follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOO (yaaayy because mor story) BUT NOOOOOOOOOOO
Hah, as if its going to be that easy. The black tar is because the spell deemed him too dangerous or not good to be send back im assuming. He did have a bad temper and have bad first impression.
In short Zack, man up and be a better person THEN you can go home
already working on the next chapter to give you guys to read. but no promises that i will be able to upload it any point today.
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.....actually....there's a more horrible reason why he can't go back.
zack going to blow up everything everypony run away zack is going to go mad
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Hm, another guess is that his 'blood' is a perfect copy of Twilight's and the portal didn't stabilize because it just the same spot/Equestria. Or.. the one who brought him there didn't want to let him leave.. ever.
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your halfway correct, but there is a bigger reason why Zack can't go back. and the one who brought him to Equestria will explain everything, all with joyful glee.
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Well crap, guess we now know who'll be on Zack's number 1 on his crap list. Haha, someones gonna die...
Though hopefully, he get to forgive Starlight later.. especially when she saved his life during the changeling infiltration/rescue
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my current guess is he is dead at home or that he is ment for something in equestria? possibly something to do with chaos magic if the random items appering is anything to do with this
Yeah this outcome was very predictable
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and what outcome is that?
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oh yea, you did say that in a previous chapter.i thought it was a misunderstanding at the time, kind of difficult to go back with that kind of thing in play.
That would be hoard. Like a hoard of treasure.
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Or his home is gone
I get the impression that Discord is gonna get a hurt real bad.
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He not going home
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this is a drama.
if he were able to go home, then the fic would end there, and counter what I've been trying to for this story.
I figured he wouldn't get to go home based on the author's note a few chapters back. But I thought that somehow, Blueblood would have screwed everything up instead of this vague spell malfunction. I was imagining him bursting into the throne room and distracting everyone at a very crucial moment.
The fifth shevron is locked. The portal reminds me of the Stargate for some reason.
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i was going to go with that way before i was halfway with this fic, but instead of Blueblood it would be Pinkie as she wanted to throw a goodbye party and fucks setting everything up. but i'd a better idea.
we'll
yearns
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Yep. That would be a horrible idea for their further interactions.
On the other hand portal might have worked just fine. He just wouldn't get his body back while Discord find for himself a whole new and very chaotic playground and help Zack to get back to Equestria since alicorn princess have little to do in our world and would have a lot of problems. So, closure with his now her family and undesired, but necessary trip back to Equestria. Alas, this happened.
You know, we totally expected the spell to work, but send him back to the clearing. He can't go back...
I've noticed more spelling and grammar mistakes
I wonder what went wrong
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Discord happened he messed up the stone so he wouldn't go back
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More like hes dead and that is why he can not return...
Huzzah! He is self-aware!