I could clop to this.... >.>

First ch. poor snails
The rest: uhhhh wow snails uh you get them dog 0
Great story and the characters action are exactly like I would have thought
P.s. may be you can read my story it's called my day in ponyville

I came.

Wow... This is hot! There is just something about this that really stands out above quite a few clopfics.

Who.....DT is really a bitch, poor Sliver Spoon, I like her the most of all....damn. Snails can't do shit....but hey, free fuck so what you gonna do? A few errors here and there but it's all chill, onto the next one!

Welp....

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BRING ME ANOT- Oh hey look another one!

Chapter 2, and considering how good chapter 1 was with regards to the content, I’m certainly eager to see how this goes.

… “Snails’ couldn’t quite place” – No need for the apostrophe in this one.
… “new word. Snail’” – Quoted as typed to be found, but yeah, it should be “Snails’” rather than “Snail’”.
… “You’re really luck I feel bad” – ‘luck’ should be ‘lucky’.
… “in memory , before” – There should be no space between “memory” and the comma.

... Wow, no others that I noticed... Huh.

In terms of the story, really, what is there to say that I didn't say before? Well... a bit. Silver Spoon has character (of sorts), but the changing 'perspective' made some of this feel rather strange to read. It pretty much began entirely as a "Snails' Perspective" story (with a couple moments of exceptions, like Cheerilee and some Diamond Tiara), but here it mixed itself up. Then again, there were three focus's of attention compared to "mostly one", so I guess that's excusable.

Back to Silver Spoon, I kinda hope more happens with regards to her character. Maybe not even actions, but the whole 'repressed' thing was rather emotional, compared to how physical or psychologically driven most of the chapter had been.

Well, onto Chapter 3.

“Come on! Don’t you wanna get hard so you can fuck my tight little pussy with that giant cock of yours?”

hahahahaha.
mando, pls stay

“Just… think about something that gets you turned on. What got you so hard before? Think about that so I can apologize and leave you alone with a lifetime of loneliness on account of your freakish dick.”

BWAHAHAHAHA!

That's the part where i totally cracked up. Awesome story, bro!

shimmering stallion why do you to ruin the fun are u the capitilization police