follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Yeah, I honestly can't blame Zack. The show is cute and all. But some of the ways ponies act would not make them popular in our society. Hell, I'm pretty sure half of pinkie pie's antics would get sugar cube corner shut down for health threats.
discord or zack having chaos magic?
10/10 i wane more ! :)
Oh god. Reality is breaking. Objects from one universe is being sent here, Zack was lucky. How long until someone enters this world but in the sky and, not used to wings, dies? This is going to end very very bad. So get the chair and rope I suggested last chapter. Your gonna need it.
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i'm glad your liking what i got so far, hopefully future chapters keep you reading.
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that's why Pinkie, for me, is 2nd WORST PONY! I don't care what others say to try and defend Pinkie, the way she does things, like constantly needs to intrude on personal space, not think things through or have general hindsight, having her character progression or just general solid character traits being constantly re-conned or just erased, as well as just her random personality, makes me want to pull my hair out! despite some of the good and passable things Pinkie does in the show, 85 or 90% of the time, Pinkie's random personality just ruins her character. because she is designated as the, Random crazy cartoon character, of the show everything sensible that the show and her friends do make her feel like she's just.....out of place.
and this is why Pinkie is going to be one of the biggest things that frustrate Zack until he gets home.
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Does Twilight have chaos magic?
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not exactly, but your close.
how did i do with the whole 'Celestia tries to do a social experiment with Zack' thing?
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no but twilight is a full mare and zack is a mare with extra "baggage" so it wasent out of the question that i would think zack might have chaso magic. i am exited to know what is going on with the sudden telaport to equestria and the popcorn and rootbear though
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in charicter
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Should he get the chair and the rope tho?
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Celestia left out all the important information about him, and instead just told Twilight to make friends with him.
This bit right here says that Pinkie is not, and never has been Cranky Doodle's friend. It ignores the fact that her trying to force Cranky gave him reason to hate her forever, and irs only by sheer luck he doesn't still hate her.
Really, given how deadset he is on going home helping him is the only way they CAN becone his friends. As things are their idea of being friends is keeping him there and preventing him from making progress while they have parties and play games, which ultimately means they can't be friends.
Ah, Pinkie. People want an example of why she's my pick for Best Pony? Yo.
Have a like.
Chose your next words... VERY. Carefully.
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Conflict of comments. Season 1. Now fight.
If you want to shut her up fast, bring up the Manhattan Project.
What brand?
Kidding. Kidding. My All Time fave, though.
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Iiiii'm more the Love and Tolerate type.
Though, yes, Pinkie will likely frustrate Zack to no end (or for a while at least), the fact that she still wants to TRY ti be Zack's friend made me smile. The fact that she's willing to give Zack a chance even if Zack is... optimistically -justifiably, yes, but still- antisocial at this point...
Will she get through Zack's sourness? Maybe.
Will she just let him be? Likely not.
Will-
Well. the rest is in the author's hands, isn't it?
I'm sorry, but the author's discretion is not changing my opinion of her.
(puts down "weapon")
You'll never get a clearer shot.
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Takes pinkie pie hostage. Author wins I I kill her. You win I spare. Now fight.
Seriously Celestia. What the FUCK!? Where in your head did you think omitting that detail was a good idea? No wonder Luna and Sunset happened.
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who knows with how it blew up in her face she might see what was wrong with her actions now. or she could go with the im older i know best route but i hope she see's and properly appologises after zack has cooled down
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You know... she could probably just... put herself back together or something eqully random, right?
Though really, there's no need to go to pieces about it.
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Considering her track record. I doubt she will learn
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I pinkie promise that I will make you fight the author.
If that's not overly aggressive human turned pony, I don't know what is.
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I will put it this way. Pinkie Pie, as much as she may act like it, is not a dog, is not a child and is smarter than you might give her credit for. Wise? Perhaps not. Boisterous? Absolutely. Overly eager? Massive check. Not all there? Who is, these days?. She is and for the nonce shall remain the pony in my number one spot and the one that I identify with the second most.
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Who said I didn't think she was smart? I just wanna see a fight. But ok fine. I'm out.
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you'll have to wait for the relevance of those. but to officially answer your question, no, Zack does not have chaos magic. he is a one-for-one perfect copy of Twilight. and since Twilight has no chaos magic, neither does Zack.....but he will gain some other type of magic later on.
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........maybe
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i knew there's reason why i love your comments.
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if someone likes Pinkie, more power to them, i just don't like how the creators of the show use her 85% of the time. and for Zack's sourness.....i wouldn't really say he's sour, he's just really on edge. cause he's not in his own body, he's not in his own reality, so he has no idea what to expect the world to throw at him. so he's more on edgy and frighten of what might happen.
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Thank you! this is Why Celestia is only 2nd place for best princess in my general opinion, cause she pulls these stunts so many times in the show. and if she's suppose to be so wise and have 1000yrs of life experience, she should, theoretically, be able to handle EVERYTHING that the show throws at the Mane 6.
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OH! when Zack sees all the crazy bull sht that Pinkie can do, and no pony else can, Zack will have his mind flipping tables forever.
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can you blame Zack, after what just happen this day?
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I'll take that as a yes and I shall now prepare to open a shop or something that says it sells a lot of things but mostly sells rope, chairs,baths and toasters. Time to prepare to end it. And make money.
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I put her last myself. Cadance 3rd mainly because we don't see enough of her ruling to get a good feel.
Again by all we can see where ignored Luna's issue till she became Nightmare moon. Then fails to see Sunset's issue at best too late. Then the wedding fails to notice how out of character Cadance is while Twilight, who hasn't seen Cadance in a while spots the issues right away. Note Celestia likely sees Cadance daily so WTF. Also fails to notice the hippogriff going to ground. A so called ally. Look in the shows run and how many of the struggles Twikught had to deal with because Celestia failed to properly take care of it? And after only 6 years max of being an alicorn she thrusts Twilight all the responsibility of ruling Eqyestria and for some god damn reason the sun and moon to. Even though we saw very little training to actually rule the country. Yes at season 9 Twilight is a good leader but not a good ruler, yet again little if any training.
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That's understandable. If I'm corect, Pinkie knows that. But if she just leaves Zack be, it'll be even LESS likely that Zack will open up AT ALL. Like I said, she's smarter than most give her credit for.
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true. but......this is Pinkie, predicting her is like Discord playing golf normally. also, when has Pinkie not stick her nose into someones affair once she catches wind of their plight, and tries (with varying degrees of success to failure) to help?
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There are a few ways this confrontation could have gone differently. From Celestia point of view Zach is just an changeling with extremely good imagination. Pinkie Pie familiar with Cranky Doodle so the best thing she could have done is to adjust her behavior in front of him.
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i can see the changeling idea, but when it comes to Pinkie, can you see her actually greeting anyone else in any other way than her usual way?
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maby if maud was in earshot to rein her in maby?
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Well, based on the season 1 episode 1,2 I could see both Zach and Pinkie actively ignoring each other, even though the party still happening without Zach's consent and everypony else enjoying said party.
You talked about hygiene to a ponies, who ate things with their front hooves, the exact same bare hooves they use to walk around?
You are in the world of sapient colorful ponies with magic power, and you expect things not strange to you?
Bullshit.
Pinkie, ever the quitter.
But seriously, I see this error in SO many aspiring writer's works, missing a "n't" or a "not" or something else of that sort, making something oposite when it shouldn't or vice-versa.
Good Luck!
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thanks for the catch
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in the show they are shown more times just using their mouths, and just eating like a normal equine. the only time they use their hoofs is if the food is hoof size.
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