Two weeks after the encounter with Opaline. Misty had been mysteriously distant lately. Her desperation for reassurance, to amend her mistakes and to come to terms with her terrible old life with Opaline.
She is invited inside the crystal brighthouse for a heartwarming and comforting time with her friends. In the process she learns that she always had the potential to amend for mistakes she made that she just needed them to help her realize. Fully understand what she went through with Opaline caused more harm than good for her life. Lifting Misty's spirit back up and washing her fears away.
And perhaps find a blessing in disguise from somepony she missed so dearly.
Artwork made by BellaThePinkSavage: Oh Misty by Bella-Pink-Savage on DeviantArt
In Loving Memory of Alisha Nicole Cannan (June 19th 2001 - April 9th 2021)
OK, good story. But the sudden paragraphs in the middle of sentences is very distracting.
I’d really recommend going back and editing, because it hurts the presentation of the story and I want to like this more.
What am I seeing?
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Ok. I think I know what you’re talking about because I think this is the first time I tried this style of writing.
Fixing.
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Alrighty then I think I got it right this time.
Who is Alisha Nicole Cannan?
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A MLP fan.
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An old friend of mine.
She was a small content creator used to be known as “Heartpaw Phoenix.”
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Thank you for answering my question.
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Thank you for answering my question.
I'm very sorry to hear about your friend. *gives you a hug*
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Thanks.
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You're very welcome.
Ok so I should probably comment on this story's success. After 3 days of posting, it seems like it's officially been a noticed and appreciated story. Ironically enough, this story took 3 days to complete as well. Which surprises me, part of me hopes it wouldn't come across as if I rushed through it.
Though with this story I had a much more casual mindset when it came to this story. I literally created this story as a bit of a side project. It just wasn't a massive fanfic project that took like 3 and a half months to write like "I Love the Star in You" Did. And yes, it was mostly due to Chapter 4's release just being so perfectly timed. (Even though it came out on the 6th rather than the 7th like I was told for some reason.)
In less than 5 hours the story reached the popular page. And now that I finally wrote a one-shot story like I wanted to I finally have a good idea of what one looks like. But before I get into this can we please take a moment for G5. An aspect of MLP that is so overhated that it led me to becoming an isolationist... and that only ended in like the past few weeks, I guess. (Part of me thinks this part of my story is just beginning.)
Now on some level I realize that whenever someone really looks for content online. I mostly realize that they're looking for comfort food essentially. And with this story I wanted to deliver just that, in fact as I wrote this, I had one mental note in my head. "Make the story feel like it's 'hugging you' " That's what I ran with. And well another huge factor behind this was because at the time, I was writing. Between June 17th til the 19th. I was dealing with severe drama of my own. Like it greatly hurt how I thought I could interact socially with people online. Combine this with Chapter 4's release that happened just a few weeks prior with Misty's plotline. It was basically inevitable this would happen.
Another factor that may have also helped was this time my drama was more... I guess sympathetic although I prefer the term empathetic.
There was just so much riding into this with so little and I had no idea it would become this popular. Let alone be a gift for my dead friend...Sometimes I feel like she gave me a gift though.
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Honestly there's a lot of Misty sympathy/empathy stories as of late. After the release of chapter 4 I might link a few of them here to promote other authors. Idk if they were inspired by mine though, I know mine came out earlier but still.
That's one fat Misty for the cover art and I love it.