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Zack gets first blood.
it was at that moment that Throax found himself at a crossroads
1. bros before hoes
2. be a simp
on another note way to throw more hype on the real Zack vs Chrysalis battle when it happens.
i have a question and im not sure if it would be nitpicky or might be a hint as to how zack could escape. can i ask it and how do i do the censor thing so if it is right i can not spoil it for others?
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it was more of a scuffle that Chrysalis provoked, to which Zack followed up because she was annoyed after seeing the image of Shining Armor, and still feeling a little buzzed from her earlier rant.
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But Chrysalis won via of her subordinates.
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to censor, you the Sp tag on the comment bar to censor your question, and sure, ask me your question.
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since pegasis flying is magic assistid (at least i think so as magicless ponys do not seem to fly) and the throne negates all magic exept changling magic does that mean zack has either gained a slight resistence to it or she is using changling magic.
Im mostly going of the negates magic propertys of it and that discord couldnt float or use magic in there. i mean her gaining resistence to it could be possible and she might eventualy be immune.
also if magic is a pool in ponys then what has zacks been refilling from? has it been completly from food and her body or has she been unknowingly adsorbing small ammounts of changling magic as its the only magic near her
sorry just had a few questions
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Well to put simply: yes, pegasi magic is what allows them to fly. but that's normal pegasi magic, as they have wings that are honestly to small to even lift a creature their size off the ground, honestly they should just be vestigial and un-useable. but since alicorns have larger wings and are naturally stronger, i view them being able to fly without relying on the pegasus magic so much.
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And when that Throne gets destroyed they all die along with their Queen.
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you think Zack would just murder all the changelings?
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to chrysalis its probably testing the claims that this alicorn isn't twilight sparkle.
to Zack its the second time changelings had fucked with him and he's getting sick of their shit.
to me it was a pre-fight warm up where both sides are just exchanging blows to find out the strength of the other. As proof of this chrysalis asked more of her changelings to guard this unknown alicorn.
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Ehh..probably just Chrysalis and maybe a few of the guards that got in his way.
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thankyou for clearing that up
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no prob! if you have any more questions, feel free to post them either here, on my home page, or just message me.
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that's a fair assumption.
so how do you like seeing a more vulnerable side to Zack? from the dream memory and her little emotional break down?
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it makes him a more fleshed out character which is really interesting to read about along with feel it when something bad or good happen to him.
Also because I root for Zack, I wouldn't question it if he acquired changeling magic like some other comments have brought up or some deus ex machina that gets him out of those restraints.
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well as i stated in a previous comment, the only reason Zack has Harmony, Chaos and Dark magic is:
-Harmony is from just being a pony.
-Chaos is obviously from when Discord created the new body.
-Dark magic can be used by anyone if they have enough dark emotions.
so the only way for Zack to acquire changeling based magic, or any other types of magic from a particular species, is to have parts or feature built into her body. but since Zack's body is just a modified pony body with some of her old human bodies qualities, she won't get changeling based magic.
YES A NEW CHAPTER
how does everyone like seeing a more vulnerable side to Zack? from the dream memory and her little emotional break down?
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Doesn't matter, just shows how weak she is.
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so how do you like seeing a more vulnerable side to Zack? from the dream memory and her little emotional break down?
Nice
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It was very nice. Makes his anger all the more understandable
Normally that would be semi-therapeotic. For anyone else.
Okay. I'm impressed. Zack seemed to have a wrath quotient that rivals Asura's -as she proved just before, and I can't say I blame her-, and Thorax managed to make her feel better than anyone else in the world has so far with a hug..
Couldn't have said it better myself.
You're going to wish you didn't do that~.
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Let me roll back on the cussing. I apologise for that.
Unwilling or not, he's got the government bending over backward for him. He is not aware of himself at all, and is not coping well. He has his part in how he handles situations too, screaming at someone, cussing them out in their own home. Good way to get a bloody nose in my house.
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the only reason he was screaming and complaining is because the ponies at first we not taking his situation seriously, and just treating like something that will fix itself in five minutes. plus Celestia also decided to play Sim with Zack being her character, so he feels socially manipulated by a governing ruler, who also left out the details of Zack's situation to the Mane 6. so all that build up to an outburst of feeling like Zack's state of being was not being taken seriously.
now aside from that, how are you finding the rest of the fic? as you commented on the 20th Ch. (i assume you've read from Ch. 2 to this Ch.)
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Sorry no i apologize i have gotten to a point and had to stop. Up till now, I have my misgivings on some parts of it, and theres some parts I find fairly nice.
He's definitely not a character whom everyone liked at the drop of a hat, which is sensical. He doesn't have that everybody hates me thing going on either. Theres a bit of balance there.
It may take me time, as you have given an extremely realistic portrayal of some peoples reactions, people whom I have had the unpleasant experience of knowing. I am waiting for the shoe to drop. I don't think hes all that aware or even willing to accept any responsibility for his decisions, no matter how emotionally elevated he was or that hes been plucked from his world.
Now i have always wondered how some people would handle portraying an assertive reaction to Pinkie's disregard for personal space. This was one I was expecting to see in a fanfic. You're the lucky cherry pop.
I suppose if you were wanting to create a story that was very engaging both emotionally as well as thought-provokingly you succeeded very well.
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i mean we are talking about the guy who tossed his almost passing out wife off a balcony. wasent there a flash game about that?
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well I'm glad you find my fic enjoyable thus far. as for Zack answering for the wrong doings he's done so far, you'll just have to wait and see once Vol. 2 reaches its end.
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Okay, I have gotten fully uo to date. He started to acknowledge himself a bit, but only after things started going his way and being something that would be good mood. We saw how that went.
Anyway I am not surprised nor do i disapprove of what went down with discord. I guess I could say the how could have been worked a bit differently. He kinda just went Broly (not really any other way at that point given his mental state. This is DBS Broly naturally). Otherwise, it happened.
I think it would have had more impact if zach hadn't been constantly flying off the handle at everything else. Thats neither here nor there, we all knew it was coming from the moment the rootbeer fell on his nose right? ;)
At least now, with the magic inside of him put out of reach, he can't just tantrum his way out of a scenario and has a kind enough soul nearby to be a shoulder he can lean on. I think its a good emotional development moment. Although, still he sassy.
At this point he has proven himself to be only useful as bait to Chrysalis. Otherwise he has made every mistake one can make as a hostage. I am surprised sawing off the horn didn't come up. Nor plucking feathers
Im a bit cruel tho.
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we're still early in Vol. 2, so we have plenty of time for anything truly bad to happen to Zack yet.
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Please understand, im not wishing it on the fellow. Hes had plenty of shit shoved his way already.
So, yeah, im a bit more invested in the story.
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got a new chapter for ya
Yeah, if you were going to dispose of someone, just do it. Clearly intimidation is insufficient.
Zack don't get mutch sympathy from me. He caused a lot of trouble by himself.
Quite mare... To bad that is not accurate...
Changeling stone negates Pegasus magic... You forget that didn't you?
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can you stop acting like a snob, I swear you're basically like blueblood in human form with the comments your making on this story