It is said that in times of danger, heroes will come together to face the rising tide of evil, and fight back to preserve the light. These heroes can come from the strangest of places.
This is the story of one such hero. Although she appears to be Zipp Storm, you may be surprised to learn her true origins...
Part of the Rebirth of Magic continuity. Tags will be updated as the story continues.
In the featured box as of 26/07/2024!
Written as part of 40 years of My Little Pony.
Oh my gosh, yes! You have no idea how long I've wanted to see someone do this for G5.
So where does this continuity start so I can start from the beginning?
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Thanks very much! We're just getting rolling, so keep a close eye on your feed.
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This, and a story my friend Jimmyhook19 is uploading, is where the saga starts. I'm currently finalising a dedicated group for the project so users can keep up with what's happening. I'll send you an invite to the group when it's ready, if you'd like.
I think I might know what she means by that disease.
Wait what!?
This was not what I expected would happen in this chapter at all!
The title of the chapter it’s from Sonic Frontiers’ song Vandalize.
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1. That which shall not be named, indeed.
2. That's a little nod to some of my prior work for those in the know, namely the stories I produced with (now-defunct) user Misty Rose.
3. Yes indeed. It's all gone weird!
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I thought the sentiment fitted, seeing as this is a story about somebody who has their entire life turned upside down.
The first in a large series, you say? Rather intriguing. So the main character of this story was originally a human male that ended up getting reincarnated as Zipp. This seems to imply that the rest of the Mane Five (and the remaining three of the eight mentioned heroes) will also have previously been reincarnated from other worlds, but that is the most I'm going to guess.
Anyway, good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up.
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Cool! I have Sonic Frontiers for Switch.
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Thank you. My co-author and I plan to release five chapters each month (he should have his first chapter up soon).
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PC version here. Partly because mods.
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Oh ok.
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No worries. All versions are pretty good, I'm told.
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Yeah. I have plans to release a Sonic Frontiers like crossover story here on Fimfiction some time in the future.
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I look forward to seeing it!
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Also Bionicle Heroes story too.
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I see you are a person of culture as well.
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Yeah G1 Bionicle. I grew up with it having several sets from over the years in the 2000s. It combines MLPFIM, the Legend of Spyro, Land Before Time, Bionicle G1, Pokémon Anime, and Hot Wheels Acceleracers. The Toa Inika with the Toa Nuva and Toa Hagah will work together to face enemies of the past and the Piraka after they not only get their hands on the Mask of Life, but also the Mask of Time. This time Axonn will be an ally to the Toa and their quest to save Mata Nui.
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You have your work cut out for you.
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I know. Cause read this Fluttershy is going to give Roodaka a stern talking.
Fluttershy gained an angry look as she stomped over to the former queen of the Visorak. Discord, Wing Breeze, Cross Clamp, and Confushy backed away from the yellow Pegasus mare along with everyone else except the Toa Inika, Toa Tahu, and the Rehagah who were confused by what was going on until they saw the Visorak around them as they quivering and twitching in fear at the angry pegasus. They were actually more terrified of her instead of Roodaka.
As Fluttershy made her way over to Roodaka to have a stern talking to Kongu whispered to Hahli as he got a feeling that said pegasus was in a very bad mood, “Mata Nui… she’s pretty angry. I have a feeling that we’re about to hear some loud-shouting soon.”
Hahli looked at the Toa of Air and said back to him, “Good so it’s not just me. I don’t want to know what she’s thinking right now.”
Kongu had to agree with his fellow Toa of Water since he didn’t need his mask power to figure out what Fluttershy was thinking right now. Cause everyone could see Roodaka who was actually quaking in terror as the angry yellow Pegasus mare made her way over to the former queen for a stern ‘talk’. Even the Toa know that things were gonna get worse for Roodaka.
Roodaka on the other hand stepped back slowly as her entire body was shaking in fear and the way Fluttershy was looking at her was like pure terror itself. She was afraid of Makuta and the Dark Hunters for selling information to both sides for profit and they saw her they were kill her on sight, but this time was completely different as this one pegasus had single handedly made all the fight leave her being. Those eyes. Those big angry aqua eyes! They starring straight into her soul making her terrified of this little cute organic creature with wings.
The poor female vortixx couldn’t understand what was happening, but she knew that she was in very deep trouble cause when you anger Fluttershy you will get the wrath of her infamous ‘The Stare’ to anyone who misbehaves and Roodaka unfortunately was going be next victim. Roodaka’ back hit the wall of the castle after walking slowly backwards in fear and sunk to the ground sitting on her behind coming face to face with an angry element of kindness. Their long silence until Fluttershy broke saying to the vortixx enraged of her awful behavior as she heard everything about Roodaka, “HOW DARE YOU! YOU SHOULD BE VERY ASHAMED OF YOURSELF MISS ROODAKA!!”
Roodaka tried speak, but all that came out was just in a fearful tone, “But I…”
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Previews. I likw those.
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Thanks. That preview is for after a Titan battle on Vesok’s Coastline, but I’m trying make it so it can make have more MLP in the first chapter being a prologue weaving in the storyline of the 2006 storyline of Bionicle with the Piraka being like Krekka from Bionicle 2 not very bright, but still considered a threat, however, enemies like Sidorak, Indiki, and Roodaka would take this opportunity to pick up where they left off and concur Earth since they were foiled by Toa last time not to mention revenge on any Toa team since the Toa Metru/Hordika defeated them. Much of the information will be from the movies, novels, and the comics. The only smart Piraka will be Vezon that Joker equivalent will plan a role in this too since like in the 2006 storyline is fused to the Mask of Life.
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Hmm. Good news: the co-author's story is currently in moderatioj
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Sweet! What story exactly?
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Same series as this, from another character's perspective.
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Oh ok. Also the Toa Nuva are being guarded by the Makuta’s sons each location is to weaken their elemental powers.
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My co-author has just published!
- MLP Gen 5
- Adventure
- Comedy
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Thanks for the message. Of course, I already responded to it, but I still thank you for letting me know.
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Np!
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Cool.
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Np.
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I’m still trying figure out how start off the 1st chapter of my Bionicle Heroes that’s after my prologue chapter.
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Well, where does the prologue begin?
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New chapter, folks!
You got a reading in 7 hours
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In Eques first then goes over to when Jala and his group become Toa.
Another well done chapter. REALLY appreciated the description of your character waking up as Zipp, still confused about what happened. And, yeah, certainly provides further evidence that your character was brought in BEFORE magic returned to Equestria. Of course, whoever got reincarnated as Pipp (which will probably be subtly hinted at in later chapters, but won't be shown in greater detail until a later story) is doing a better job keeping themselves under control for the time being. Of course, I admit that I COULD be wrong about the "eight heroes" being ALL of the Mane 5 plus three as yet unrevealed others stuff.
But, still, really looking forward to more of this.
Technically your a pony/Pegasus.
Pony, not a horse.
All I needed was to go find a nice wall*
Btw, I'm not sure you did this on purpose but I like how the chapters title is a reference to the song "boulevard of broken dreams" as it's pretty much a bit of the lyrics but altered.
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Awesome! Could you drop a link when it's ready?
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Sounds like a good start.
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Oh its not exactly mine but its from straighttothepoint
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Straight to the Point Studio? I'm familiar with their work; they've read my stories in the past.
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1 and 2. I don't think the protagonist is in the mood for splitting hairs.
3. Trying to fly is hard when you have the aerodynamic properties of a brick.
4. Oops.
The chapter title is indeed a reference to 'Boulevard of Broken Dreams'.
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I imagined that ending up reincarnated as a fictional character in an alien environment would be a terrifying experience, so I wanted to capture that.
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Knew it!
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In fact, all the chapter titles are song references.
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I see.
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Indeed
Interesting in that our main character seems to be familiar enough with MLP to know the names of the main characters and locations, but based on his (her) reaction, doesn't really seem to be too found of it?