follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Heh..... This world can't give him a break can it?
will zack get a drinking buddie?
That one episode is that all people seems to remember about prince Blueblood.
Does Twilight hit Discord in this story?
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A lot of the things that became popular in this fandom only have a tiny bit of screentime to back them up. Remember that Lyra sitting on a bench weird in one episode was the entire basis for her being a human conspiracy theorist.
It's frustrating to see Blueblood being such an over-the-top snobby prick in stories because he actually is someone held up to high levels of scrutiny and Celestia would not allow him to reflect so poorly back on her. He can definitely be portrayed as arrogant, self-centered, maybe treat mares poorly, but he would realistically be able to at least pretend to act civilly towards strangers. Some of those strangers that he meets in the castle could have the potential to place an embargo on Equestrian goods, or even declare war if they were insulted enough.
Discords gonna do something stupid isn't he.
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i really hated that shit when ever i read a HIE story if that gets brought up its hard not to just drop the story all together unless the main story is really good in spite of that
Jesus, someone has a death wish.
Looks at author notes
...I'm hoping that Zack doesn't go overboard with her anger.
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I kinda get like that when I read Pinkie breaking the fourth wall really hard. I've seen it done right a lot of times, but sometimes not.
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Depends, bet she walks in on Starlight bottling her anger up now.
zack is going to snap one day
Dude, Celestia and Luna haven't done anything really wrong here. I'm actually pretty mad at what you've done. Princess Celestia and Princess Luna helped him a damn large amount, and have been working extremely hard to get him back home. The least he can do is forgive some trash idiot that Princess Celestia decided to save because she took pity on him and now lives spoiled, with luna and celestia too grief stricken to actually chastise him, after he says a couple of stupid things.
This chapter sounds much more like Dan vs The Equestria.
Ah, this is whyvi love earth. We know when not to fuck with other people. And on how to respect others. I wonder how many people other than I wish Zach dusted Blueblood.
Oh, dear. Everypony buy an umbrella; The living raincloud is here.
Blueblood... don't do this.
You're digging your own grave, man.
Keep on digging, why don'tcha.
If anything, he's (ironic, I know) a noble. There's a difference.
exuding and palpable.
Congrats, players. You just got the bad ending.
I look forward to the coming chapters. I absolutely love the way Blueblood was handled.
(Softly) no
Hmm... good. One sane person/pony in the Equestria and he is not mad (usually a lot of them have issues with themselves), he just doesn't buy their bullshit!
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no spoiling the next chapter!
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and when he does--run for your fucking lives!
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true, and while Luna hasn't really done anything to Zack, Celestia has lied to him and tried to play Sim with him by using Twilight and her friends as other pieces. that left a bad taste in Zack's mouth. and while the princesses are doing a good thing, remember, Zack has been dealing with one crazy bullshit after another for a literal week. so her opinion on the ponies, royals and good folk or not, are not very high.
but remember Zack left before she really did or say something to bad, and plans to apologize for how she acted. this will be brought up in the next chapter.
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i don't really get this point myself. i mean if there is like a detailed reason why Lyra is like this, then i can accept that. but if Lyra is just a crazy human lover for the sake of that, then its slightly lessees my interest to the fic.
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what makes you think so?
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Discord was the first to come to mind.
"Aside from the strangeness and sometimes mind numbing events of the past few days, there have been other strange occurrences during those days. Every now and then Zack would hear someone, snicker or try to contain a laugh, but it was usually when no one else was around, and it sounded like the person laughing was far away. There were also bizarre things either popping in out of nowhere, or have a random object—usually in the form of food or a out of place drop of some kind of beverage—falls from somewhere and land on or around Zack. And nobody else notices it."
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this may not be the best thing for Blueblood, but until I see actual genuine other portrayals of his character, that shows other sides to his character, then this is how he will be portraited in my fics. as I try to keep the pony characters close to what i have seen them act in show.
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but Discord has only an observer, who seems to be loving treating this fic as a piece of cinema.
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There is a comic book Blueblood, but I don't think that you are looking for that kind of thing.
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well Blueblood is a one-off character, both here in this fic, and in the show.
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And when that day comes I'm going to pull up a chair and crack out the popcorn
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And when that day comes Faust have mercy on all of Equestria's souls. You can already see Zack is starting to break, he might end up the final villian of the story and it will be all the ponies (as in the Royal Sisters, Blueblood, The Mane 6, Starlight, and Shining Armour) that he knows' fault. One or all of them will push him just a little bit too far then he'll snap and become the pony world's version of Midnight Sparkle and it will be all their fault. Either get him back home or at the very least give him his human form to mitigate him going Midnight Sparkle on the ponies.
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oh my sweet summer sun child.....when you see what actually happened to Zack, and see him snap....you will want to live so deep underground or hide in Tartarus instead of see what a broken man with almost limitless magical capabilities will do to the surface of Equestria in his fractured state.
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Firstly i'm a child of the night so i love summer evenings and nights lol. Secondly ooh i can't wait til i see him lose it. I'm counting down til i see the chapter where i see that emotional explosion of his. Plus based on what i've read it will be the ponies' fault. Which one i don't know but i'll watch you roll the dice and see
Keep it up I like the story
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already working on the next chapter, should be ready in an hour or so.
For someone who seems quite fixated on justice, lawful behaviour, equal consequence, correct social behaviour and sanctity of the self; Zack sure doesn't seem to have a problem with threats, intimidation and property damage.
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that makes justified self-defense harder to prove.
Darn! And here we were, hoping for a nice castration!
Yes they finally admitted it he's adopted so he's not really a prince he doesn't get the big Royal Treatment. he's not Royal Blood so he can't because the next heir to the throne. so his title is just completely useless.
I honestly forgot that blueblood was even a character!🤣🤣🤣
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I always thought that he was descended from one of the royal families from a thousand years ago
I understand Zack is in a horrible place at the moment, but he is taking it too far and he needs to calm down some. keep in mind I'm not in any way saying Blueboy didn't deserve his due.
it cannot be healthy for him to be at this level of anger for so long.
I just had to say what I'm thinking because I'm starting to dislike Zack's personality (he reminds me of this one girl i knew in junior high) without the context of his loss it wouldn't have taken this long
still love this story though its actually pretty realistic (the character reactions, I mean)
The format needs to be changed. Some text chunks are huuuge
Sooo... What is it now? Ancherstone / Anchorstone.
Zack takes to mutch libertys. He is literally in anither wirld in another Country with rules. In earth middle age he might just have been executed for the disrespect he showed Celestia. Just food for thoughts
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Blueblood really needs to be educated and raised. Celestia proved time and time again how mutch she fails in that respect.
Sunset Shimmer, Twilight Sparkle & Blueblood. All of them left to their own by Celestia. Eventually used up.
Sunset & Twilight as weapon against Nightmaremoon.
Blueblood as pet project going horrible wrong...
Honestly, Zach's reaction to Blueblood was horrible, he answered insults with threats of violence, which is pretty fucking hypocritical considering his anger at Shining Armour.
Honestly, I have no idea why he reacted so much worse to being insulted than being mind controlled.