All their lives, Sunny and Hitch, have been connected at the hip. Childhood friends, best friends. There hasn't been a single moment where they didn't have the other when they were growing up. As the years go on, one thing stays the same. The bond the two have will, then, now, and forever, remain intact. One day, while cleaning out some of her stuff in her storage room, the pair stumble across an old book. But not just any book. It's a book full of photos. Photos that depict the many adventures and times the pair spent together as they grew up.
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Chapters (2)
D'aaaw!!
Alright, this isn't a bad start. However. if you are going to have flashbacks, then you need to either us italics like this or put in a line breaker like this:
Those would make it easier to read.
Oh ew that is a terrible feeling and taste at the same time
The mare failed to pay attention to what was in front of her as there was a banana peel on the ground that someone had just thrown away. By the time Sunny opened her eyes, it was too late.
Oh boy that's kind of foreshadowing of that little incident from the tell your tail
Okay this is actually a pretty interesting start of a story and it's always nice to see how these two met each other so it looks like sunny and the others are trying to clean out some stuff getting rid of old items until hitch saw a scrapbook even talking about how they first met each other which it was kind of cute to see that I wonder how their friendship grew throughout the years guess we'll find out next time
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Glad you like it. Means so much to me.
If I was a young colt at her first day of school, I would have stood up for her and given her a comforting hug.
This is a nice start to the story. I love how Sunny and Hitch are reliving their memories because of the scrapbook.
That teacher was horrible. She was extremely unfriendly towards Sunny and could have handled it much better.
I loved this story so much, so cute. Congratulations, keep writing please
Great story. Cant wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
I love the way you tell a story, emotions, feelings and everything else. Its easy to get swept away.
Oh boy don't you hate that when that happens
What the heck are you talking about Fairy Tail??
What are you freaking kidding me what do they get this information from anyway I'm assuming I know who but still it's so stupid
Story of My Life 😕
I'm really getting annoyed by this teacher 😡
Well then first day of school is pretty rough so it looks like Sunny was pretty excited for her first day and things were pretty well actually until she's told her story about unicorns Pegasus and her ponies living together in friendship and everything and the teacher did not take it too well in fact she was pretty rough on her and I felt like she was really mean to sunny and hitch really want to help her but of course he's just a kid that's not much he can do and apparently things got really bad when the teacher scold her for it like I said not the most grateful first day of school but her father Argyle cheer her up knowing for a fact that she still wants her to not people get the best of her and hopefully things will get better I guess we'll find out next time
Hope next chapter comes soon
Hope to read more from you.