follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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Noooooo! Also Thorax GET UP MAN. Errr, ling? ANYWAY JUST GET UP BRO.
alternate title: Zack must suffer.
reforming chrisalis isnt an option
Zack gives up too easily, where's the rage of 300%? I'm beginning to doubt that the main character will get up ... she didn't even bite off a member of the queen's organ. will you really get pushed? where is her revenge? where is the total rage and death of the other changelings? where are the ruins of the hive?
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She's being mind-controlled bro.
Sorry; I couldn't resist.
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no mind control, there's a word for Zack's mentality from repeated trauma from the abuse of chrysalis. going to go look it up then update this comment.
so far in my search, its coming up some type of stockholm syndrome except instead of developing a bond. Its more of a fear thing towards Chrysalis caused by repeated raping that broke Zack mentally.
I hope thorax has enough plot armor to get this story moving towards Zack's rescue.
I also want him to survive after his epic levels of bro-ness.
That was poorly planned. Silly Thorax, can't fool the Queen in a whim!
Well, at least he's outside now. Let his encounters be benign and the ponies merciful.
You'd think Chrysalis would get bored after a few days, intellectually and physically. Apparently the newness effect hasn't worn off.
Sooo, you really do hate Zack, aintcha? The only one you probably hate more so far is Chrysalis since I wouldn't want being her later in the story. That might be pretty, or might not, but it definitely will be gruesome.
So Thorax is out of the blast zone now?
Good. Wipe the hive from the face of the planet.
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its hard to be a rage induced monster when your powerless, surrounded by a nation of creatures that have magic and means to restrain you, and a queen that can mind control someone. also Zack is being physically used and abused while having her mind being assaulted in various way. she has no means of actually fighting back. the reason why Zack was so rage induced in Vol. was mostly because her unstable emotions have ben somewhat influenced by the types of magic housed inside her.
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are you asking if i hate Zack?
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that's basically the jest of it, also Zack wanted to spare the only person that's been her little glimmer of light in her current situation.
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Ye, so much shit and so densely packed... I'm not telling your story is bad, though. It's good and I like it.
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well it's not like I'm doing all this because i hate the main character, its more like Zack is just having life dumping proverbial shit all over her ever since Discord fucked with her life. Some people are just prone to having life just treat them like this before they can have a normal or good life.
So... what does Chrysalis intend to get out of this again, other than torturing someone to be evil? Zack has already made it clear he doesn't think much of the ponies so there's not any real point to this other than plain sadism.
Also, I would put Spike in the "Best Friend" role instead of Thorax. I mean he's obviously got good intentions but him being involved in all this makes me feel salty regardless.
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well in the show, even if it is more tame than my version of her, I've always viewed Chrysalis as a sadistic person. especially when we saw her mentality was going down the drain when she got her hive defeated and the changelings turned against her. also its shown that so long as Chrysalis gets her way, she'll abuse, us, or hurt anyone. she also seems to delight in causing harm to people for no other benefit. again, the show is more tamed than mine interpretation of Chrysalis.
Spike is already Best Friend. while the circumstances for his title in Zack's eyes is different from when she named Thorax best friend. also, While Spike has respected Zack's privacy and didn't try to invade her space, Thorax has spent two weeks trying to make Zack's life in the Hive tolerable, and keep her safe, and now attempting to get her out of the Hive.
I just realized the true meaning of the title of this chapter, this is only the beginning except Thorax isn't there to be Zack's emotional comfort.
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bingo
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It was never an option.
Alicorn
This Chrysalis will share Discords fate. Death.