follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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fair punishment but will they start zacks before or after he is awake? i mean would it be fair for him to wake up and then be told he is confined to the castel? i was expecting them to bring up that he went for the head but with them brushing it off does that mean he had restraint and it wouldnt have killed anyone who wasent an alicorn or is he only getting off without attemptid murder because he was an alicorn?
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your question seems a bit un-clear, at least to me. are you asking about Zack's punishment, or Shinings?
Huh. A chapter I can't say anything related to a chair and a rope. Good show my dear author. Good show indeed. I'm surprised discord isn't eating popcorn while watching this. In all seriousness good chapter.
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oh don't worry, Discord is scarfing down all kinds of junk movie food there is.
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Ah. Can I have some of his popcorn then? I'm gonna need it while reading this.
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(Discord's lion's paw appears beside you, a large bucket of overly buttered and salted popcorn held in it, with a little flag that says: Eat Up!)
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can I get more butter tho? I wish to drown the popcorn in it... actually Discord might actually drown the popcorn. So thanks discord.
good chapter i was it was longer
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this was more of an extension of the last chapter. i'm trying to keep these chapters within the 3000 to 4000 words, as i find it more easier for me. otherwise i'll burn myself out in trying to make LONG chapters, and try to figure out how to cut them off to lead to the next chapter.
Wouldn't it be crazy if more people showed up as a Twilight clone? Like Latina or Amber.
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maybe. but i can assure you, Zack is the only clone of Twilight.
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That only fuels my theory!
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oh! you have a theory about my story, me wanna hear!
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kind of both for zacks i was saying that it seems fair that he is punished at least a little but think it should apply for him since it it judged and not when he wakes up.
and the shining question was if shining did his attack on a regular pony or a chnagling would it be a diffrent story (like are alicorns tougher in your story and would the shot have killed or maimed any other creature). if it is the case would him doing an attack that would kill a regular pony or changling on zack count as attemptid murder as he thought he wasent a alicorn so if zack wasent one he would have been maimed or killed?
Long story short is zacks punishent starting before he wakes and did shining try murder a changling in cold blood in a public area?
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There's going to be clones of other characters, like shining armor and cadence. Perhaps people are just being randomly pulled into Equestria and put into they body of a random pony.
This has probably been happening for years, but this is the first time it's happened with the clone of somepony famous. It would explain the duplicate background ponies we see in the early seasons.
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OH! okay.
So, for Zack, his punishment will start the moment he awakes. him being unconscious is going to be viewed as an extension to his punishment.
As for Shining Armor and the debate of how strong alicorns are. I've always viewed alicorns to be, not superman levels of stronger than average ponies, but they are more durable than normal ponies. now in regards to Shining's assumption of, attempted murder.....Zack will bring this up when he wakes, and will ask for a bit more of a harsher punishment. because if Shining landed more clean shots, Zack would assuredly, be dead.
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....hmmmmm, that is an interesting idea......although, for the story layout i have for, THIS, fic. i don't think it would work, because then i'll have to juggle multiple humans freaking out about being in different bodies, having different experiences to the whole thing, and figuring out what to do with them through out the whole fic.
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oh sorry i don't want to push you and burn you out this is a good story and i really like to see it to the end
I am against any kind of punishment for Zack. Royal or not Shining attacked and kept doing so. She has full right to defend herself there is nothing fair here. NO PUNISHMENT FOR ZACK
Yeah. You should be safe until then.
They may be mad at Shining Armor, but they also have a share of the blame considering they never informed him of Zack. It makes me wonder if any of them are actually making attempts to fix him, instead of just trying to play games and happily be "friends".
Also there seems to be too many commas in your sentences, as well as some incorrect punctuation.
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it was a surprise visit. no real time to tell him
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Edit: Nevermind, just scrolled down and read author's comment. Lmao
Well in retrospect, maybe Zack wouldn't mind staying cooped up.. or he'll disregard any punishment for himself out of stubborn spite.
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he still should not be punished for defending himself.
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ok , what do you think would happen if a politician slapped someone but then the other person slap back? It's the other person who goes to jail, thats the sad reality of today
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But this is not just a slap. This was a full out assault. And that first strike had the potential to be a kill shot. Being not only a royal but a former captain Shining KNOWS better. Just because he is royalty does not give him care blanch to wail on a pony. Zack is fully justified to fight back. Thus it is not justice to punish Zack for merely defending himself
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Fair, plus. Shoot, this could be an issue, he could lash out and attack both Thorax and Spike with no consequence. Thinking Spike is a changeling as well
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yup. this wasn't a blow and a coutnerattack. but blow coutnerattack and further blows. Shining was determine to subdue Zack no matter what so Zack had no choice.
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I never meant tell him when he arrived, I meant tell him "there is now two of twilight" shortly after they found out instead of waiting several days.
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considering how Twilight learned of the wedding they are incompentent in that
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sorry about that, i'm trying to correct those.
as for the statement of the ponies not informing others...........ponies don't have the best track record of communicating to one another about, important stuff in the show. so, the ponies completely skipping the fact that Zack is here, i can by that.
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no problem. the only time i would try to do longer fics, say around 10,000 words, if its a very detailed one shot.
but other than that, thanks for enjoying this fic i came up with, and hope future chapters keep you hooked.
Wither -> whether
At least twice.
I love how Celestia's actions in this chapter have basically proven Zack right about her. That and how Twilight basically completely forgot about how she wanted Shining Armor charged to the greatest extent of the law, and then Celestia just goes ahead and basically says "yeah, I'm pardoning you and putting Zack under house arrest for attacking royalty" showing her usual extreme favoritism and manipulative nature. I have a feeling that Zack is going to be pretty angry at the fact that he's being punished for acting in self defense against what was effectively lethal force against her. After all, he's got a concussion, likely from the initial attack that started the situation. Not to mention, falling asleep or unconscious after having a concussion masks signs of serious brain damage such as seizures and weakness on one side of the body. For all they know she could have a permanent traumatic brain injury and Celestia just says "too bad, no justice for you. In fact, you get punished instead."
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Oh! That reminds us, we should double check against what other authors have done with shining in similar situations. For example, in one fic Twilight essentially loses her memory after fighting Chrysalis in the Crystal Empire and being forcibly ascended on order to save her life (pretty big Spoilers for the end of that book in the series so we'll not name names), but even that Shining didn't attempt murder. Most AU instances have him (sensibly) back down rather quickly.
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What story?
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The fic where the scene occurs is Little Consequences but it's a pretty long series and that's the middle of it.
She's not wrong... I mean, when was the last time (in any fic, really, that wasn't a slice-of-life) that something like this didn't blow up in everyone's snouts, somehow? :D
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Well, thank you kindly for pointing me to a fic I already had on one of my "to read" lists. That bumped it up near the top of the queue.
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😅
*coughs* Tirek!
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true. BUT! that is when Twilight was juiced up on not only her magic but 3 other alicorns. we never actually seen standard Twilight show the upper levels of how much damage she can do with no powerups.
by the way: how are you liking my fic? sorry if my Grammer still needs a LOT of work.
It's better then killing shining and most of the town
Wether
So her fight against tirek doesnt count?
I honestly don't even care about what happens on his earth so I've just been skipping them all
Multible days until he wakes up? After 3 without drinking water one dies normaly. Guess they put him in the hospital and supply the body with VI's until Fake Twilight awakens.
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That's human parameters and even so, humans knew how to solve this problem without IV for centuries.