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The Princess Rarity

Quirky teenage girl who writes about cartoons & has an obsession with sparkly things & cute dorks. Goes through life following by Dr. Seuss's wise words; "You have to be odd to be number one."


What happens when Octavia, Vinyl Scratch, Lyra and Bonbon all decide to tackle on the game of Everfree? They have to face the famous Slenderpony, that's what. Chaos and hilariousness ensues.

I don't own the cover image, and I'm actually looking for a better pic. Also, this fic has slight LyraBon and OctaScratch shipping, if anyone's wondering, but it's mostly just comedy between the four mares. The story was inspired by this video and is just a little something I decided to write to get over my writer's block.

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I thought perhaps Bonnie was a bit OOC at the start, perhaps. But still, good story.

"Better run, better hide, he gonna get you!""
"Better run, better hide, he gonna get you!""


""Seriously, I mean he isn't that creepy or anything.""
That's what I keep telling my friends, but do they ever listen?

Heh. That was a pretty good story, but...no, I shouldn't say...ah well, it was really nice.

i scared of slender so reading scared pony is exatra funny and i am never playing that game

I've never played that game, nor do I plan to. Another note: this was very amusing. Now I have to look up what those pictures look like.

>>>It's impossible... like stapling water to a tree." >>>

*Alondro freezes water and then drills two small holes through it at the precise distances apart such that he can then staple said sheet of frozen water to a tree*

You never specified conditions. Only that 'water' was impossible to staple to a tree. I have done it.

I can also kill Slenderpony. It's all about knowing the conditions... :trollestia:

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Okay then!


That was a good read, it's always amusing to see this group of background ponies have the spotlight, especially on subjects like this. Great story! :pinkiehappy:

I was going to read it, and then I saw that it had slight Lyrabon and Vinylscratch shipping. To that, I must decline.

2289918 what? what shipping just a touch of lyra and bon bon and it was just k-i-s-s-i-n-g song

ok, at the end you said that the personality of the four mares makes this story fun to write. my question is: how the buck can you tell personality from NEVER ACTUALLY HAVING ANY LINES TOGETHER?

So glad I stopped to read this, it was really good

So glad I stopped to read this, it was really good

I really don't see why you needed to warn anyone about a light ship.:applejackunsure: This was full on friendshipping. What guys need to understand is women (Mares, whatever:ajbemused:) are much more affectionate then males. So Lyra comforting Bon Bon because she got scared is an extremely normal thing among girls and has virtually no romantic intention in the real world.:moustache:

Hilarious. I've haven't played Slender yet but I already know how to play since I watch Pewdiepie play it. Slender doesn't scare me but I hate the freakin jump scares.

Congratualtions with having the stupidest thing you ever wrote in the magic box.
I liked it a lot, these little silly stories, their nice to read.
Very good job on this.

2288340 What the hell are you talking about? :rainbowhuh: She doesn't have any character. And until the show gives some kind of personality guidelines, anything can go with undefined characters.
Anything. :ajsmug:

She can be a Stallion who took a sex change operation who likes to go dumpster diving for all we've been provided regarding her character! :derpytongue2:

Or prehaps likes going into the everfree where she runs a hydra milk farm, and portals to other dimensions where she collects alien nutrients for said hydras. :pinkiecrazy:

Get it? :)

My brain turned this entire story into a Youtube "Lets Play" video :rainbowlaugh:
Nice job!

Change the characters to me and two of my bros + axuillary coard to hook up to a t.v. = STORY OF MY LIFE.
This story had a smile on my face all the way through. Increadible job bro.

I read this before it hit the box! ^_^ /hipster
Awesome story, but not your best, definitely. Well, as always, I thoroughly enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Love it
this story kinda describes me and my friends playing slendy one night
without the scardy Bonbon (just guys that think they are tough and they could take it like Vinyl) :rainbowlaugh:
but hey awesome story

DUDE make a series outta this where these four play scary games! :flutterrage::derpytongue2:

2291127 Aww, I was gonna save that if he specified that it had to be liquid water. Then I could have been all like, "Ha ha! You didn't specify that it could not be held in a container! I win again!"

YOU'VE RUINED MY PLANS FOR THE LAST TIME!!! *fires mass drivers at your home country from his evil space base*


Reminds me of the time my friends and I were playing Slender at 4 in the morning. Good times. :moustache:

How do you.... What i dont even....NO DEAR GOD NO!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
But sriuosly (yeah i know its wrong dats how i roll) i mean the game is scary but i mean its not scary enough to where you SCREAM.... i means rlly it may be scary but it aint THAT SCARY....

Comment posted by Brony Tom deleted Mar 20th, 2013

I was half expecting for Slendy to be there at the end. Nevertheless, I like it, keep up the good work. :heart:

Hah hah! Stapling water to a tree! :pinkiecrazy: Gunna use that someday errday...

da faq happend in the end :derpytongue2:

2292969 They wanted cookie dough. Who doesn't? :derpytongue2:
(Aka, I was lost on how to end it.)

2292971 COOKIE DOUGH?!?!

2292980 hey I'm pinkie pie what do you expect?!?


Homeworld? That's the first thing that came to mind. :rainbowhuh:

2291156 I say she's a druggie. The only reason she makes candy is so she can sell it to make purpl drank

While Amnesia is far superior, and I hate Slender with a passion, this story is well-written. Slender never did scare me, while Amnesia terrifies me.

Good job!

You know, I saw the old Slenderman pics and thought they were creepy.
People started going nuts over the game, and my friends kept telling me how scary it was.
So I played, with them watching.
Got 5 pages the first time, then I got Slendered.
My friends all jumped back, one of them shrieked.
Me? "Drat, I died. Let's go again."

Comment posted by keyser-soze deleted Mar 20th, 2013

I grew up up with three brothers.
I am not brave. I am just very very jaded.:ajbemused:

2293358 *detonates a Reality Bomb and destroys the universe!* Thank you Davros, for the most ridiculously over-powered weapon of all time! :trollestia:

2291156 You have just created some glorious headcanon, good fellow.:moustache:

Cute story.
If these four made a face-cam video of this on YouTube, I guarantee they'd get millions of views.
P.S. Slender isn't scary.

Restores universe with Pinkie Pie randomness and sends all reality bombs in the void by telling Discord they would destroy his playground. Also got him to set you back at the space station with Pseudologia Fantastica and friends next to you.
Have fun. :pinkiehappy:


2294068 How... unglorious...

It's impossible... like stapling water to a tree

*uses Ziplock bag

Then they unlocked 20 dollar mode. :rainbowwild:

I think this was good, but in all honesty, Slenderman isn't even that scary compared to other monsters. I mean, Pennywise, "It" from RE4, grunts from amnesia,MOTHERFUCKING REGENERATORS, things like that. Don't get me wrong, the game is scary, but he's not that scary standalone, and the game provides no sense of completeness when you finish it, because you just fucking die. So yeah, my opinion on slender/slenderman

And Calvin and Hobbes fucking rules

Very nice

I LOL'd. You deserve a decent applaud!

*clap* *clap* :pinkiehappy:

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