Can We Talk?

Hitch barely even remembers his own parents, much less have a father figure. The only parental figure related to him left in his life is his grandmare; and he can only visit her in the summer. So after an rough day at school, he goes to the only person who feels like what a "father" would feel like.

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Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #1 · Mar 20th, 2023 · 3 · 1 ·

At the bottom the letter had a little hoof-drawn picture of one of the friendship mares her dad made up for her. It was the yellow pegasus one with pink flowy hair. What was her name? Hitch thought a little. Shy... This pony was the shy one... He looked at her flank. Her cutie mark was made up of three pink butterflies. Butterflies... Butte- Oh! Flutershy! That's her name. Hitch didn't really like her. He thought the pink and orange mares were better. They were fellow earth ponies.

It's Fluttershy kid and don't be like that you have something kind of in common with her and you will be very surprised in the future 😊
I still like to think that he can be related to Fluttershy because of that ability he has

tmoneydamaster

tmoneydamaster #2 · Mar 20th, 2023 · 2 · ·

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Yeah as much as he likes Sunny and Argyle, hes still gonna have some prejudice against unicorns and pegasi at that point in time. I definitely think hes related to her in some way :)

Thanks for reading

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #3 · Mar 20th, 2023 · 2 · ·

Argyle hesitated before saying, "Because of my sickness, I'm going to go somewhere far away... without Sunny. And I was wondering if you'd be willing look out for her the way you did yesterday while I'm gone."

Oh man that's so sad 😭

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #4 · Mar 20th, 2023 · 3 · ·

Awww that was a pretty nice story and that's also an interesting theory that hitch probably don't have any parents as well aside from his grandmother but anyway so he looks like he got into a fight just for defending sunny from those bullies and not only that he's been living at a orphanage and not only that he needed to talk to an adult and they only closest one as a father figure is Argyle so once he went to the house he talked to him about his problems and how it went down at the school Argyle was pretty patient with him and even impressed with him how he defends somebody and he's thinking that maybe one day he will become a sheriff in town and once again it was really sweet to see something like that how he made a promise with him just like the other story I read this was your very first story and I got to say this was pretty good keep up the good work

NightFlame389