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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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Since magic has been returned to the three pony tribes, Queen Haven has been sneaking out for unexplained reasons. That is, until she's spotted with Alphabittle in secret.

It isn't long before the media in Zephyr Heights goes into overdrive, speculating that the two leaders are a couple and that they're officially going to get engaged. When word of this reaches Bridlewood, Izzy eagerly anticipates planning a wedding.

But Zipp and Pipp aren't as enthusiastic about the whole thing. Pipp especially is less than thrilled with the prospect of her mother marrying somepony else. And it all has to do with what happened to Zephyr Heights' last king.

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I really want an episode in the G5 series about Alphabittle and Haven hooking up and Zipp and Pipp freaking out over it.

A voice could then be heard saying. "Wow! This is the scoop of the century!"

Those thing paparazzi's :facehoof:

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It does seem like the sort of episode they could do, doesn't it? :rainbowlaugh:

Well then that was something else 😅 so it looks like Haven and Alphabittle be in love with each other for a mouth and that's sweet but then paparazzi came in to ruined everything and it's on the news that they think there getting marry which everything kind of blow up and pipp and Zipp did not to thrill about this but izzy was pretty excited even though she did not listen what is going on but Zipp and pipp confronted there mother yeah they were pretty much hurt why she kept a secret and everything but Queen Haven explained that this was just a misunderstanding they're not getting married yes they are in a relationship and yeah now you mention it we never saw the father so we assumed that he must have passed or something still it is sad. And this is why you don't want to jump in conclusion without any proof this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work

Really good job on this one-shot. And I could actually see this being an actual episode of the upcoming series. Of course, time will only tell if the actual writers agree with that train of thought. And, given Alphabittle was voiced by Phil LaMarr (at least in the movie), a relationship with a gal with wings actually makes a decent Casting Gag (given one of the recurring subplots in the animated "Justice League" series which had Phil LaMarr as one of the main cast, even if there are pretty stark personality differences between Haven and Hawkgirl). Also appreciated your theory about what happened to Zipp and Pipp's father, as well as the very different reactions of Izzy, Zipp and Pipp when they found out and the paparazzi blew it all out of proportion.

Anyway, definitely liked the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up.

Perhaps, as an additional Casting Gag for Alphabittle, his magic aura can be bright green and he can show a special talent for force field bubbles, but that's just a random thought that has nothing to do with this story and I apologize for that.

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Honestly? Considering how Alphabittle and Haven reacted to seeing each other in the movie - and how readily Alphabittle moved to protect her during the big climax - I wouldn't be surprised if we learned that Alphabittle is actually Zipp and Pipp's father.

Cute story ☺️

Comment posted by SuperPinkBrony12 deleted Dec 5th, 2022

This was really good. Funny enough, a recent tell your tale made Alphahaven canon without all the drama here.

This story is what Mare Family Mare Problems should have been.

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Make your Mark also confirmed it.

This was a fun read. It's even sweeter considering these two are kinda dating in the show now and Pipp totally did freak out about it :pinkiehappy:

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