follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Aw this nice.
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this is where the HEALING process officially begins!
Good. That's why luna is my favorite princess.
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im happy that zack gets this. on a side note with what happend since zack got to equestria would they have better security and stuff now
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assume so, but wait till you see any confirmation about the guards being more, competent and capable.
Damn, right in the feels!
I smell spelling mistake
Somewhere nearby, Big Macintosh sneezed
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Agreed
He's being too harsh on himself. He has ever right to be angry and his actions were justified. Aside from Spike none of them really cared about being his friend. Tentatively adding Rainbow Dash to that short list, seeing as how she seems to be the only one who cares about his mental wellbeing with how she says he shouldn't have to give birth to Chrysalis' child.
And really, I'm still waiting for the ponies to either cross or turn back from the moral event horizon of whether or not they want him to carry and birth the changeling's offspring.
I do not understand, he forgives too easily all the wrongs and ignorance of the rulers and elemental bearers. and still has the hideous gift of the pupa. Where is this determination of the story hero? so easily accepts the gift of rape?
nice uplifting chapter.
i wonder if they will see throue the dream's what realy happend to zack in the queen's clutches.
is the little bastard in zack already too old to be removed ? he could just get rid of it just spitt in chrysi's face.
but that bitch queen wont care anyway
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Well for one, it would mean that Zack wouldn't have to raise Chrysalis' offspring. Two, Zack was raped, she shouldn't be forced to have the child if she doesn't want to. And three, I personally feel that keeping the child would only make her situation worse.
What in the name of the flying spaghetti monster is wholesome furniture?
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polished wood furniture's, which includes bamboo, nothing to fancy yet not to plain
what a heart warming chapter with a good bonding moment between luna and zack.
has a rape monster from a chrysalis. why do I accept something like that in myself? I don't see Zack return yet. does he still have free, unrestrained will to make his own decisions? because I can see that he is forced, forced with no choice for himself. only ponies, like a slave. I still don't understand the hero's posture, was Satan's crystal heart working on brainwashing? Because after rescuing him, he doesn't act as long, though a bit like before he was kidnapped. I loved this unchanging, tough man, he knew what he wanted, and he wasn't soft and naive (it happens to everyone). I'm starting to doubt the main character, he becomes ultra soft with no old backbone. (like any other character from other stories where ponies force you to be ponies because ponies are xenophobic, are you human? Are you an ex-human ?. to be free and enslaved) (thought like a pony and lived like a pony and served his master without batting an eye)
Storm hidden with wall, for now,
Ah mistress of dreams is comforting her in the dream world and suddenly just as a afterthought a long-lost memory involving babies and holding them appears.
How convenient... happenstance.
I felt the author of the story relieved. I start to feel nauseous when another kind of cool hero acts like a slave to ponies. How does Zack wake up and literally do anything to be free? calms my conscience
"Zack is not going to commit suicide, she's not that far gone. sure, she is traumatically damaged, but not to where she's going to kill herself. as for 'taking matters into her own hands'. yes, Zack will take a lot of measures to ensure that she will not be ANYONE's plaything, or be manipulated."
Still disgusted and enraged from the last chapter, that you have now pushed aside and minimalized... You've lost a reader and you should feel ashamed of yourself.
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well sorry that this dark fic about a human being put suffering before finding some kind of semblance of normality, made you dis-interest in seeing where i take this story. and by the by, I do not agree to rape pregnancy! it is disgusting, and horrid! but that is my personal take, and I never let personal feelings of ideologies affect what I write, draw or create. what you see in anything I make is for entertainment, not moral debate.
again, sorry that you decided to let this fic go.
To be honest I expected a different reaction. I mean, maybe Zack is just broken and can't be fixed (would be an interesting concept but I don't expect him or the ponies to see anything wrong with his change, they probably don't care as it looks like he has adopted their way their believe, their ideology so he can't be broken in their eyes, and he is to far damaged to do anything himself.). But I had expected him to get rid of the parasite in himself, and shut everyone except Thorax and Spike out of his live, hating this world who had only hurt him. Maybe even develop a dangerous dependency on Thorax and Spike to the point he can't function without one of them or becoming a violent mess that leashes out to anyone else but this two. But just being broken into a pony mindset? And I can already see them using this situation to get him to forgive all the ponies who had wronged him and to accept any punishment for his rage at discord and the damage he caused (ignoring it was the ponies who enabled Discord to do this by freeing him and forgiving him after Tirek without punishment).
But I will keep my mind open and will see what you come up with so far this story was a great read and I can't wait to see the twist on this one. I just can't believe that Zack will stay broken forever and we will never see the strong willed upstanding Human, who calls the ponies out on their bs, ever again.
Could they possibly develop some sorta of communication link with Earth, so he could at least talk to them? Wondering if that might be possible, since he can't return back there.
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IF there is a possibility, how would Zack's family react?
imagine just seeing an image of Twilight Sparkle, talk and act like she knows you, and all the while Zack's family is still mourning and grieving for his death. do you think that the family would honestly, and realistically just blindly say that this talking four foot pony is their son, put into a hermaphrodite pony's body, without freaking out and think they are going crazy?
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...So use the projection to ease them into it. Or heck, mirror portal so they could visit. Home is where the heart is, and if you can't go to where your heart is, bring it to you.
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1.) the projection is still just going to be the image of a tiny purple horse talking to the mourning family.
2.) the mirror portal only takes you to the humanized version of G4, not Earth.
3.) and while the home is where your heart is.........after everything that has happened to Zack. if you were in her situation, would you want to live in such an unpredictable world where the rules of reality and common sense are so drastic and strange. could you ever feel comfortable, or even safe in this world, especially with all the crazy bullsh*t that happens around the Mane 6 on a weekly biases?
one of the main things I'm going with this fic is that, no matter how much Equestria looks like a paradise or a better place to be, there are dangers and evils so crazy and bombastic that a normal person from our world, wouldn't be able to handle it. after all, if you were put in Zack's position, and you've gone through ALL of this, do you think you can mentally handle Equestria?
At this point it's morbid curiousity to read on...
The child will have a loveless life probably full of fear and hate. Poor thing.