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It's the weekend, and the latest film to hit Maretime Bay theatre has arrived. Hitch looks forward to seeing them; however, when his grandmother cannot take him as planned, Sunny's father offers to take the young colt in her place. And in turn, he's also proposed that Hitch spend the night over which Sunny is delighted. But for the young colt, this will be the first time he's ever slept anywhere besides his home. Fear starts to set in if he can go through with this.

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VERY little I can say about this except that this was a really cute one-shot. Yeah, I could see something like this back when Hitch and Sunny were kids. :-D

Very sweet and cute, loved it.

Wonderful story!

“I can’t believe our teacher made me sit in the corner. I only said that unicorns don’t eat earth pony brains,” complained the filly. “If my dad were here, he’d say the same thing—that all three tribes of ponykind lived in harmony and got along, spreading love and friendship among each other.”

I mean seriously how did in the world did the teachers get their information from it just made them sound so foolish

Everything happened slowly as Hitch sprinted forward as fast as his legs could carry him. Sunny turned to look at her friend, wondering why she was running at him when she turned to see the sides of the containment box coming up and looking to trap the small earth pony. Soon, she felt her best friend collide with her as both ponies moved out of the way at the last second, with the trap coming together and sealing itself. The two fillies landed on the ground as they lifted their heads to see the trap before looking at themselves to see if they were okay.

See even these traps are even dangerous to little kids either if your Earth Pony unicorns or Pegasus it's still incredibly dangerous worst of all they will get hurt I'm just surprised she didn't get sued for that for endangering young kids

The colt knew Sunny’s father was a good pony from the short times he made them snacks during his and Sunny’s playdates and how Sunny loved her old man to death. He was lucky that his best friend had someone like that for a parent, as he hoped nothing bad would ever happen to him.

Ohh ouch 😢

“Say it, or I’ll trip you!” threatened Hitch as he would do it and sacrifice the filly to save his own skin after what she tried to do to him earlier.

I see the reference you did there very clever I like that

Awww this is definitely a very sweet story and seeing the younger days of sunny and hitch becoming very close to each other as kids and basically just having fun and it's always nice to see that and alsoHitch making a promise to Argyle to keep an eye on sunny which he did keep his promise to this dayThis was pretty nice story keep up the good work

Dan
Dan #9 · March 12th · · ·

Best osananajimis.

JD1
JD1 #10 · March 13th · · ·

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Thanks.

I’m usually not a fan of G5 but this was pretty good actually.

JD1
JD1 #12 · March 23rd · · ·

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Thanks.

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You’re welcome

This could plausibly have been an episode of Make your Mark. What the characters got up to as fillis/colts is missed potential from the writers in my books, so good job here.

JD1

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Thanks. Appreciate the kind words.

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