follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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OH WE ARE SO FU-
To be entirely fair to Zach, it's a testament to her patience and resilience that she withheld from losing it, going Nightmare, and blowing people into chunk salsa for as long as she has. The fact that Chrysalis very much deserved to go out this way should give her some leeway.
I hope that someone can reach through to her before things get out of hand.
would an insane zack truely let chrisalis rest though? also im guessing zacks new form is like it is due to the chaos and dark magic in her system
For the ambiance. I seriously don't see how this could've ended any other way, Twilight. Zack wasn't going to let her live, even before this chapter. No, sir. Although, I think only Thorax can help Zack now.
Wow, a quick death for her
Awww... tbh I was hopping for torture session. Chrysalis is lucky bastard to receive such quick death.
2 chapters is this is well done cant wait to see what happens later
ooh Chysalis in your dying moment you've unleashed an unhinged and manic possible enemy on Equestria because you couldn't let bygones be bygones. Now you unleashed a terrible and manic force on Equestria you stupid dead b**ch
I think Queen Bug died too easily. And I would hate to see they imprison Zack in stone.
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To be fair, her free trial of living has ended after all the BS Zach went through.
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Perfect. Hey Chrysalis, Don't go around tonight
Well it's bound to take your life
There's a bad moon on the rise
Yay, Chrysalis is dead!
Not yay, Zack went Nightmare Moon.
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True but did she have to push Zack so far she went full Nightmare Moon. Now Equestria has an unhinged grieving mare who can turn either villain or merciless vigilante. I pray Thorax lives as of right now that may be the only way to save Zack from the dark path she is walking now, I think the only way for Zack to regain her sanity is Thorax now
man really said:
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sorry if this chapter was a bit short, i wanted to do a bit more.
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You have nothing to be sorry for. Just continue to tell this story and I will be happy. One request. Maid outfit. No idea how you'll do it if you even will. But I just want it in there some how some way. Have a nice day
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i had this particular idea in my pocket for some time, what do you think of it? it wasn't forced was it?
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i did initially wanted to extend it where Zack obliterates Chrysalis, then uses her chaos magic to mold her back together and repeat the process over and over. but i felt it would've just dragged it out, and had me force Twilight and crew to fight her just to stop her.
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what do you think of Zack's nightmare form?
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it's partially due to the chaos and dark magic, but i tried to go with pain and suffering. the red part of Zack's body is supposed to represent pain, and the blue part of her is suffering.
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well Zack was in like a state of shock. after all, the person she tried to save had just died before her, and she failed to do what she came to do. not only that but this is the 2nd time Thorax had his life basically forfeit in order to save Zack's own life.
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Let’s hope it’s the vigilante one.
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Definitely intimidating but she is also unhinged and mad with grief. Please tell me Thorax will survive because I think the only way to stop Zack from going even more insane because right now Ithink only Thorax can save her now
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me too even a murderous vigilante is better than a completely insane villain
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*panic ensues*
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i'm afraid you'll just have to wait till next chapter to see if he is alive or not
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Not too forced imo, there was a lot of leadup to this point, not surprising zack has turned on angy mode
Is it odd at all that I want to see the EoH get their asses handed to them by a berserk Zack? I mean, they never truly bothered to care about him or make up for everything. Especially after the whole pregnancy thing, I can only dispise them after that.
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just add a pic of twisted Zack
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just added a pic of twisted Zack
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just added a pic of twisted Zack
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Yeah we can still work with that
Wow and here I thought she was going to go all non con on them and give them eggs
These last two chapters are good, but they seemed somewhat rushed judging by what mistakes I saw in them. Overall, it's a nice way to continue the story and I look forward to seeing how they deal with the monster of the hour.
nooooo! i want amputation porn!
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I have a question what is this twisted Zack's name?
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haven't really come up with one for it. all 'Nightmare' versions of the alicorns have a corrupted play on the words in their name. like 'Nightmare Moon', 'Daybreaker', and etc,
Looks like one half has water like qualities while the other half is fire
Because what Chrysalis did earlyer wasn't bad enough
i was hoping zack would be so done with chrysalis' shit that he just wrings her like a wet rag, like that scene from mob psycho 100 where mob 'gives up' and twists the bosses body like a string. i am very glad it came to be.