follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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To quote a certain gentle dragon, have the courage to try. One may fail, but at least they made the effort.
It's like the difference between royalty and nobility, I suppose. Twilight counts as the former, while those like Prince Blueblood, for example, are the latter.
Er, that's gung ho.
To take a phrase from DWK, a friend isn't someone who won't tick you off from time to time. A friend is one who is worth forgiving whenn they do.
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and Spike is one forgiving motherf****! seriously, everything that the ponies--NO--the SHOW puts him through, usually by making it be the ponies, this little guy forgives them. like whenever Spike just disappears for the rest of an episode he had like an appearance in, or just be the gag tool, comic relief or life's punching bag.....this dude deserves more medals of BROH!
If you only knew.
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If you put much more pressure on that soap box, it's going to collapse.
I'm just gonna, hand this chair and rope to Latina, that seems like the right thing to do right now.
This is good so far, but please, stick to either male or female nouns, it is rather annoying. Unless it is on porpuse, but still... good story moar please
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the irony of this is she could have solved her problems by teleporting to see sunburst when she was little but didnt know how or where she was going either
Out of curiosity, what happened to the Friendship Castle after Twilight rule over Canterlot? Did she assign someone to take care her old Castle?
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And ironically, Spike does the best at becoming his friend. Who knew it woukd be as simple as enjoying a meal together?
Altogether the mane 6 have done better than I thought they would. Fluttershy being herself is a given, Applejack might bot like him but understands wanting to get back to home & family, and Rarity seems to have been tactful enough to not press things.
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sorry about the male and female nouns, i try to keep it where it is only female idioms. i'll edit any male nouns.
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i don't think so........i just assumed it was Starlight home now. since she doesn't have an actual home of her own.
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yeah, with Zack's thoughts, you can tell who can tolerate and might (that's a BIG might) actually consider friends. and as for Spike, their not exactly friends just yet, they're only acquaintances so far.
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Of course they aren't friends yet, but Spike is the one who has made the most progress on that front. He likely was doing it deliberately to make friends, and so was Applejack and Rarity. Spike did it how it normally happens, in an organic manner.
Really though I'm surprised nobody has pointed out that Celestia betraying Zack's trust and sending him to have q party when he was being led to believe he was going ti be helped become human and go home has shot the possibility of being his friend in the leg. By trying ti be his friend and having fun when they coukd be trying to get him home it says they are deliberately preventing him, and both Pinkie and Twilight are continuing this. Twilight herself asking him questions to research him says she doesn't care about him at all, because she woukd rather research HIM instead of helping him find a way home. This is also rather stupid of Twilight, as it gives him q reason to stonewall her finding anything out about him, as well as means she is less likely to find a way to his world, where she coukd research humqns to her heart's content. And Pinkie is just saying she thinks her having fun by partying is more important than Zack having fun or being happy.
Also of note is that there is a piny in equestria that doesn't have a cutie mark of their own. Given Starlight's bqckground I'd think that woukd get nore attention.
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-first off, can you really see the ponies questioning Celestia's line of thinking? in the show, the ponies only questioned 1--only ONE--of her decisions and that's Discord's reformation. as for Twilight, she already explained that her library doesn't have anything that could help Zack get home, so the reason she can spend her time constantly badgering Zack with questions, is because 'Oh Celestia has this, i can take it easy.' for Pinkie, the reason why she's so fixated on making Zack happy by trying to show her all the crazy stuff she can do, is because she is trying make Zack feel better until she gets home and is trying to be her friend to help her emotionally when Zack needs it.....but Pinkie has a spotty track record in when her plans to help people actually works.....just look at Filly Vanilly.
-this is actually going to come up in the next chapter. the reason why nobody has noticed Zack is mark-less, is because they were all distracted by the fact there is some that looks like Twilight, but is a completely different person from an unknown world. it's one of those small details that gets overlooked until someone calls or points it out.
I'm surprised no one is commenting on the thing at the end of this chapter. A very gleeful individual eating popcorn and sitting in a comfy recliner chair is obviously Discord. Also, loving this story so far keep it up!
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thank you, i hope my future chapters keep you engage. and, YEAH! no one is even seeing the hints i'm leaving that Discord is enjoying the situation that Zack is in.
Zack's friends and family are good people.
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and how do you feel about Zack?
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I like him. He seems like a truly reasonable person who cares for others. And he has a completely reasonable reaction. Bit weird how he can learn magic so fast but hey, he is in a copy of Twilight's body. Its probably subconscious on how fast he does it.
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that's only a little bit, as well a little bit of something else, but the reason why Zack is able to pick up Equestrian magic so fast is because he's quite literally a fast learner. it only takes him a while of practicing something to fully get the hang of it. it also helps that MLP magic doesn't have any define rules on how it works.
I can't say I can draw better, but holy creepy guacamole that's a slenderpony. There should be more body and a bit less legs and neck. His entire body is as thin as any of his appendages.
I like the story so far, though. While some reactions of Zack are quite uncalled for they are pretty understandable and believable. I mean, come on, (s)he acted like Celestia owed her something. Chill off and be happy that someone even care you exist and is willing to help in the first place.
I'd design a spell which would push away Pinkie if she approaches at a certain distance, though.
Three.
Well, after that piece of popcorn it already was obvious that he is involved and watching and droplet of soda only approved this.
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glad you like the story so far, and for the comment of the picture, that's just my style for ponies. never said i was great at it though. and for:
if Celestia didn't try to play a social game with Zack, and with held info to her student about the importance of Zack's desire to go home, then yeah. Zack would be happy. but Since Celestia pulled this move, he's more upset that a royal demi-god is trying to play Sims with him.
If there is an image at the end of the chapter, there isn't anymore. Nevermind, found it.
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the only image in the chapter is the one of my Twilight drawing.
Hrm. If he wants guards for Twilight, surely he deserves guards for himself as an alien. His points about what makes a princess a princess are... A bit misguided. For example, having guards isn't what gives you governing power, executing paperwork does not give you authority. Really, trying to push his ideals is at best unproductive to his cause (that being to return home in his original form) and at worse terribly disruptive.
Perhaps there's a deeper reason Discord encouraged this to happen...
“Latina” as a person’s name? Not the oddest name for a person I’ve heard but it’s up there.
is laputa an actual city or is it "the bitch" in spanish
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I'm pretty sure it is a reference to the Ghibli film.
[url=Laputa Castle in the Sky]https://ghibli.fandom.com/wiki/Castle_in_the_Sky
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you win a prize!
I mean... he's technically 20 or so
Now i wanna rewatch the movie
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maybe at the end of the TV show, but during the show's run time, Spike is somewhere between 11-15. as he did finally go through puberty when he gets his wings.
Great picture! Give us a good image of the differances.
Zack has enjoyed food and a place to sleep. Yet he didn't pay for anything. Zack is unreasonable agressive for a Begger...
Yet he was and was very aggressiv earlyer towards Spike unprovoked by the Little Dragon.
Ok, he has a very good point... I doubt Spike is payed for his work. Making him effectivly a child slave...
Yep. Discord... If he didn't do it he at least enjoys the Show...
Still so many mistakes even after being 'edited'
And i dig that Zack points out how annoying Pinkie can get with her parties. But he's acting like too much of a know it all.
I’m curious about these scenes from MC’s home and how they contribute to the plot.
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Zach is in a different world, completely different species and he has swap genders, there's a pink pony that violates his physical space. It's been like less than a week most likely the man is stressed,confused and scared give him a break.
I um, don't see a image- it says "upstream error"