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oh my
he did it i don't feel bad for discord but now whats going to happen to zack now ???
RIP Discord (both figuratively and quite possibly literally)
Bored
Did you mean assault?
Nice pick of music, i approve :D
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assail is another term for attacking someone.
and thank you
This story was approved by Lord Beerus God of Destruction
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maby she gets his magic? she is according to this chapter already in possesion of a bit so the rest leaving discord and going to her wouldnt be out of the question
could what discord did tecnicly be classifyed as murder and soul tampering as if so and she has to go to court later that fact he killed her could help he case
DAMN Discord got fucked up great end for the first volume can't wait to see what you do for the next one keep up the great work
Called it.
HOLY FRICK. 1 DISCORD JUST DIED. 2 I can see why you have published so many chapters. Good freaking job man. This is good. Also if someone could tell me how to Redact the point 1 thing I would like that pls and thank you.
Welp, you just broke something. Let's see what happens to the world now.
I’m excited to hear about the second volume was curious about whether or not the story would continue after this chapter.
Discord*
Does this mean that discord is completely out of the picture? Or is it temporary and he comes back because of some voodoo, chaos magic, time trail, healing spells, etc type of stuff?
Ironic.
Also, where does Discord's neck end and body begin? Is he just made out of neck? :v
That was an epic ending. Hell i'd be ok with an epilogue where the ponies find a dying zack and try to save her but fail as Zack finally gains the peace she wants. All the while the ponies and Spike mourn her death but also relief that they will not have to deal with a potentially powerful villian later. Then the story ends! To me that would be fulfilling. But i'll see where you take this story now that Zack got her revenge but is now stuck in this world she DOES NOT want to be in. I see 1 of 2 outcomes and both aren't good for her: One she becomes the newest and most powerful villian Equestria ever sees. Or two she deals with the aftermath of this chapter and has to answer for the crimes of murder, assaulting a Princess, assaulting an Element of Harmory (so technically Treason), and vandalism. With these charges her punishment will either be banishment or Petrification or worse the death penalty
RIP in pepperonis Discord (I said it this way cause it’s what he would’ve wanted)
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And an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind is what I believe a judge would say. A better case would be temporary insanity.
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or maby there is some law in equestria that could help him as we know that discord said the only reason why zack could hurt him so much was bacaue he had discords chaos magic in her so if you streach it you could argue that zacks behavier was influenced by her situation, new body and the chaos and harmony magic which she didnt have when she was human so with all that it is reasonabl for her to get away with it to a degree.
unfortunatly i dont think celestia has the sense to just let zack be after this and help her out and will insted try and get her to stand trial and admit guilt for killing discord and damaging her castel (based on the fact she didnt reconise cadence had been replaced) which could lead to her either blowing up at her or breaking down again this time in sadness and emotional instability insted of rage.
personaly im hopeing for zack to go into a coma and get discords magic while the ponies bring her somewhere safe and dont just lock her up
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We’d be able to speculate more if the author told us what his ideas were if he’s having trouble deciding I’m sure we could help him decide by voting on it
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Not treason. She is not a part of the country. A foreigner can not be tried for treason. And insanity plea applies. And Discord murdered her first.
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Since she already stated that she hates this Equestria, maybe she would wander across the globe trying to find her peace of mind?
Zack isn't the monster girls, Discord is and now he's paid the price for his actions.
This is the first I see a named character responsible for human's abduction being punished. I really like it.
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See! The primordial spirit is dead!! DISCORD IS NO MORE!!
Amazing chapter. I loved it. Can't wait to see more!
big yikes.
so uh.... zack is the new spirit of chaos right? cause he might be the only source of chaos magic left in equestria.
damn... you killed Discord! i wonder what's going to become of zack after this
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True but two wrongs don't make a right, she stil murdered a creature even if she was provoked. Also she still hurt a hero of Equestria and a Roya, plus she did cause vandalism. The ponies will demand justice nonetheless. Also while true she is a foreigner she will be put on trial nonetheless. Since she is dead in her world they can't deport her which in any other situation would be the proper way a country would deal with the crimes commited by a foreigner on their land. So Celestia, Luna, and the mane 6 will have no choice BUT to put her on trial as one of their own citizens. Which will lead her to be found guity of treason in the eyes of all the ponies in Equestria.
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a creature that killed her first. after everythign he did. he deserved his fate. Sorry Zack is fully justified with everythign he has been through
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I agree but i still worry about what the ponies of Equestria will demand and i'm not talking about just the nobles of Equestria but everypony else too Celestia was hurt and will be scarred and so will Pinkie the ponies will demand justice and Celestia and Luna will have to put her to trial even if they don't want to or lose faith from the ponies they rule which cause more problems for them than just an emotionally distraught Zack.
First off Discord isn't dead just transported to another world in a brand new body as Zack said "now you share my fate" meaning Zach vaporized Discord took his soul and created a new body for him in another world
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Possibly. If that's true, then I'd love to see how he handles it.
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But how many saw it. We will see when thos updates again
I think this should be tears
Well, can't wait for the next part now. This got really interesting, fast!
Yep, Zack is a complete psychotic bitch and Discord's worst mistake.
My thoughts go towards Fluttershy. She was Discards truest friend, and would be the one who would morn the Sprit the most. Even wonder how she could ever forgive Zack, if that becomes necessary.
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Most Earthly legal systems do not look kindly at vigilantism. Sure there is 'Self Defense' but that is almost always disregard if there is an way to flee or escape. Zack can not claim Self Defense, he hunted Discord down.
Most historic and modern legal systems would now treat Zack More harshly than murderers. Why? Legal systems have to enforce the rule that government has the monopoly on violence, it's is a critical rule of civilized people's. Otherwise you end up with a legal system with no teeth, and no ruler wants private citizens to have more 'power' than sanctioned courts. That way leads to revolt and breakups.
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nope/ what Zack meant was: you vaporized and killed me.....you will suffer the same fate. nothing else! Discord is permanently RIP.
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the fic will continue, but I'm trying to finalize my notes and ideas for Volume 2.
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nope, he dead. PERMANENTLY!
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I'm glad I can satisfy.
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Zack's new body does have Chaos magic in it, but it doesn't make him the new spirit of chaos.
Discrrd ->Discord
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maybe it was just a clone called Discrrd that did it while the real Discord was away.
Then again I've been selectively ignoring any version of Discord that would do shit like this since it goes against my fluttershy x discord ship.
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Umm... That's not what he did to Zack, actually. Why not let Zack reborn Discord as an earth pony with only earth pony powers. Well, maybe a smidge of chaos too, but not enough to do anything above Pinkie's level of reality breaking. Would be fitting and still counts as a kill since now he WILL die.
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that was now what was going through Zack's head. she just wanted Discord dead.
Oh no, Zack, you have no idea what you just did...