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One came for a weekend getaway of relaxation, a hard earned reward after a grueling exam.
The other came for a weekend of awesomeness, to dominate and show just what she’s made of.
Straying eyes and a chance meeting brings these two unlikely ponies together, but after some time in Las Pegasus, will they stay that way?
Set before the events of season 1.
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Is the chapter title also a reference to the first couple lines of a well known New Order song?
Every time I think of you
I feel shot right through with a bolt of blue
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Can't say I know the song. "Bolt from the blue" is just a saying I know I've heard before. Or maybe it's "Bolt out of the blue." Either way.
Okay this is a very interesting one here and I never really thought of that so it looks like shining armor wanted to celebrate in Las Vegas of all places after his test to become the royal guard but then he met a female Pegasus named Rainbow Dash and apparently he really was mesmerized by her and she knows it too and he really can't get out of his mind of her and he saw her again and this time they talk to each other and it's really Pleasant until Rainbow's mother showed up and talking about some embarrassing things of course but I know she means well after that he returned back to the room and basically just hang out at the balcony but he wasn't alone again rainbow return to him again and apparently they have a pretty strong connection with each other and I got to say it is pretty cute and both of them share a kiss with each other which that's pretty sweet and it looks like she really wants him to be at the race and he won't miss a thing let's see how this will work out next time
Pretty nice story so far. One minor thing, and I may be wrong on this, but it seems Windy Whistles knows Shining Armor's name without anyone saying it.
I mean we already knew that she doesn't like pies
A nice and pleasant break from The Horrors.
This was a pretty nice one so it looks like the race is beginning and shining armor really needs to get there but then bump into windy whistle and looks like he got himself drag with her and Rainbow was pretty nervous but she was pretty excited as well after all the practice that she did she won Victorious and Rainbow saw Shining Armor and they both wanted to have a date with each other which that was really nice and they basically talk to each other but it looks like shining armor told rainbow about the letter and it could be from Cadence but for today they just want to concentrate and it looks like they really wanted to have this moment with each other while it's still young
Well I would say this was a pretty nice story again but sort of kind of bitter sweet as well because we all know what's going to happen but at least Shining Armor and Rainbow Dash have their moments together but unfortunately reality has to come sooner or later now I don't know this will affect if they ever see each other again but who knows this was a pretty good story keep up the good work
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The Horrors return soon, though. I'm writing sobbing ponies as we speak.
A bittersweet tale in so many ways. Very enjoyable.
This was very good. :D
I wish there were more chapters to the story the store is almost too good to only have three chapters.
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Yeah I wish there was too. I left it open for a sequel or continuation of some sort in case I get the time but I have a couple of other projects I need to attend to first.
I really loved this, and I second any plans for a sequel. Shining and Rainbow are both written to be so fun, and capturing them at this inflection point really highlights how they complement each other. You've built them up so well that I really want to see what happens a few years down the road when their paths cross again - you'd probably have to enter solid AU territory at that point, but basically any non-Cadance ship with Shining Armor needs to do that eventually.
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Yeah the two ideas I had for sequels were either set a few weeks after this, maybe a year idk, and go full AU or just a reunion at the wedding and a fun little shock that Rainbow slept with one of her friends' brother.
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I think the little shock option would be fine as like a little extra-epilogue to this one, but there isn’t enough substance for a whole story. I think you could start right around the start of the show. We know none of Twilight’s friends knew she had a brother; what if that wasn’t just because Twilight forgot to tell them, but that he was actively avoiding them (he probably knows that RD was in her group)? How does this affect his relationship with Cadance, and does it throw a wrench in Chrysalis’s plans? I don’t know if that interests you, but I think you’ve got a solid setup for a classic what-if fanfic!
Man, I’ve got a real soft spot for this ship, dunno why but it’s always felt just right to me.
Anyway loving it so far, the flirting at the bar was fun but Windy coming in the end was hilarious
Great story!
Is there going to be a M-Rated side story about what happened that night? It would be great to see more stories featuring these two together.
This was great, and there’s something very satisfying about shining just waking up to seeing Dash,
Would love a quick sequel to see how they react when they meet again.
Maybe even a friendly get together one day in the empire.
But as is this story was a delight
That was honestly amazing, I rarely read stories that explore a chemistry between characters like this, Like Shining Armor experienced, it was rather refreshing. Rainbow dash in the show as controversial as the opinion is, is my least favourite among the six, but I often find myself liking her far more in fanfiction. This story manages to feel in character for both the main characters as well as exploring further into what makes them tick.
All in all it was very enjoyable and I dare say you’ve earned yourself a new follower. If this is in your own opinion the result of some shining brain rot, then I’m excited to see whatever else you’ve got in store. Well done!
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I can't write clop to save my life (believe me, I've tried) so no.
They need to fall in lovee!!:3
That was a good story.
I love this story so much, it's unreal. You did a really good job at selling Dash and Shining's chemistry. It just really feels like they mesh well together, and as the story goes you made me think it wouldn't be so bad if they got together. After all, both are willing, and it's not as if there's anything stopping them from getting toge--Oh, right.
There's a part of me that thinks this deserves a Sad tag, but I suppose it's more of a bittersweet tale than an outright sad one.
Still, I'm left wishing they could've given each other a shot.
Or, at the very least, that there was a sequel where Twilight introduces her friends and Shining has a minor aneurysm.
You're too good at making me ship Shining with anyone other than his wife.