follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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im not sure if this was the worse possible way for zacks mental health or one of the best. only time will tell i guess
Oh fuck it died,
THE BUG IS DEAD CRABRAVE!!!!
Chrysalis will be furious
Oh... I guess no momma zack....
Makes sense given the biological differences between a pony and changelings. I would say that the conception played a big part in the stillbirth. Zack didn’t want that baby. She had no say in it, therefore she had no love for it. And I think a working theory could be made that her body responded to those emotion and destroyed what it considers a parasite.
It feels like a cop out for this result
The way I believe changeling eggs to work (given I am a changeling) is that they need a steady flow of love to grow. Or it will be just a dead egg from the start. Since zack was not under mind control of a changling there was no love. If anything there was hated.
A little dark humor here to lift the mood.
If Zack had a kill list then now only Chrysalis would be on the to-do list, while the rest would be on maybe
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So the possibility is that Chrysalis was probably aware of that.
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So Chrysalis probably won't be mad
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Most likely. But chrysalis had zack under her mind control.
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Isn't Discord's power also proportional to comedy? I mean... Discord even mentioned at one point that he'd rather use his powers for fun or messing around not be serious.
doesn't surprice me it ended like this, it would need a steady stream of love to grow healthy and zack had none of it probably not even under mindcontroll
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"Tubbo Is gone Crabrave!"
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i had this ending to the pregnancy planed out ever since i had Chrysalis impregnant Zacky.
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Already did and it's the most asinine reason I every heard and a costly one i might say.
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well since its Discord, everything asinine since he's an egotistical trolling tool.
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Yes, quite right indeed.
So its dead? Good. And for fuck's sake don't go making a deus ex machina to make it live. Those ponies are already fucking garbage for forcing Zack to bear it to term while mouthing off about how they're naking it "his choice". Its just another big black mark on the list of reasons to hate them.
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don't worry, there won't be a dues ex machina to revive the baby. when i kill something in my stories, they stay dead.
Well that was anticlimactic...
The fact that Zack hasn't gone full nightmare mode given what the author has dished out is kind of amazing.
This is really the Starlight timeline with the desolate wasteland isn't it? With just a solitary Zack left alive and broken in some ruins and everything else destroyed.
What the hell does that even mean?
Also, holy shit, get yourself a couple proofreaders.
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I agree with both statements.
I mean I get the gist of it but what the doctor actually said is a mystery to me.
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That was my first reaction too.
But after I have given it more thought I believe it only feels that way because the comment section made such a huge deal out of it and because I personally have a strong opinion on what the choice should have been. But in the end this was a very real possibility in the first place, it just was never explicitly said which might be too why it feels like a cop out.
Did you just... set up a trap for Chrysalis?
No, no I don't. You just spitted a pile of randomly jumbled words in the middle of your explanation, herr doktor. NinjaMare now have to wipe this mess after you and force you to say something less incoherent.
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basically the doc was saying that the baby was a horrible hybrid of pony and changeling.
as for the 'did i set trap for Chrysalis' question, not intentionally but I can see why you'd think so.
Huh kinda sad it's dead. It would have lived in my stories...but then again it never would have been conceived in my AU either. Half-ling hybrid babies require true love between an undisguised ling and non-ling to spark life. Neither Zack nor Chrysalis loved each other.
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Could you please make the doctor say something that makes proper sense in Equish, then? Because right now, that sentence doesn't explain anything, it doesn't even say much of anything.
I think that's what lainverse was trying to clue you in on.
lol, that thing is dead
I agree with other people that you need editors or proofreaders
Damn it... she did end up having a miscarriage and now I'm sad
Chrysalis can't even breed a mare properly