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Anon A Mous


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A gleaming shield x human fanfic
Wow
Never thought I'd ever get to see one.
I'm not into genderbending but as long as it's an AU where their gender is from the start of their life, then I can get by.
That and Gleaming Shield is probably my only exception....unless there are other fics that can change my mind further.

Interesting.. I'll keep reading this

Consider me invested to watch this space. :rainbowderp:

I'm intrigued, I shall watch for future updates with a lazy gaze.

Good Luck!

A multi-chapter story by an author I absolutely love the work of who rarely posts stories? Is this a blessing or a curse?! Please let it be a blessing.

That last bit reminded me of Monty Python and the Holy Grail.
Btw great start.

I'm really not sure how I feel about this cold open to bored sex. It says a lot about Gleaming so far, but not much else.

Why she's like that? What prompted her to do so for apparently no reason or gain? A mystery this is, follow I will.

If this is a tad more serious, why not use "AnTon?" :)

I'm always glad to see a story about Gleaming Shield. Especially when it's not a one-shot clop.

The opening is very brief and leaves us wanting for more. Let our hero's misery commence!

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I've been refreshing the page all day long just in hopes he'll post another. I have been hooked hard.

... This really doesn't look like comedy..


Kinda looks like softcore prostitution or swinging stance with a partially unwilling participant....

And a bit of 'Broken Goods' Anathema'.

That, ain't too funny.

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Why is it that every fim i see you comment on you always have at least 2 dislikes on one of your comments

Gleaming probably would of came if she had the right mind set

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I won't apologize for a humorless bunch. Possibly a stalker

Also exxaregartion isn't nice.
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So much Friendship.

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There's a joke there that I didn't get... that or seven people just really hate you.

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7 accounts. Don't care.

When adding one letter was the worst thing ever. I wish I had those kinda problems.

It's simply easier to jump the negative bandwagon then engage in a dialogue...

Or do you see another dialogue other than yours? At least no constructive.

Have a good one.

Cool, seems like it’ll be a good story

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Really? All I saw was a lackluster one-night stand. Something that Gleaming did willingly and now has to deal with the results.

It's not that funny on it's own, but sets the stage for the rest of the story.

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It's just a downvote on a comment. Not a declaration of war. For goodness' sake! :ajbemused:

If I were to guess, people don't like when someone complains about the name 'Anon'.

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It sets the stage for depression is what it does.

First chapter may set a stage but this is comedy.

The first chapter was more reminiscent of softcore non-con than comedy.

That doesn't set much stages.

Coming back to this and seeing the comment section is like seeing:

i.ibb.co/Q6Rb738/Dumpster-Fire.jpg

Huh. Wasn't expecting the story to start off with clop. But this is marked as a comedy, and based on how her character is being portrayed I can see it leading up to that...
Sticking in Tracking for now...

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Since when does a story has to be each of it's tags by the first chapter?

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I never claimed it need be.

I simply responded using identical logic to the one beneath me.

No more. No less.

She seems bored lol. Love the chapter

God I feel so bad for her. I had to do similar shit when I was in the military and holy shit is it fucking depressingly boring if you're already tired to begin with.

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Personally, I think it's moving sand bags. I hated it.

Empress, huh? It's some really deep AU. Typical candidates for this title are out, as there is day and night. So it sound like Celestia just stopped pretending with her actual power here.

I have to keep reminding myself to have patience in the plot buildup.

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Chill, i wasn't trying to offend you.

So far this has been engaging, and the build up is going well. Gleamings character is being built up at a reasonable and believable pace. The only issue I have thus far is the two chapters. Why are there two? After rereading the first one and then this one back to back I feel like it would have been better to combine them into a single chapter. The first felt and reads more like a single scene that is immediately preceded or followed by another, rather than a standalone chapter. Aside from that admittedly small gripe, this is going well. And Empress... I might go half a dozen months before each visit to this site, but I don't think I've ever heard the Princess hold that title before. It will be interesting to see what you're doing with it.

Exhaustion LV.1: Disadvantage on ability checks.(including initiative)

Dear lord, I would've just quit at that point. :derpyderp1:

Is there gonna be more detail on the world setting in the next chapter?

Now this is quite the story to get behind! Gets right into it, develops quite well, enjoyable beyond belief, man it's all brilliant work! Definitely can't wait for more amazingness to come! I hope ya didn't mind, but I made a lil' reading for the Prologue and I hope ya don't mind of more chapters to possibly be read!

Audio Linky!~: https://youtu.be/3QDD2irngoM

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

It was so hard to read this I'm so tired I only slept 4 hours

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How did I not know about this

Look like she is plain unhappy for her life, dating-wise specially.

This is an Anon story that I ought to read.

BTW, i like the cover art. Fit well with the sour look.

Anon shows up on the 3rd chapter! For an anon story, you really put a lot of perspective on gleaming shield. I'm not really sure if I like the story too much though. It's at least a little interesting and there aren't that many chapters, so I will probably keep reading the updates until something else catches my eye. Good job on making a gleaming shield story though! There doesn't seem to be many of them from what I can find.

The kind of life sucks. If I had that king of schedule, I'd be thrown in jail for acts of violence.
Is it strange that I feel sorry for Gleaming?

Catching sight of Gleaming, Anon grinned widely. “Well paint me green and call me a cucumber. Gleaming Shield! Back once more for another hit!” Wiping his hands on his apron, he put them on his hips. “What? Did last night’s fix not last? Is your tolerance getting too high? Do you need more of the goods?”

I see what you did there. 😉

Does chapter 0 take place right after this, or is this just another horny stallion? If it is, I'd say the story would be better off starting with chapter 1 with chapter 0 taking place after this one, but that's just my opinion. Nice chapter anyway, before I was curious why Gleaming would be having disinterested sex when she has a crush already.

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