was.)

I tip my hat off to you sir.

Gahhhhhhh.

Great story, but gaaahhhhhhhhh.

Seriously, why did you have to cut it off there! No implication of wtf happened afterwards?! You cruel cruel author you.

Amazing, but cruel.

1728298

Ignore the trolls, and if any supposed group comes and gives you grief over it, take it to Knighty and be sure to mention who set them on you.

Max

I demand some sort of epilogue, this was so hilarous, little whores i call them :rainbowlaugh:

Snails is way too good for his own good.

Hmmm... I hate DT & SS... but I like darf's work.... Oh, why does life have to have choices like this dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png ?

Well, your fics are always excellent and the concept sounds promising, so let's give it a shot.

i planned to only read one chapter but damn was so extraordinary that i couldn't stop reading until the last chapter. are all your stories this addicting? at any rate if i could like this story 10 times over i would, it was so worth tossing away my night plans over.

1728011
Who's the artist of your profile pic? Seems really familiar. Or just what's the name of your profile pic?

I now approve of Snails x Nice!Silver Spoon.

1729352
it's more beta!silver spoon than anything, but i approve of your approval regardless

1729367
Thanks for the correction, and I approve of you approving of my approval.

:pinkiehappy:well written but needs more if you have the time an epilogue or another short chapter would be amazing

meh, i dont like snails but i'll read this anyway

Awesome!:pinkiehappy:

That... Was entertaining. Too bad the fact they were kids made the reading awkward. :S will there be more?

1727820
...How is that pedo? They're the same age.

1733788 I'm referring to writing underage sex isn't helping the fandom's image

1733804
I just picture them High school age and the awkward goes away. I do, however, see your point.

Comment posted by Jake The Army Guy deleted Jul 10th, 2015

Wow... Just wow... This was unbelievably well written and so sexy.

I don't know what else to say except, I came!:rainbowwild:

Actually, I do have something else to say....
Someone who is good at this type of story should write a sequel.
I mean... It would be really entertaining to see how this develops.

I personally imagine that DT just couldn't resist coming back for
more of that after getting fucked into a sensation-addled daze.

Felt bad for Silver Spoon, I liked the story nonetheless.:moustache:
I'd love to see how that relationship develops.

1729352 Brohoof!

Also, very impressive ending, does not mean the two villians will change their ways but they will learn something from this experanice....never judge a male by their personilty...I loved it, though I really hate DT:flutterrage:

OH GOD.
You totally did it.
Alpha DT really is the best. :pinkiehappy:
Just another wonderfull work from you.
I even got a non-brony friend reading one of your story and was all "WTF?! It's talking about a little girl show, why is it so... good?"

You make me feel, make me horny and make me laugh, and all at the same time. That's just too good.
You're some kind of bronified hideo kojima.
image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2012/49/1354623061-1349564385124.jpg

And, you really need to make a donation button :pinkiecrazy:
And write what's happening next.
And write an Anon X Trixie.
And a Discord X Celestia.
Just do something :flutterrage:

Well, well, well. I never gave it much thought before, but coprolalia is actually pretty fucking hot.

Awesome story. I didn't get to read it all at once but I kept thinking how wonderful it would be for poor Snails to turn the tables on DT. And then it happened! Damn bitch got what she deserved. Everypony felt in-character, which for a sex story involving young fillies is saying something. Some grammar/spelling issues in a few places, but pretty solid overall. Good job!

Well... I rarely have an orgasm while reading.

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