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....... Burn the bug. Squish it like the bug she is. Heck tell her about bug spray and then make a big spray like spell and effectively gas the changelings. Spare only Thorax and Ocelius and maybe Pharynx. Gas them.
Chrysalis is going to have a bad time.
I'M GOING TO KILL THAT BITCH WHATEVER IT TAKES
Yeah, she got to die.
The instant Chrysalis's throne is gone, Zack is going to go full on berserker mode and erase Chrysalis out of existence.
Ok I just have to say this (because I see it far too often in clop and it is a pet peeve of mine) full on Cervix penetration is not a thing that happens in any mammals I know of, in horses the small tube like urethra may just about enter the cervix ring but not the actual penis and definitely not the flair of an orgasming horse dong. It would be very damaging and would lead to all kinds of nasty infections, and even if bug queen didn't care about the amount of damage she would do to her new toy it would not even feel good for her, I would even go so far as to say it would hurt bug queen to do it.
Sorry rant over, I just see it all the time.
Other then that the story is good so far and I look forward to reading further chapters, keep up the good work
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true. but this a world of cartoon horse that have flexible and semi stretchable bodies that don't have basic horse anatomy down to the letter, so I think the whole cervix pen. thing is more of creative freedom than anything else.
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whoa! guessing having Zack go through this has stirred your anger?
kill her i dont stand for that
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and what about the two scenes with Thorax before and after the clop?
10568414
kill them both is the right answer ....
10568232
Makes me cringe everytime
dammit, when you said clop I thought 'hate sex'
This wasn't hate sex, this was more fuel for the chrysalis must die fire.
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I'm on board with her joining Discord in equestria's version of hell tartarus.
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im on bord for her eventualy becoming the nessisery evil or a neutral party that will realy make the villens of equestria not want to fight. Also something to consder is that zack is helpless because she canot use magic but when the others were in the changling kingdom with the throne it didnt have the same effect of draining magic but stopped outward use so maby zack could be either so pissed she breaks the throne or becomes a shapeshifter herself and escapes that way?
Feels really unnecessary, and Zack not just taking the opportunity to kill her doesn't seem right at all.
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well remember, Chrysalis is just as strong as Zack is, and she has magical abilities un-hampered by the black throne. so even if Zack did try and kill Chrysalis, the queen had more opportunities to stop her. plus she can call in the entire swarm to dog-pile Zack if she tries anything. remember, Zack is held captive in a city state-like environment, with only 1 alley right now. and like i said, the Clop scenes are pretty much skippable.
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question that I need answered, would you count what Chrysalis did latest chapter count as a feature put inside of Zack's body or is this just an ass pull on my part for a way for Zack to get changeling magic.
forgot all my previous comments, I'm going all in on Thorax helping Zack escape for the sole reason of 'the power of boners.' There are movies where males or females ignored the obvious dangers because there was a chance to get laid. Plus it'd be totally hilarious for it to work in this situation which is the main reason I'm guessing this is how the story will go.
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no. Zack will NOT get changeling magic.
10569941
if your expecting comedy, then your looking at the wrong fic. Thorax will be the key thing to help Zack escape.
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just thought I'd try for a distraction from what happened in Chrysalis bed chambers by pointing out other things.
I am expecting Chrysalis to die for what she did to Zack.
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you'll just have to wait and see.
with how much trauma zack is being put through (especialy what chrisalis did) im hopeing for zack to either escape and drop a mountin on the anti magic area or flat out break the throne through being angry enough to overload it as nothing is ever invincibl or unbreakable.
i do hope that zack goes to see the kirin though as fluffy
Almost had our pity. Artistic license and all that, but cervical penetration is never pleasurable.
Didn't he discover his endurance was hardly more than a typical stallion?
It's a good thing Thorax left, he would have ruined what little he's hiding (as far as love). It won't really matter in the long run, but keeping privilege will at least allow him to comfort Zack somewhat...
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i know cervical penetration isn't pleasurable, even for creative liberty. its meant to be torture sex in this context, i mean Chrysalis is a twisted queen.
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Perhaps some adjustment is required, since apparently the act merely caused pleasure and dread (what is she dreading? Getting pregnant? 😕)
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i actually changed the cervix penetration's to something else. so, as you have read the story from prologue to current chapter, how do you find the fanfic so far?
10576155
It's pretty good, honest. The soap boxing is pretty tall, but not overbearing, and in a way that feels justified rather than just bashing against the illogic of a children's show. The fact that the characters have the ability to have their eyes opened to their insanity is probably the most important thing you're doing, even if said eye-opening is being done ever so slowly and only with massive anguish.
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there is the anti other magic barrir so maby that is why
Infrastructur
After what Zack did, i can't really think to pity that one to mutch. After all, he impaled her side with his horn and she impaled his mare bits with her meaty horn.
Poetic vengance...
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that's sick you're sick
what sort of teenage half developed brain is this comment