follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Celestia. Consider EVERYTHING Zack went through and the FACT what others have done is far worse then Zack has done. You have NO STANDING TO DO ANYTHING TO ZACK
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how do you like the pic of Tia getting scarred?
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10/10
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This is the same person who banished her sister to the moon then proceeded to wipe her from history and put cozy in tarturus. Would be better if they just came out with the truth to the public as sooner or later they will have to now with what blueblood is doing. Your warning makes me worry about next chapter
BLUEBLOOD, YOU F#CKING IDIOT! YOU'RE ONLY GOING TO MAKE IT WORSE!
It can always gets worse, Shitstain.
If you're going to punish Zack, then punish Starlight to the fullest extent of the LAW! I'M SO F#CKING TIRED OF THESE DOUBLE-STANDARDS!
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She will live and heal. But considering all Glimmer did. Kidnapping, torture, and messing with time and she is not punished at all where as Zack injures two, count it TWO ponies. And oh PUNISHMENT. I SAY HYPOCRITE
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Oh. It seems that Chrysalis is the next one due for a magically powered b***h slap.
I use Google translator in advance, sorry for mistakes from Polish to English.
What will be announced in the following chapters. I sincerely hope that after Zack's horror, after all this suffering, after all this hypocrisy ... that she will bite everyone, very painful and bloody, let this suffering, humiliation give her the power of revenge, strength. And the Prince of Garbage himself ... to feel the torture that condemns others so easily. I hope the character of Zack ... after all this turns into a grim determination and that beautiful words will not come true. as it usually is.
I feel like Blueblood's little crusade is justified. Zack victimized Princess Celestia indirectly.
Good luck, Zack. Now you're in Chrysalis' clutches.
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For once, for only ONCE , I agree that blue blood is at least correct. He did attack celestia.
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I agree. If zack is to be punished, then glimmer better be punished too.
There going a genocide of the changeling, isn't it.
It just one factor for this event to happen, does Zack's anger will be strong enough to break the anti-magic throne and probably poison the changelings with all the rage, anger, sadness, madness, despair.
If this happened, Thorax will probably be the sole survivor and goes to Canterlot to tell the ponies about what happenned.
For Chrysalis to NOT know anything about Zack would be quite a stretch, given her desire for revenge.
Also that warning at the start is very worrying, because its says to me the story is going to take a turn towards being unnecessarily edgy and grimdark for its own sake. If so, you should really tone ir down.
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trust me, its not going to be grimmdark levels.
as for Chrysalis not knowing about Zack, it's not like we know what the Queen has been doing before she enacts her revenge plan. for all we know, she's been hold up in castle coming up with plans, while the changelings go out and gather love to sustain themselves. coming across Zack was a stroke of good luck for the bug-horses.
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remember, while Celestia is head honcho of the princesses, it doesn't mean she's the smartest of the four alicorns.
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.....when do ponies have to answer for any of their crimes? Dash broke into a hospital to steal a book, she also fucked up Winter preparations, and there are other examples of ponies doing bad things and yet they face no consequences. it's almost like Celestia is bias on who to punish and who NOT to punish.
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100% what?
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i just asked if you liked the picture i made.🤣
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Reference to Job Psycho 100.
For the un-enlightened, the eponymous main protagonist, Mob (no, that isn't his real name) is a psychic with about the durability of Saitama. Throughout the episodes various things happen to him, slowly increasing his meter. When he reaches 100%, whatever he is feeling at the moment pretty much floods him with power, to the detriment of whoever fully set him off.
Zack was at 100% rage. And judging by the resulting damage to the castle, well....
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ah! okay. so, how do you think Volume 2 will go for Zack?
use Google translator in advance, sorry for mistakes from Polish to English.
Volume 2? I think it will be humiliating and painful for her. maybe the spike would open my eyes that Celestia and the rest are hypocrites? . Maybe someone will open his eyes that apart from Zack, they are worse than her when they move their brains? . Will anyone discover the crimes of the prince of garbage? . and Zack himself? Hopefully whoever hurts her physically and mentally, maybe they already have a second dark personality in their head that will be helpful and justice for others. such a split personality? . seems to be setting up a nice horror movie for Zack, no justice. All the best
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Sorry if my English to Polish is bad, using Google Translate.
zaufaj mi, Zack będzie bolesny przez większość czasu spędzonego z podmieńcami, głównie z Poczwarką. Spike odegra dużą rolę, próbując znaleźć swojego nowego przyjaciela. jeśli chodzi o kucyki, będziesz musiał tylko poczekać i zobaczyć, jak to hipnotyzujące poglądy uderzają je w twarz.
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You.. have a very good point.
I wonder if zack will call that out
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Zack won't, but someone close to the ponies will! care to guess who?
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I am very well aware of that fact.
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interesting
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Hard to say. I can say that I'm looking forward to it.
Also, in the case of Discord, I'm with DWK. If not with as strong language.
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It looks really nice. Strong line work and solid colors reminiscent of the actual style of the show with your own personal flair. It's also the most complicated piece you've shown in this fic so far. In most of the other drawings you've made, the pony is in full profile. Straight-on looks at the side of the head and straight-on look at the front are probably the two easiest views to capture, but in this one you went for a 3/4 view of both the face and the body and got the proportions down pretty well.
I also like the color gradients on the scar, and the overall shape of Celestia's body. Your interpretation of her form made her look incredibly soft, and her posture curled in on herself made her look vulnerable, like she's trying to make herself smaller to avoid danger. Her face doesn't show very strong emotion, but that's probably the most negative emotion Celestia would ever let cross her features around other ponies. She wouldn't want to look "weak" in front of anypony that believes in her strength or wisdom to protect them, after all.
Overall, your drawing looks really nice and you've shown improvements in your technique as the story has gone on.
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Hm... discord is dead. So if it were to be someone close to the pony’s.. shining armor? Cadence? Luna? Unless it’s a different species entirely, in that case I’d have to say the changlings.
these changelings are morons... just how fricken UNINFORMED are they to think this is twilight?
So Blueblood is a princess? I didn't knew that
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i kinda depends on how this meeting between the changlings and zack goes if bad they will likely just use her for their adavantage but if it goes good maby we get a nice chrisalis that will help zack?
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That I think can be rationalized (at least in less serious cases) by the nature of the cartoon world they live in.
Celestia looks so misproportioned in that pic I mean god damn shes like a potato with a single wet spaghetti noodle as a neck hahahahahhahha
Edit: I should clarify that the problem isng really the neck, its just how freaking round her torso is lmao
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woops!
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that's because she's mostly posed to be facing front ward, so her legs and wings would make her look more rounded.
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remember, 90% of my fics are based of the show's interpretation of MLP: FiM.
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well its not like they have spies everywhere, otherwise, the moment that the Crystal Empire showed up they should've swarmed that place. and when Tirek attacked, they should've taken advantage of the ponies vulnerability and dominate them. but since we they do nothing till their second invasion plan, we fic writers can take creative liberty with them. for me, they've just been regathering their forces and waited for Chrysalis to get some new idea, while rarely leaving the hive to gather love.
I made it half way through chapter one when you lost me.
I can get behind a human turned pony.
A human turns Twilight clone, maybebut a human man that suddenly has a horse pussy going 'no biggie' then peeing to find out he's got a dick, too...
And is just "Oh I'm a hermaphrodite, whatever." Is just too unreal.
I like the idea, but futa human/Twilight is just too out of reality without any panic or even concern.
Keep writing, just because I'm not into your story doesn't mean you should take my feels as anything but criticism. Your fans need this.
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The moment Celestia tries to organize a search for Zack, they better damn well tell her about Blueblood already starting on that. Then again, this is the Royal Guard we're talking about, they probably believe that crock about "oh, don't tell Celestia, she needs rest".
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Oh, that. It only comes up a few times tbh. The rest is better.
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Not to mention that Celestia herself is technically responsible, since it was her idea to free Discord in the first place.
He wasn't the captain of the royal guard and was already ex captain
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Twilight Sparkle without her cutie mark...
This Changeling is not to bright...