A Series of events and a vacation to Zephyr Heights leaves Hitch Trailblazer and Zipp Storm's feelings in flux. Thankfully everypony is willing to help them out in more ways than one. As they begin to enjoy each other's company their worries and fears seem to melt away. Join us in this tale from MLP G5 that shows How does one find love? Well the best love tends to find you.
Will the two come to terms with themselves and confess? Will they work things out? And will they be able to stop the storm from within before it becomes a Hurricane?
Written By: Twilyx360
Special Thanks: BellaThePinkSavage
NOTE: The image you see is NOT the official title card. There will be an original one coming from BellaThePinkSavage very soon.
Chapters (26)
Well, the formatting could use some work.
But it is nice to see another story with this pairing. Seriously, despite this ship’s popularity there’s barely any fics with it
But aren't storms and hurricanes the same thing?
This is a very interesting start of a story so it looks like Zipp have been concerned about hitch ever since sprout got fired for what happened in the movie he's been doing this a solo for a while and apparently with a lack of sleep even with his Critters helping him still needs a deputy to help him so it looks like he's going to find somebody and zipp is going to help him
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Not entirely. (Hurricanes have a different formation)
But I mainly said this to emphasize one of the main themes of the story. I won't outright say it as to not spoil the story.
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"Seriously, despite this ship’s popularity there’s barely any fics with it" That is one of the reasons I made it. Aside from that I realized a lot of potential in the ship especially after the MYM special came out earlier this year.
As for the formatting. Idk what you mean exactly. But the story's ending was planned before I even started writing the first chapter. The story will be 26 chapters in total.
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Trying to word this as best as I can.
It might just be me, but the chapters seem a little fast and the grammar structure seems….off. Again, could just be me.
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Maybe.
Or it might just be the word count in certain chapters.
Regardless there are 21 chapters left to be posted. Hope you and everyone else continues to enjoy.
And well, I hope this fic finds an audience.
Hitch, you need help, and there's somepony in front of you that can give you the help you need.
So it looks like both hitch and zipp really have a bad sleeping habit even pipp notice how awful they look like so she decides to give them a little bit of relaxing and makeover which both of them did not like the idea but unfortunately that no choice I wonder how that will go
Hitch having a relationship? That’s not possible that it’s not even canon. Is it?
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This story is not canon. It's a fan"Fiction"
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I know that but I meant if it would happen in the cartoon version.
Oh dear apparently it was really worse so apparently hitch and zipp exhausting and a lack of sleep both of them got hurt but they are OK they just need to rest
This is great! Can't wait for more!
Oh that was like the aftermath of the tell your tail from the episode of the camping trip which the other is kind of forgot
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Yes when the others forgot about the trip. That is what that is referencing.
This part, this is good reading. i love this ship!
I love this story, I really want to see the next chapter!
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The next chapter comes out tonight. So, you'll see it. ^^
Very glad to know you like it. :D
This is getting really good! Cam't wait for the next chapter!
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Thanks. I'm actually really proud of how I wrote the dialog in chapter 8. XD
Awww this was actually pretty nice and the conversation between hitch and Zipp is pretty nice as well having dependent each other when they needed help and they definitely need some rest
Yeah friends lol 😘
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And yeah I get it she really don't want to leave them how much you really cared about them especially hitch
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Sorry about that. Idk how these typos keep happening. I look these things over every time. The text editor should've pointed that out to me.
Yeah friends wink
Oh man that was something else so it looks like hitch and Zipp are just sitting and having dinner but it looks like she confessed about abandoning her friends and even being alone despite she's been doing this for a long time but she doesn't want to feel that ever again but hitch wants to reassure her that nothing will happen again this was a pretty nice conversation between those two and I'm sure she will never be alone
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It's Hitch. I like to think he did. :D
Wow that was a unexpected situation so looks like both of them are meeting up with the others and they basically just having fun with each other until a couple of ponies noticing them and apparently they really are famous so they chase the and they had to hide from them luckily they lost them and they checked on zoom and Thunder and it looks like everything is okay so with that they both met up with sunny and the others and it looks like they're all going to Zephyr Heights which zipp not too keen on to going home but she said she can do this all she has to do is think about how this will go especially with hitch
Well at least they finally made it to Zephyr Heights and queen Haven welcome her daughters and the guest so it looks like everything turns out okay so far but apparently zipp and hitch are starting to have some weird feelings for each other
Ohh she started to fall in love with Hitch 🥰
Awww I kind of felt bad for her I know how it feels to feel in love with somebody you have no idea how to act around them without being too awkward and that's how zipp going through and I think hitch is also feeling something for her as well so she made it to Sunny that she's in love with hitch now I wonder how this will work out guess we'll find out next time
Nice. I hope you do a sprout story!!
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Okay so basically zipp is not the only one who's dealing that problem hitch is also having the same feeling towards zipp as will he even admitted he did care for her and sunny explained to him that he's in love with zipp now the only question is how long can they keep that I guess we'll find out next time
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That typo was intentional. XD
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Oh ok
Yeah, this is getting interesting! Great read!
Omg oh Hitch, you're so on love!
Cool. Just a question, when is the next chapter being posted?
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Friday
Wow she must have taken a picture of him she really does love him so much
What are you up to Sunny
So it looks like hitch is also having some conflict feelings but Sunny wants to tell him that it does nothing wrong to express the feelings and everything and everybody appreciate him so much hopefully in time he will tell zipp soon and speaking of her she really got it so badly as well and I wonder what Sunny is up to I guess we'll find out next time
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She knows. You’d be smug too
Zipp under the bed seeing pictures of Hitch is the best part LOL
Ah this is way before the Manestem came to the picture
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Yeah, I set this fic in a specific place in G5. I didn't say where it was set because, I don't really think it's all that vital. Furthermore, I didn't want to alienate anyone who might not have seen the show.
But to give some kind of perspective. I literally wrote this fic back in the Summer of 2022. Looong before the Marestream even introduced in the YT series.