• Member Since 23rd Oct, 2012
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The Princess Rarity


Quirky teenage girl who writes about cartoons & has an obsession with sparkly things & cute dorks. Goes through life following by Dr. Seuss's wise words; "You have to be odd to be number one."

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When Rainbow Dash finally builds up the courage to ask Fluttershy out; and surprisingly, when Fluttershy says yes; the both of them plan for nothing but a simple, quiet date; no one else...

However, when Pinkie Pie finds out about it, she has other plans...

(WARNING: The usual Pinkie Pie WTF'ness will ensue.)
(Also, fanfiction reading here.)

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Comments ( 38 )

Ha! Silly Pinkie Pie! I rather enjoyed this story. Well done.

I'm so glad I don't know Pinkie Pie! I would be so embarrassed if she started singing that on my date! :derpytongue2:

Hehe! I liked this! I like Pinkie's randomness and songs so.. double yay for you! :yay::yay:

Go Flutter Dash! Loved this and damn, Piknie can't keep out of anyone's business....shit, poor Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash....very happy for them though, really like this and many other pairings:pinkiehappy:

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Oh my stars, I'm gone for maybe an hour and my story's been posted and I get four loving reviews!

Quadruple yay! :yay::yay::yay::yay:

1505090 Ha, nice refence to Bunnie Rabot from Sonic the hedgehog, she likes to say oh my stars a lot as well. And your welcome, I'm just a loyal bastard of a fan, can't wait to see what you will create next, you need any help, ideas or advice you know I got your back, peace.

1505111 :pinkiecrazy: Actually, I was referencing Rarity, but ok, I guess a Sonic character works too, LOL.

But, of course. If I'm ever stumped, I will go to you :pinkiehappy:

1505115 Rarity said that? Huh.....when?

And I'll do the same for you Princess......how does an idea of making Rarity an alicorn and the goddess of wealth sound? You can add Rarijack if you wish....I like that idea.....huh, maybe a bit of Pinkie Dash, or Flutter Spike or ever Spilight....or hell even Rariluna if you wish.

I'm sorry, what was the question? And Maybe a different goddess may be needed, because Avarice is the Element of Wealth and dark half of Rarity so not sure if that would work out so well...hmmm.......maybe the Goddess of Fashion, if such thing is possible...I'm sure you'll figure it out if you like the idea:derpytongue2:

1505171 Dude, she says that a lot! :rainbowlaugh: Where have you been?
And... Rariluna? :rainbowderp: The buck did I just read? Is that even a legit ship? :rainbowhuh:

1505179 I have never noticed that :rainbowlaugh:

And Rarity/Luna if you wish, it's just an idea for a new story if you want I just get punch in the face by ideas when it wants me to think though I always have trouble with my own stories, it's very odd.

1505200 Haha, I think we all have that problem :twilightblush:

Oh, Pinkie....
Actually, that is totally something she'd do.

One word. D'aww!!!!:yay:

So cute! :pinkiehappy: Poor Rainbow though, all she wanted was one simple little date with her beloved Fluttershy...and this happens. Pinkie, no no no! You don't do this one somepony's date!!

This was great. :pinkiehappy:

1505211 True that....so, good idea or not?:applejackunsure:

:rainbowlaugh: That's typical Pinkie. I mean really, that's exactly what I can see Pinkie doing.

double fudge cupcake with strawberry icing

What?

Also, RariLuna is terrible ship. *sage nod*

1510879 I dunno! :rainbowlaugh:
Double fudge with strawberry icing sounds really good to me, LOL :pinkiecrazy: I know nothing about baking and desserts (only how to eat 'em) so... :twilightblush:

Hehe, cute! >w<

That's a very useful moral.
Thank you.

um more please :yay: :rainbowkiss:

Somehow I kinda figured pinkie was going to sing that... Cute story :yay:

"... You think I'll do ok?" the cyan pegasus frowned down at her red velvet cupcake with chocolate icing. "I want to make sure Fluttershy is cool with everything; I don't wanna upset."

I think you're missin' a word or three there. :facehoof:

Other than that, I'd say this is a fine piece of fan fiction, and you ought to be proud of it. :twilightsmile:

1620613 Shoot. Thanks. I'll edit that now.
But I'm glad you liked the fic! :pinkiehappy:

I laughed when Pinkie went Disney on Dash's ass :heart:

Cute story :scootangel:

1673630 Thanks :pinkiehappy: Lol, tbh, I can actually see Pinkie doing that in my head, sooo :derpytongue2:

Lovely and silly. :twilightsmile:

I think you could have expanded a little at the end on Flutters and Dash's feelings, but tis good regardless.

Dammit, how come I have missed this? This is pure gold; I have had so much fun reading this :twilightsmile:
Your style is amazing, yet simple and understandable - something that I've yet to reach :raritywink:

You seriously need to write an OctaScratch! Like, really :twilightsmile:

I would love to write a collab with you someday :heart:

1857344.... Pinch me, I'm dreaming.
You wanna collab w/ moi? Silly little me, with random ideas in her head?
Josh, don't play.
But yes, if you are wondering, I'm writing something for my beloved otp. Why wouldn't I? :)
Thanks a million for thinking my randomest work is gold.

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No, I'm serious! I mean, really; for some reason, I haven't checked your stories before today, and now I'm reading them all at once, and hell, I really like your style. It's breezy, smooth and very close to the reader. It's something I have to aim for :twilightsheepish:

Yay for OctaScratch :yay:

1857362 Wow, haha, I'm just... wow... :twilightblush: Thanks.
I always actually thought that my writing style was just unprofessional, to be honest, compared to the stuff I've read. That never stopped me, of course, but, y'know, I try. I guess you kind of say that my writing style kind of reflects on my personality, though, because I often write my stories on how I would read them out loud. I don't really know if that's a bad thing or not, but whatever. If people like it, they like it. If they don't, their loss. (<--- And that's the odd thing. I'm all, "If you don't read my stories, I don't care.", but once people compliment me, I get so modest. Awkward much? Yes, yes, I know it is.)
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I have got to stop rambling.

xDDD Funny and sweet. I like it.

*Grins* Very cute and silly fun. Thank goodness for no evil eels in their case :rainbowlaugh:

Diabetes levels cute, too many scene breaks reduce immersion.:rainbowkiss: :heart: :yay:

Pinkie Pie popped out of one of them, holding a sign that said, in big bold letters, MAKE A MOVE, YOU SILLY FILLY!

This broke me :rainbowlaugh: Hilarious and adorable:yay:

Oh Pinkie... :facehoof:

Flutterdash ftw :rainbowwild:

I was actually in the play the Little Mermaid yesterday!
I played Flotsam, the eel that kidnaps Ariel.
Also, (in the play at least) those are not the words to the song. (Unless your using a extended version or some other version.)

Well that was fun. :pinkiehappy:

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