follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Family isn't just who your parents are and your siblings, its whoever you want. Your friends can be your family, or people you care for and they in return do too.
10723443
that's why i left the ending ambiguous, Zack doesn't know what to do here.
Aw dats sad. But yea Crystonian had the best comment to this chapter.
I can't see Zack coming back. they put some shitty thoughts into his head. I am beginning to doubt that he will be independent and free again.
Nice
10723454
Well we already know what HE wants, to get rid of it. Keeping it was something impressed upin him by the ponies, who tried to drill it as something horrible and criminal, thereby trying to use guilt to force him to keep it. That's how I see it.
Also, you're really drawing this part out more than it needs to be.
10724314
I agree. Get rid of it.
10724314
what? OH! no i was talking about Zack being unsure if she can accept a new family, not the adoration thing.
that's going to be taken care of in 2 Ch. from this one.
10724761
i already have a plan for the inborn baby. the ending of this chapter was about can Zack accept others as a new family, or not.
10723474
kucyki niczego nie wszczepiły Zackowi, nadal jest wyczerpana psychicznie po uwolnieniu z zaklęcia Poczwarki. więc nie martw się, mam już plan co do dziecka, a Zack stanie się samowystarczalny, tylko… nie teraz. podczas gdy ona jeszcze wraca do zdrowia.
10723472
but can Zack actually accept Twilight's offer to be the new family that Zack might need? or will Zack just remain families as to not abandons the memory of his old family.
10725072
Hopefully yes.
Which brings to mind...
Okay, that's cute.
From the reaction of Celestia earlier and the general attitudes towards Jacks decisions i am not sure how genuine Twilight is at the moment. Was this fully, or even slightly her idea? We did see how Luna slides in a dream that suits her needs and now we have Twilight wanting to be a family.
Is she doing it in attempt to affect Zack is it pity and guilt or does it come from genuine foundation. To me it would be really hard to accept this kind of an offer in situation where there are so many factors. Do note how he talks about Luna cheering him up but does not even acknowledge the dream which was implanted, might be he does not even remember which is very insidious.
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that's actually why i left the ending ambiguous, i wanted to see what YOU, my readers think Zack should do. i have a vague idea where i wanted to go with this idea but nothing concrete yet.
not many people remember any dreams that they have, even if it was something like Zack's own dream.
10726936
but do you think its a good move?
Might wanna correct that to appreciate.
Twivine would have words with Zack. The question isn't just about whether it's technically true...
Wait... didn't you already do the dissapearing table episode back in volume 1?
10990632
no
The Authors not saved a newborn and the MC Zack a lot of suffering without reward.
And suddenly not so alone anymore
I can see a few options. Maybe MC keeps the child and raises it into a changeling-hunter. Or maybe it will never know about its relation to Chrysalis and is taught the truth about her later. Or given to Shining Armor to raise as his changeling-hate punishment…