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Zach will be the new changeling queen and make chrysalis her slave. That's the ending in hoping for
One wonders, how is this a resolution to anything. Equestria seems to accept something can be done and now we have what is likely an egg here, if anything it might make certain solutions much easier to implement. Nothing has changed really, theoretical termination has just been made more visual.
And yeah, it does seem like a bit of a cop-out. The story clearly asked a question from the main character and now, conveniently, he has an excuse not to choose anymore. Could be it is not so will be waiting.
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"You will put them but they will be just there, with no influence because the choice is already made."
So I was right, the choice was already made?
You could say that zack's situation is... Bugging, him! XDDDD sorry bad pun i know but cant be helped.
i mean now its up to zack on what to do now but with the...egg? out of her at least when chrisalis comes she can give her a good beating
Somepony call a doctor! Or a midwife! Preferably both.
the Changeling royal family is messed up
I kinda want to see Zach have combat training so that they can show Chrysalis what it means to piss off a human. Heehee
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Well, they are full of holes - both physically and mentally.
well.... chrysalis dosnt just have issues... she has stock in the magazine.... and best of luck to zack.... all the same.... das nasty....
I guess this way is better than the alternative....
Eggs?
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That's usually how stories work, yeah. You plan the story then write it out.
Not a big surprise?
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don't worry she'll get her chance.
how do you think this birthing will go?
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how do you think its all going to go down? for both Zack and Chrysalis?
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considering on how we the fandom generally think of the changelings pre-reformation, i think its fairly accurate. especially how demented, and mental Chrysalis is throughout the show.
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and how do you think its going to go down?
This chapter was too short!!! Come on don't do me like this I need more!
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I know that i look forward to finding out.
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its all the better in making want readers wanting more, but don't worry, the next chapter should be done some time tomorrow, or the day after.
I'm guessing eventually Chrysalis will face either justice or revenge but there's been no mention of anything happening to the other changelings who took part in the gang rape, are they just being let off without penalty?
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no they were imprisoned. I'm certain I mentioned it in a previous chapter. aside form that, how did you find Chrysalis internal struggle with her dead mom?
The idea of it being Zack's choice is bullshit. They're the reason he hasn't gotten rid of it yet, because they've kept on about how he must keep it and killing it to spare him the trauma is evil. They care more about allowing Zack's abuser what sge wanted than his own wellbeing. I hope they actually do something about all this instead of just forcing him to bear it, which it looks like they ate doing. If they really make him bear it I don't think I coukd c9ntinue reading, that's just too beyond the pale.
Well, now Chrissy has another aspect of her insanity. Quick, get her some pieces of wood!
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with how the changelings were under Chrysalis's rule, and how Chrysalis herself is, I figured this is one of the reason's why the queen is so messed up in the head.
I like how you developed Chrysalis better than the chimpanzees that run Hasbro's writing staff ever will.
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Chimpanzees?! You're giving them too much credit!
I’m pretty sure twilight’s castle is in the northwestern part of the town.
I really hope this isnt a miscarriage because I'm gonna be sad....
Well... That happend... AAANNND next chapter!