follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Oh god....
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you were warned! so you can't blame me for not skipping this ch.
The one thing I don't like Is growing attached to characters only to have them suffer. This brings great pain to my heart. I do wish that zack kills chrysalis or even makes her his bitch by the end of all this. Maybe even keep the child. Who knows.
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you'll just have to wait and see by Vol. 2's conclusion. unitl then, Zack just has be whatever Chrysalis wants her to be.
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You sick fuck. How dare you tease me with more cliff hangers even in the comments?!
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(wicked laughter) all the better to make my readers wanting more! 😈
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As mermaid Man once said "EEEEEEEEEEEEVVVIILLLLL"
ya know... somehow i think that Zack would make a much better mother then chrysalis.... ya know.. just sayen...
This is rough. The revenge and payback better be slow and agonizing for her.
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Best revenge certainly. make them like Thorax~
Chrysalis is on the shit list higher then Discord. I am going to relish the revenge
as fucked (no pun intended) as it is, fairly well written but i noticed what may be a typo, 'cannel' should probably be 'canal'.
huh
Oh, well...I can wait, once that asspull throne disappear... there will be one villain less in Equestria... she will end in Discord style ;)
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That won't really be a revenge, though. Chrysalis is a sick fuck, but prosperity of the hive is her top priority and Zack being good mother will help with exactly that in the end. Probably the only way for the real revenge would be to burn entire hive with all the inhabitants and make Chrysalis watch, but Zack have to be even worse than her to do so.
Again, having it be shown in such detail is... really it feela like it should be an entirely different story as its way out there with how it bring the rest down.
One thing I hate is how Zack pretty much doesn't have the will to resist the mind control, like all the shit he went through hasn't hardened him mentally to the point where any mental intrusion or influence should have ended in failure and that all of the negative emotions he is constantly emitting should be weakening or outright killing the weaker changelings.
Well Zack's only hope is:
1. Thorax survives and eventually finds help,
2. growing a changeling inside lets her tap into changeling magic or she finally adapts to the magic inhibition,
3. Zack remembers humans never had magic and fashions a shiv out of her feathers while playing nice and until Chyrsalis lets her guard down then Zack can go psycho-killer rampage to get her revenge on Chrysalis when she isn't expecting it. Hiding the shiv pointy bit outwards internally until Chyrsalis mounted her to get that initial bit of surprise might also help. Other options also include sharpening hooves and/or horns on the ground.
4. The author comes up with something completely unexpected and shit gets worse for Zack.
I actually like the change of pace her compared to other stories that give their main character/OC a good time. Torturing your characters is always a better read.
Chrysalis is the rapist, I demand her head on the platter.
Did we forget Zack is a hermaphrodite? Or were the guards just too straight for that?
You'd think Chrysalis would have been spawning from his seed as an attempt to get attachment going.
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I don't think it'd be that [ s ]he was hardened to become resistant, but rather that [ s ]he should be so broken from all the shit that has happened that [ s ]he is just essentially an emotionless husk, or just uncaring of anything.
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all of the trauma that Zack has gone through with Discord wasn't a mental boosting exercise, it was a delve into madness and grief and letting raw overwhelming magic take over her, and Zack just let it happen. as for resisting Chrysalis mind control, remember that Chrysalis has been using on Zack for an entire WEEK! and constantly applying it again and again. and remember, while dark magic is indeed feed on negative emotions, it is still magic, and as far as i know the Black Stone Throne nullifies ALL non-changeling magic.
Zack is virtually powerless in her current situation. she maybe physically stronger than the normal changelings, but if she and Chrysalis fought the queen would win because she still has access to her magic, and has an entire Hive at her disposal that can just subdue her with either their sheer number, or the green goo.
.........not all protagonist in every story is given plot armor, or means to withstand the 'evil' of their stories.
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to option #1: most optimal.
to option #2: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/928438/something-needs-to-be-said
to option #3: given how Zack, RIGHT NOW, is physically, but mostly, mentally abused and pretty much broken. she is unable to actually do anything now. and since Chrysalis is going to make Zack her broad mare, the queen is going to keep her VERY close. making sure that Zack is kept will to make sure her heir is born safely, but also to make Zack more accessible for her own now needs.
to option 4: you'll just have to see what i have instore for Zack's rescue.
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1. the guards just didn't care, and i just didn't add it.
2. Chrysalis doesn't just want to make Zack suffer, for attempting to impale her, but if her plan on snagging Twilight works, then the princess of Friendship will have to just sit by and watch a friend be used and abused the way Zack has.
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So you're not going cock and ball torture, got it.
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i never said that..............
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Just thought it was an obvious way to show Chrysalis is teh super evulz.
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don't worry, you'll see Chrysalis take in Zack's own dick and cum, just not now because she's loving being the one pounding instead of being pounded.
Hopefully Zacks kid wont be a pushover like Thorax is.
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Weirdly enough for #2 during pregnancy fetal cells can circulate within the mother's body, as those cells would be changeling "enough" one would assume to bypass the magic restriction this is not entirely impossible and she would for the thinnest of definitions be a hybrid (of course we have the word of the author this will not happen). But there was a reason I included that as you could easily make a story compatible conclusion of dark magic is emotion driven and changeling cells seek emotions for energy, wam bam you have a dark magic to changeling magic converter growing inside her.
https://www.livescience.com/62930-why-mom-keeps-baby-cells.html
Someone gonna die.....
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i have been trying to think of ways out of this for zack and the way it seems it might go is maby zacks been unknowingly building up dark magic after all she has experinced and as such when the throne is destroyed she might flat out go on a rampage. also chrisaslis is worryed about her bloodline it seems so zack ending it permenetly would be a possiblity as she has unknowingly scarred celestia so its not out of the question she might be able to get revenge by by flat out stopping chrisalis magic
... is it just me, or are we watching the origin story of a villain, at this point?
I mean, with the things I expect just from that intro alone... if it were me, I'd probably just break and go nuclear on Equus on principle.
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...(smiles mischievously) no comment.
I like pregnancy but not when rape stuff is involved so skipping this one
It’s foal not foul