follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Have they discussed going through the portal to the EqG world at least it will give him a way to be human even if it is a female
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the Eq.G will not be featuring in this fic, as i consider Eq.G franchise as none canon to the actual TV show. sure i could take some creative liberty, but i like to keep MLP: FiM and the Eq.G franchise separate when i write fics.
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zack needs someone who will help her heal and not push her about things and since she already has a bond with spike and twilight has guilt over what has happend zack might accept such a relationship to a small degree. at the very least she is more likely to open up and rely on twilight, thorax and spike
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and what about Sunburst? do you think she can trust Sunburst to this extent as well after reading this new chapter?
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Right now zack seems to have a safe place with thorax and spike (twilight to a lesser extent) so it might not be the best plan for sunburst to get close now zack already has alot of things going on to sort through and adding too much could make her overwelmed. might i suggest that you have her get one of the things effecting her solved like maby twilight starts reserch to look for ways to help zack retern home or zack takes a bit more time and decides on her stance with the baby. im pretty sure your not going to use chrisalis yet but solving one of these issues that havent been touched in the sense of a resolution to them or advancment could help with zacks recovery. or it could not im not sleeping right and feel bad so this could just be nonsense
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Ok btw that last part with Sunburst treating her to dinner smelled like a date am I reading too much for it after all the baby will need a father
Good attitude.
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We will have to wait and see, won't we?
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its more of a friendly date, nothing romantic.
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well Sunburst is not going to a 'friend' material yet. he's more of a happy passerby, i do have plans for him down the road but that is still in R&D. and don't worry, the issue with the baby will be finally addressed in ch. 39....at least once i get the draft done.
as for Chrysalis, i do want to touch down on her, like show you what she's up to and not just have her out of sight and out of mind until she pops up for her fifteen minutes of fame....like in the actual show.
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it might be worth it for starlight to make a gesture to zack like a locket that defends her against mind control. could help her feel better
Nice
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I think looking for a way to send Zack home would be a moot point considering his soul is considered dead by earth rules I mean you could retcon it but then what's the point of killing discord if you do?
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what i was thinking is them either trying to and eventualy figuring out how to change zacks status back to alive or for them to try and then come to the relisation they can get her freinds and family a way to come visit insted. while it is probs not going to happen discord has show he is aware and can break the rules of realitys to a degree otherwise he wouldent have been able to take zacks soul in the first place so if discord could do that then it is likely with ponys like twilight it might be possible for them to at least give zack some time to go home and visit once again.
Not sure why, but I thought of this when I read the title.
sooo, yeah that is all.
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Wouldn't be the same. Remember the EqG world "mirrors" the Equestrian world, not his world.*nudge nudge* mirror portal. Even if he does go there, only thing he will have is his mirrored EqG body, not his real body or his family. It be more cruel to do this since it will remind him on what he lost.
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But at least he would be human again instead of a pony so he would have one of the three things that was taken (family, gender and species) his species back again
10731117
EXACTLY! if i recon Zack being able to go home, while also re-gaining a human body......then 80% of this fic would be pointless.
10731519
Yeah he would be human again. A lonely human with no family. Zach seems to value family and friends greatly. You can make new friends, but you cannot replace the family lost. Again, it would be a painful reminder on what he left behind in his world. Pain at this point of the story he doesn't need.
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(author nods their head in agreement)
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It seems that being human at all is something he woukd value, given there's no real reason to want to stay a pony even if he is stuck in equestria. For ine, people woukd stop calling him a mare.
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still though, if i give Zack a way to regain his 'physical' humanity, that still makes more than 2/3rds of this fic pointless. also, even if Zack goes to the Eq.G universe her pony body would just changes species, not gender.
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im gonna go with "the bitch"in spanish
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its actually from the Ghibli film, and its one of my favorites.
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I'm not saying they should just happen to find a magic wand that fixes everything in an instant, but that them not attempting to find a way for him to be human again doesn't really make sense. It would be like if Spike was turned into a donkey and they just expected him to be happy like that and not try to be a dragon again.
Sunburst seems like the kind of pony to be able to research a way to at least communicate with the original world for a time, gain some closure and all that.
Hey, I am not FAT! In case you are having a funny idea, mister.
Interesting I binge read this from yesterday to today gotta say I ain't disappointed keep it up
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well i'm happy to see that you enjoy what i have written so far. hopefully you'll stick around for the conclusion to this whole thing.
Now that Zack is willing to talk about his home world, even if he wasn't a engineer or scientist back on Earth, just common knowledge of the existence of some of earth's advance technology could bootstrap Equestria's technically development. For example even if he personally doesn't know morse code, just getting a crude description of a telegraph out in the public would trigger some pony into inventing it.
grammar
my
Do you have an editor?
After all Zack get trough i think she/he deserves a lot of peace...