follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Once again "wither -> whether". You clearly confused these two and using the wrong one consistently.
Zack will find a way home, won't he? Considering how much time you gave to his family and friends it's either that or someone else will be dragged to Equestria.
timidness grated the young man's patience
...have you tried to use Google Docs to check your grammar and spelling? It's good at catching certain issues.
i will forever call BS on Zack being punished for simply defending himself from clearly a fatal attack
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Ditto.
It's called a 'Restraining Order'.
Probably needs one against Pinkie Pie too.
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I'm fairly sure it won't help against her. Even magically enforced one.
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Yeah, that makes no sense as a law. It removes any sense of accountability from the royals, which is one of the situations that leads to a revolt. And hell, beyond that he's not a part of the Equestrian Royal Family. He part of the ruling class of a place that calls itself an empire. His authority means nothing on Equestrian soil.
I'll finish by saying this. This better not wind up being one of those fics where Blueblood suddenly shows up and he's Douchey McDoucheface III or something on top of that. That would just kill all immersion because those two extremes cannot occupy the same continuity. They literally can't.
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I would too, but what they're doing is obviously bot intended to be an qctually punishment for him. Instead its just a way for people to be placated and not cause a ruckus. Zack just has ti stat inside the castle for an extended period of time, which also means Shining Armor can't visit the castle.
On the other side of things, if they don't punish SA fof this it'll definitely give the citizens of equestria reason to be terrified of royalty, that rhey could be murdered at the drop of a hat.
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placate who? any one with a lick of sense would see it justified
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Nobles
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yea they are likley to try use this to their advantage. in any case the fact that zack does get punished for defending himself is going to set a presedent and also you have to consider what this means for what happend with nightmare moon as if zack gets punished and the main 6 didnt then the nobles or other ponies could argure that an attack on royalty that is mentaly disterdbed or with a magical artifact is fine. either way the situation is a mess and was written a good conclusion (untill it is brought to shining he could have become a murderer) and reminds me of the school i came from where both partys would get punished for a fight even if the fight consisted of one guy punching another in the face then that guy dropping.
in any case the way they went with punishment while frustration is belivable and would likly be what happend if this have happend.
i wrote an rambeling thing now i am tired
Should have been at least 7 years. ( Different countries have different periods) Someone issued the death certificate way to quickly. Yap, Zach better not to come back, the legal problems would get ugly.
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well considering the damage that happened to his apartment, and the fact no remains or anything of Zack was left behind, the police believed their was no other conclusion other than Zack is dead.
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Zack's house arrest is not really a punishment. Celestia is sort of using the punishment to keep Zack away from any other potential threats, or situations that would Zack in a difficult situation. as for Blueblood, Zack will eventually meet him, with the plot of the story i have written down in my notes. and besides, can you imagine any other way to depict Blueblood from what we've seen?
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oh don't worry, this will be brought up in the next chapter, and Celestia will give an explanation about the punishment. and SA will be dealt with probably.
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no spoilers.
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there is no explanation. that punishment NEEDS to be dropped.
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don't worry it will be addressed.
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You know, Im reading this and im actually shocked that people are so surprised that the wealthy and the nobility get away with crimes while someone who simply defended themselves gets convicted of some BS charge.
This happens in the real world all the time. All the time. Its not even rare. They don't even hide it and they do it right out in the open in front of everybody. This is all over the world by the way.
This is a TEXTBOOK High school situation. The High school jock gets a testosterone high and beats the hell out of some random average kid. The poor kid manages to get in one good punch to the face before being smeared all over the hallway.
You ALL know what happens. YOU ALL KNOW.
The Jock gets off scott free because the school NEEDS him for the football team. The kid who got the crap kicked out of him gets suspended for punching the jock in the nose. "Fighting is against the rules young man!"
I say the Author should leave it like it is because "Its Realistic."
The Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil." - Reykan
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Besides, Zack got away with a slap to the hand... hoof. That's in place of an actual punishment. No, seriously, 3 days under house arrest. The only reason it's nonsensical is that how mild his punishment is. It clearly can't discourage anyone but the flower trio and probably Fluttershy from attacking the royals and yet that's what he got. It's more likely that Celestia bent the law to extreme in his favor. Yes, it's still bs and unfair, but when the life ever been fair?
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Aww.
Welp, I'll keep theorizing then. Always fun to be horribly wrong as long as it won't be a loose end.
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Oh... That makes sense....
As for Blueblood, considering the zeppelin maiden voyage clip from the montage that is the song 'Becoming Popular', where Rarity and Blueblood are seeing it off together, and considering the only character interaction we get from Blueblood is during a gathering of all the Canterlot nobles, AND considering the way Rarity acts on her way to meet up with him which he probably sees, a lot of fans, myself included believe that was an act he puts on to chase away those who seek to court him not for love but for money or status.
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also, thanks for leaving spelling tips. i try to improve my writing whenever people point it out, so thanks.
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interesting idea for Bluebloods character.
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Going more into a full character instead of just focusing on what many of us call his mask, a lot of people who see him this way characterize him as a very politically savvy and intelligent character who really knows how the nobles think due to having immersed himself in their culture. Some even go the extra mile by saying he despises the 'holier than thou' attitude the nobles have for the common ponies, and made something of a personal sacrifice in immersing himself in said culture so Celestia had a reliable inside man on the faction that's only ever interested in lining their own coffers and expanding their own influence. After all, despite being the ruler she's only one pony, and one to whom the nobles would never reveal any dirty agendas no less. A common characterization in this regard is that Blueblood acts like them to give them the impression they have an ally close to the Princess, and he uses this against them by giving the Princess the right ammunition to cull any dumb ideas the noble faction might rally for in their endless greed.
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is all this from the comics or books? cause my fic's are soloy based off what i've viewed from the main TV show.
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This is a fan interpretation of Blueblood based on the circumstantial evidence from the show I mentioned before that led many to the conclusion that he wasn't who he appeared to be at the Gala.
I'm surprised Zack didn't try to push Twilight to have charges filed for what happened considering the fact that if justice is to be done, Shining Armor needs more than a restraining order.
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if you read Ch. 8, you'll see Shining getting more than a restraining order.
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well technically he is an alicorn and thus a princess in name only like twilight so unless princesses can get arrested for attacking other members of, wait this is plan to get him to stay in one place for reasons explained later.
This chapter made me cry.
.…. I hate being emotional.
Zack is being punished disproportionally to his supposed crime. Instead of house arrest, how about a personal guard (heh) to stave off any future misunderstandings? It would not only curb unexpected interactions (hey, why does Twilight suddenly have a guard?!) but also backup in case some doofus comes and starts flying off the handle.
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Don't feel bad I cried like a baby at the funeral. Heck even before that. When they were told to give up hope. Loving this story and so glad I found it!
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well hopefully the rest of the story is to your liking.
I'm a bit confused.. is it three days or a week?
Typo
But he just explained that....? Why say it again?
The wording is a bit weird on this
Zack is right... Didn't consider it. Shining Armor indeed tried to kill Zack...
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Both. It's been three days since the last chapter, and a week since Zack was isekai'd.
The funniest thing you wrote so far. Most other family's hold on stubbornly to any signs or leads, but Zack's family gave him up for dead only a week after.