follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Press Charges. Hell even get her arrested for the time travel thing if you find that out.
nice one Starlight
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maby we might get a chapter where zack finds out about the other timelines and goes to them and find other hers.
in any case zack has been lied, assultid and mind controled by ponies who she tryed to trust so she now has 3 ponies she will likely not trust or attempt to be frendly to and also a bad impression of ponies in genrel. who would be a charicter she might be able to make actual freinds with at this point?
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SHE SHOULD HAVE BEEN THROWN INTO TARTARUS IN THE FIRST PLACE!
This is not going to end well.
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Fuck that, just kill them all.
I knew Starlight would get on the shit list even higher then Shining, at least he didn't rob her of will. Frankly at this point Zack would be better in Earthquestria
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which is why I hate Twilight's animostity to Trixie for in a grand scheme of things Trixie has done far less then Starlight and her biggest screw up was due to the influence of a magical artifact. Starlight did it all on her own will.
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Trust me, I'm still royally pissed about that too.
I have a feeling it's about to get worse
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Completely understandable response and reaction.
I feel like than in 1 or 2 similar cases Zak will snap and we will either gonna see:
A - someone dead
B - Midnight but Zak
C - Sunset Shimmer style escape
D - All above
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D
But spells like that often have a price. Say, also acceleration of your aging, so long as the spell is active.
So basically...
It should be noted that, as Sawtooth Waves stated, Starlight likely has more Unicorn magic than Twilight. But since she hasn't been exposed to Earth Pony or Pegasus magic, as Twilight was, she remains a Unicorn.
Famous last words.
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But in what order would they happen?
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Agreed. That seems about right.
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Definitely D
Zack just don't know Starlight that well, I guess here she comes with her zombie pony project.
Yeah, the idea of a Friendship Lesson is kinda stupid, at least in the way Twilight is trying to do them here. The idea may be a local cultral thing, but they should be looking instead to go about things more organically. Twilight's lessons were more about what she leanred interacting and living her life, not just sitting down and being talked at, which is why this went off the rails so badly.
Though once I saw Zack had gotten hit with the spell, hoooly shit I knew that would end badly.
Zack's horn is throbbing with the anger-fueled dark magic trying to get out.
I'm excited to see the next chapter once it's finished, edited and then published.
damn, Starlight, you just HAD to mind control Zack, taking away his free will.
I'm hoping there's a confrontation between Starlight and Twilight, and then Starlight and Zack! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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funnily enough, i heard someone saw that what Starlight did in the OG episode isn't mind controlling, but 'subtle suggestion influence'.
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That's a Jedi Mind Trick.
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yeah but what Starlight did was not the Jedi mind trick, but the other person said it WAS the mind trick. when its not.
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Yea what I meant to say is that the 'subtle suggestion influence' is pretty much a Mind TRICK.
What Starlight did was just Mind CONTROL.
I guess that would be ladder.
recuring -> recurring
That either would be 'bugs' or something missing from that sentence.
Yeah....
Just a little more Zack, a few more buttons pressed, we need your power form!
Oh, that's right. Ponies are closer to order, while humans are more chaotic. Of course Zack won't be happy about being mind-controlled.
Um no... they do in fact have refrigerator's and toaster and a lot of other fairly modern electronics
To be fair. Starlight Glimmer is basicly a Foal with Demigod powers. The reasonable thing is to use Hornrings to take away her magic and let her learn the basics like a foal to fill in the huge moral holes...