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Rune Soldier Dan


Love is a verb, not a noun.

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Winter Wishday. Wishentine. Wishiehoof. To hear Sunny Starscout tell it, the old name was "Hearth's Warming," back when the races lived together.

Maybe that time was coming again. It sure seemed like it, every passing day. The ponies of Equestria were growing together once more.

Which means Queen Haven has no more excuses to put off what she should have done a long time ago.


Written for kleia for Jinglemas 2022.

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Comments ( 15 )

Cute Story :raritywink:

A very pleasant bit of a story. Alphabittle, you big tease, you!

Awww this was a pretty cute story and seeing how Queen Haven and Alphabittle saw each other again after the event of the movie and it looks like they were pretty good and turns with each other especially after sunny and her friends did they even got more closer than ever and I mean very close it is very cute how they talk to each other and everything and even having fun in the holidays and yeah they're going to see sunny and the others boy I wonder zipp and pipp will react that both queen Haven and Alphabittle get together I guess that's another story but this was a pretty nice one keep up the good work and Merry Christmas

This was pleasant.

THIS WAS SO CUTE THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

I enjoyed this so much and I love the little slice of the past these two share! So cute!

I usually don't keep holiday stories around, but this one deserves to be read again.
As someone who is a bit older, this one struck home.

Well done.

This was really sweet. :)

I know there's more to MLP and fandoms and general than shipping, but I'll still openly admit that I ship Queen Haven and Alphabittle, and I really enjoyed this take on them. Them having met one another before was a really interesting idea, and I like their conversation as they come to terms with the past and move on into the future. And their other interactions were both hilarious and adorable, from the muffin offer to the snowball fight at the end.

Also, kudos to you for incorporating references to the 'actual meaning of Christmas' (well, pony equivalent of Christmas) in a natural way that flows nicely into the text, and, I admit, for doing so to begin with. It's true that it's an often repeated message, but it always bears repeating, especially because it seems far too many people still don't get it...

Looking forward to any sequel to this should you make one, and also to any more Alphahaven stories or even any other G5 characters you write in the future!

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I'm so glad you like it. Happy Holidays to you. :heart:

Maybe they would change, bit by bit. Maybe. The screens made life convenient and fun, but something became lost in even a pleasant walk around the gardens when the air was filled with ads featuring her own daughter.

Oh no, Haven's a boomer!
Jokes aside, this was really great. This has some nice character development, I like the backstory you gave our characters, and you've nailed the feeling of drifting apart and then wanting to get back together. Have a Derpy :derpytongue2:

Ver cute story. :heart:

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