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redandready45


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This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls: A Fairly Odd Friendship


Featured October 8, 2020

At recess, Timmy learns from his best alien friend, Mark Chang, that a rogue element of the Yugopatamian army wants to destroy the planet.

That wouldn't be an issue...were Cosmo and Wanda's wands not undergoing a tune up.

But thankfully, Timmy Turner has another ace up his sleeve: something pink, bubbly, and very, very annoying.

Normally, someone would balk at being sent to fight a hostile alien race. But Pinkie isn't scared. She loves making new friends.

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Comments ( 51 )

Isn't it a little early for a sequel?

Oh God! Pinkie's mere presents is going to hurt Mark! She is too sweet for him to survive!

Impossible! Such a menacing aura!

It-it can't be!

SHE'S AN ENEMY STAND USER!

:pinkiegasp:I had totally forgotten about all the alien stuff in fairly odd parents. Thanks for the fun story, the smile it gave me and the reminder!:pinkiehappy:

The Yugopataimas were always a really strange aspect of the show, even for FOP standards. Like I feel like they were supposed to be one shot antagonists that got really popular.

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i agree with you on that. but who cares? it has pinkie in it. and she's happy.

I wonder how Mark Chang would react if I make him watch Barney The Dinosaur?

I feel like using Pinkie is some kind of war crime.

Yay!!!!!! Cosmo and Pinkie are so chill!!!!

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Yeah, I figured.

But I am about to start full time work.

Starting next week, I won't have as much time as a used too.

I want to use my last bits of freedom to publish as much as I can.

As well as show everyone I am still committed to Fairly Odd Friendship.


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Mark: Humans create programs devoted to mental torture!

Pinkie: Shh. This is my favorite.

Mark: YOU SICKED TWISTED MOSNTER!

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Still, this tells it'll work out pretty well.

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That last line made me laugh.

OMG! That was hilarious!

YES

I wanted to see mark or well in this case yugopotamia dealing with either pony/equeatria girls Antics.

I hoped for something like twilight or sunset shimmer refusing to believe that mark is an alien and he is only some monster from equestria despite all evidence, but this is far better.

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Sunset Shimmer: Aliens? That's the most ridiculous thing I've ever heard.

Cosmo: Only as ridiculous as a teenage girl claiming to be a unicorn.

(beat)

Twilight Sparkle: Fair point.

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COSMO BECAME INTELLIGENT! IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD!

As with A Fairlyodd Friendship this was hilarious and felt like one of the early episodes. Your ability to match tone and make references without it feeling stale is incredible.

So it pains me to say I think I found a plot hole:

"Yeah," Cosmo said. "Let me demonstrate." Cosmo poofed up a teddy bear on Mark's body. It burned him. Cosmo poofed up a baby chick. It burned him. Cosmo then poofed up a milkshake and poured it on Mark's body.

If Cosmo can’t grant wishes the closest thing he could do to poofing something up would be turning into it. Is that what you’re trying to have happen here? If not that’s an easy fix. :derpytongue2:

Good luck with the new job! Hope you’ll still be able to write great works like this.

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Yeah I wondered about that too.

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Actually...

I see your point.

Will make an edit.

Okay, I never thought this story would be this hilarious. AHHH!! MORE FAIRLY ODD FRIENDSHIP!!!! NOW!!!

This should be canon

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Is Pinkie Pie really annoying?

I just imagine the next one shot story's

Rarity meeting Remy Buxaplenty alone with Juandissimo Magnifico

Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy meeting April Fool

Applejack meeting The Head Pixie (H.P.) and Sanderson

And probably Starlight meeting the anti fairies

Comment posted by Wild Stallion deleted Jul 13th, 2021

"Pinkie," Wanda said sternly. "Mark's species doesn't enjoy nice or good things. In fact, they can be very deadly to him."

Does that include devious little girls using their adorable cuteness as a way to subject them? Because if so, then I've just thought of something you could use as a sequel.

'Terror comes from the skies. And it's name is Cozy Glow.' That or Discord. Preying on a species's vunrablity to cuteness, in order to instigate a war, is totally something Discord would do.

This was really well done, poor Mark and co though

Great story my guy and poor Mark just run and also I have to ask when is the sequel for fairy odd friendship coming out

Will the next story be a long one?

Awesome man. Though do you plan to Mandie show up in the series? Cause im pretty sure even Sunset Shimmer, Rainbow Dash, and even GILDA would be intimidated by her.

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Hmm...

You've given me food for thought.

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Yeah plus you may have already seen this, but Mandie using her jet boots can also fly as fast as a Yugopotamian ship which can fly from Yugopotamia to earth in minutes, can entrap alicorn level Fairies in cement. In addition in the “Five Days of F.L.A.R.G.” episode she lifted a barbell weight bigger than her head that weigh 500 lbs on both sides and do an overhead press 18 times in one second, then immediately afterward tossing it aside like pebbles so she could use an ax to chop up an animatronic of mark into tiny pieces in 1 second, then uses two alien bazookas as big her torso to blast the bits to smithereens without suffering any kickback then break both of them over her head into four pieces like they twigs out of wet clay.

Yeah, imagine how the Rainbooms would react to that? sure Applejack with her magic is stronger, but what if for this universe Mandie’s strength works like the Hulk, so the madder she gets the stronger she gets and the hotter her flames become.

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You, sir, are more than just a constructive critic.


You are a muse!

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Yeah, with all of that, I can picture the Rainbooms being caught off guard by her ferocity, and the canterlot high students who previously were more than willing to give a well deserved ass kicking to the dazzlings would go like “nope!” Then book it, with even Gilda going like “ Sunset, have fun!” Before grabbing timmy and running off as fast as she can.

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Or am I not giving the Rainbooms enough credit? Im just assuming that their more used to magical energy blast blast opponents as opposed to non magical physical brutes.

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I think only Applejack and Rainbow would be good in a physical fight.

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Yeah, but neither of them are actually warriors, while Mandie was trained since birth in warrior combat, and I forgot to mention this but during “King Chang” Mandie with own power created high tech battle armor with blasters everywhere. With everything I’ve stated before, imagine what it would look like if shes burning with fire, while wearing power armor and shooting molten beams of energy.

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You get what I’m saying though right?

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Yes I do. Maddie could be a tough opponent

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Absolutely. Also I know its too early to tell, but with everything set up in the first story I think a great idea would be to make the Dazzlings the main antagonists of the Fairly Odd Friendship series, and be Timmy Turner’s arch nemesis.

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Their mutual animosity feels so real at this point.

Interesting one shot here and pretty awesome yet hilarious seeing Pinkie become a threat to the Yugopotamians without even trying.

Since Mandie hasn't been defeated yet here (since the events of anything after FOP season 5 didn't happen, which means King Chang didn't happen yet), curious how the Rainbooms will deal with her (Especially if Mandie does manage to access some Equestrian magic)?

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WIP


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The Dazzlings will ride again. Mark my words.

I think this was a pretty entertaining read! I especially love Pinkie's response, "Well, Like Mark." Will you ever write a full length sequel?

Cosmo smiled. "Our wands are mighty and commanding, like a celebrity's face. But they need maintenance and tuning every now and then, like a celebrity's face."

What does a celebrity's face have to do with this?! :duck:

Mark looked horrified. "Can't you, like, send your forces to punish him for his treason!?

treason!?"*

"But-,"

"But-"*

"Elmer what's wrong?" Timmy asked his boiled friend,

friend.*

"Uh, it will be here soon," Timmy said , looking down at Cosmo and Wanda, respectively disguised as a knife and fork. "I wish-," he began, only to remember that his fairies couldn't do any magic today.

wish-"*

Timmy turned around and saw a pink car barreling toward them. It had a loudspeaker on the roof, and a banner on the front that read "Party Wagon" in a bright pink letters. It plowed through the playground at high speed, causing children to scatter in fear of being run over.

in bright pink letters*

Timmy shrugged. "Pinkie just...finds these things out." The boys looked as Pinkie placed a red party hat on Elmer's head (and a tinier one on his boil) while singing the same song over and over again. The other kids gathered around this spectacle, much to Timmy's mortification.

Sometimes it's best to not to wonder how Pinkie knows. :unsuresweetie:

"Cool," Elmer said, "where-," Elmer watched with shock as Pinkie somehow pulled a cake the size of a table from her poofy pink hair. Elmer's face was drawn on top with red frosting, with a cherry to represent his boil.

where-"*

"Well Like, Mark," Pinkie said, presenting a plate of chocolate cake to the disguise as an alien prince. "How would you like-,

the disguised alien prince. "How would you like-"*

Pinkie stared at Mark with a hint of remorse.

Oh boy! :twilightoops:

"Yeah." Mark let an optimistic smile. "Don't worry though. Like, you and your magical servants can save the day, right?" Cosmo, Wanda, and TImmy looked blue with fear.

Timmy*

"I didn't no you were diabetic Mark," Pinkie said. She presented another, smaller, cake. "So I baked you a sugar-free-," Pinkie dropped the cake in shock, once she looked at Mark in his true alien form.

didn't know*
sugar-free-"*

"Uh, Pinkie," Timmy said, "are you-,"

you-"*

"Pinkie," Wanda urged, "I know Mark looks weird, but he has feelings like you-,"

you-"*

"YOU LEFT THE WINDOW OPEN!" Mark, Timmy, and the fairies looked confused.

:facehoof:

"You're not supposed to leave the window open." Pinkie said, shutting a window a turning toward Timmy with her hands on her hips and a stern look. "You'll let the AC out."

shutting a window before turning toward Timmy*

"Uh, like, greetings Earthling," Mark said with some confusion, "how is it-," Pinkie pulled Mark into a hug.

it-"*

"What's wrong?" Pinkie said with concern. "I just wanted to-,"

to-"*

"COME BEFORE ME, GREATEST WARRIOR!" A voice bellowed from overhead. The group of five came out of the space ship and saw a flying saucer hanging over their hands, a small platform jutting out from the roof, a blue Yugopotamian alien hanging at the end of it. He resembled the King except he had a thick mustache rather than a beard, along with evil green eyes.

over their heads*

"LET US BATTLE, GREATEST WARRIOR!" Zilluuac bellowed to Timmy, carrying all manners of weapons in his tentacles. Timmy approached him. The two of them were on top of flying saucer, which had been converted into a battlefield. On one side, Zilluuac's dozens of soldiers stood behind him, demented grins on their faces. On the other side, Timmy stood, Mark and his fairies right behind him.

on top of the flying saucer,*

"What is-," Zilluuac began, only for the box to burst open.

is-"*

"I am not afraid," Zilluuac said. "I shall-," he screamed as cupcakes were thrown at his eyes.

shall-*

"A what-AAAAAHHHH!" Zilluuac shrieked in blood-curdling pain as Pinkie gave him the most deadly thing of all: a warm hug. "Stop, stop! End this torture! I can't take-," he fainted from the agony of it all.

can't take-"*

"Ah, he must be so happy he's tried," Pinkie Pie chirped at the unconscious alien. He looked at the rest of the horrified Yugopotamians. "How about you. Want to have fun?!"

happy he's tired,"*

One of them shook with terror. "What does this contraption-," the cannon covered all the aliens in party hats, confetti, and glitter.

contraption-"*

"Driluuac," one of his commandents said to his weakened opponent, "let us flee to the next solar-,

solar-"*

It's hilarious knowing Pinkie managed to make the aliens flee just being herself!!! :rainbowlaugh:

So, is this before or after the events of Journey to the Mind of Timmy Turner considering how Timmy is more okay being around Pinkie despite losing trust in the Rainbooms in the end of the first story and making it clear he still had trust issues with them in the end?

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After the second story.

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