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once again changelings make the best psychologist, also going to call wtf rainbow on that thing related to abortion. even if it was in character it wasn't her crowning achievement in the fic.
I feel like suicide is not far behind. I just hope hey stop her in time
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yea she asked the wrong question there. a question i have is will zack feel better aborting, by giving the baby to thorax after birth or just raising it herself? none of the options she has are particularly good and all have moral and mental issues relatid to them.
...wait does that make abortion illegal in equestia? i cant belive i need to ask this...
Yeah, the Diarchy will be next ones to brutalize her even more by forcing her to carry this out, then again it could be the author does not want to go there. If she is deemed threat to the child this could get truly dark extremely fast.
Edit:
It seems like they are forgiving killing of Discord, interesting implications for unfolding drama.
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dont forget the possiblity for the baby to endanger zack through having her hormones going crazy. Along with her ptsd and panic attacks this isnt going to be a good thing for zack
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Well, unless they MAKE it a good thing for her... they do have Princess of Love with them. Some mental 're-alignment' and she will be the perfect loving mother.
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abortion is not really illegal, its more like that ponies find it appalling to take any life, even a in-born fetaus.
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As i read this, i cannot help but think Celestia lied here, could be it was wrapped in misdirection but it still is a lie to traumatized Pony.
So they actually are blaming him for killing Discord, and seriously considering forcing him to have this child? Thats... fycking hell, that is just horrific. Doing so just confirms that they are not and can NEVER be his friends. That telhey woukd object to someone being raped but woukd gorce that person to forever bear the consequences of that rape is hypocrisy I just can't forgive.
If they want to see this baby born so badly THEY should be the ones carrying it, but you don't see any of them lining up to be violated by Chrysalis.
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where as abortion can that was well
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It's Zack's decision, not Celestia's
Especially that this child is the result of rape
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if celestia tryed to force zack she would likely not have anyone backing her
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She just did that
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not yet realy as zack hasent made a solid statement of if she wants to keep the baby or not. if she repetes that if zack doesnt want to go through with the pregency that would be the start
Agree, Zack should decide whether or not to kill the chrysalis nightmare, not the storytelling ponies' decision. they were not raped, they did not commit the act. so he should get the monster out of the body.
I honestly thought Zack would be more opposed to the baby, given it was a product of nonconsensual sex. And, shouldn't she be angrier at every changeling besides Thorax? They engaged in violating her too. It will be a nice little arc if she freaks out at every changeling since she wouldn't disguise one from the other. I guess I was expecting more anger here, but it could be that it's still too early.
I wonder how long it is going to be until something or someone sets Zack off.
this chapter show's how broken zack now realy is and i can tell from expierence it will only get worse
ooof.... abortion, now that's a touchy subject... even if it is a rape baby....
In my opinion, they should off the child after it's born.
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well with everything else going on in her life, as well as just coming out of a traumatic state that Chrysalis left her in, Zack's anger tank has....tapped out for the time being. right now, she's more like a deflated balloon that has just enough air to make it float for a second. (if that makes sense)
Well, I liked the story well enough before all the garbage with Chrysalis. At this point the story just feels like an excuse to heap abuse, and tragedy on the main character.
Gonna stop reading now, and remove from my tracking list. Best of luck, I suppose.
Define "okay", Twi. -_-
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That's probably the most idiotic and vile way of dealing with the problem. Not only it means Zack have to go through entire pregnancy and give birth, but literally for nothing more than pointless murder of innocent in the end. You haven't thought this through, have you? What is the point of killing the baby after it already got born? What will it solve?
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that's fair. sorry i couldn't hold your interest till the story finishes.
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have you read the latest chapter?
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I don't see why you're so mad at RD for pointing out that Zack should have this option. It's unquestionably traumatic to be forced to give birth in those circumstances, rape pregnancy way too often leads to infanticide or suicide (google wartime sexual violence). I mean, even in the real world, in the overwhelming majority of civilized countries abortion is legal if pregnancy is a result of rape. And that's for a damn good reason.
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not mad, just pointing out someone had to bring up that option and rainbow dash stepped up to put it on the table.
A storm is brewing...
unborn unless this is some weird ponified term i've never heard of.
in-born is a different word that means "existing from birth".
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Being the land of magic it wouldn't surprise me at all if there is a spell that can just transfer the pregnancy to someone else.
This would avoid pretty much all the moral implications as it would allow some who actually wanted it to bear and raise it.
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It's also interesting to note that the hive is now under equestrian control, chrysalis is presumably the only one that fled so will zack's other abusers be held to account?
In general this feels out of character, maybe zack hasn't fully mentally recovered yet or maybe he has been mentally altered by the heart.
Zack isn't as upset as is to be expected rather he seems to be in shock and they haven't noticed.
Zack is upset about things that really aren't the main issues at this point. Yes he killed discord but I can't see him feeling as bad as he is as from his perspective he deserved it and discord has been doing stuff like this for millennia without repercussions which is probably why they don't appear to be intending to hold him to account for discords murder.
By contrast he doesn't seem to be that upset with being pregnant.
This is in magical pony land so anything even tangentially related to killing is frowned upon however it is run exclusively by females so it still seems odd that they would be so against women's rights.
Zack comes from a world where abortion is a relatively common thing he should have been the one to ask if it was an option.
Rainbow is from a world where abortion is apparently not quite illegal but so frowned upon the discussion in the story reads like it's outright illegal.
Either way it feels really out of character for rainbow to even suggest it, it would also have felt out of character if any of the other equestrians had suggested it.
It's fine if zack keeps the baby either to raise or to give away to someone who can care for it but only if he chooses to do so otherwise the story gets a lot darker if the decision is made for him.
The ideal route would be to transfer the pregnancy to someone who actually wants it as it would allow us to see the heir without causing extra harm to zack. It's implied it will be an heir to the throne so likely it will be a changeling queen,king,prince,princess and probably entirely changeling instead of a hybrid as if that were a thing it would be strange as there don't appear to be any existing ones and chrysalis clearly isn't above that.
The next most interesting routes are either he keeps it and gives it away or keeps it and raises it, either way we get to see the heir but neither are good for zack's mental health.
Assuming transferal magic isn't a thing the most in character option would be for him to terminate the pregnancy as I can't see any way that he'd suddenly decide he was ok with bearing a child without being manipulated. I don't think the author will go this route because while it's realistic it's less interesting than the other options.
It's pretty likely that he'd just kill himself at this point just to have some control over his own life as he's had everything taken from him and been
used as a toy. It would be tragic and realistic but even less of an interesting ending, would consist of like 2-4 chapters of everyone moping about where they may or may not realize they weren't supporting him enough.
He could also take matters into his own hands and terminate the pregnancy on his own but that doesn't feel in character for him and would be annoying because if he failed they'd lock him up in the funny farm and force him to have it and if he succeeded they'd probably still lock him up in the funny farm.
Then lastly there is the way the story seems to be going which is zack has been given the impression that it's illegal so it's implied that he's going to have to have the changeling regardless of if he wants it or not which fits the dark tag of the story but that's just that much more darker.
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Zack is not 100% mentally, there, as she's in a post-traumatic state. so that's why a lot of her decisions don't seem to be in character. while the heart has freed Zack of her mind control state, it did NOT erase her traumas that she had to sustain thus far.
for the story, there is no 'transfer fetus to other willing mother spell'. and i already have something planed for the inborn. by-the-by, the in-born was a typo. my bad.
Zack is not going to commit suicide, she's not that far gone. sure, she is traumatically damaged, but not to where she's going to kill herself. as for 'taking matters into her own hands'. yes, Zack will take a lot of measures to ensure that she will not be ANYONE's plaything, or be manipulated.
I'm honestly disgusted and horrified that you've done this to Zack. The situation you've put them into is my fucking greatest fear. Being forced to give birth to a child. Let alone a child of rape. You have a sick and twisted mind and I... I honestly am very close to saying I hate you, because even forcing a fictional character to go through this just highlights the horrid nature of humanity today. It's unbelievably hard for me to hold my tongue and hurl obscenities' and abuses at you and accuse you of being a pro-birth monster because it really seems like you may be from this situation since I genuinely feel that only someone who supports female bodied people being striped of their autonomy and safety and rights to physical and mental well being would write such a thing as this.
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..........you do realize that this is a dark fic, right. emphasis on Dark.
and that the Dark-Tag has various genre in where a writer can go, and trust me, I read official stories and novels that have WAY worst things than rape, and rape pregnancy.
To be perfectly frank, the first thing in the grand buffet of Canterlot I would've gotten would've been an abortion.
I wouldn't have cared how illegal it was. If someone else wanted to have this protein sack be carried to term, they could have it right there and then, and I wouldn't have cared how.
I mean, not ever since his coming, but since before then, this world has taken one massive dump after another on him. For all he cares - the entire world, the friendships, the magic, the happiness and the ever loving princesses can go fornicate in the fucking meadows. To most this may be heaven, but to this guy? It's absolute hell, at this point. Or, at least I think so.
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well your pretty much on the mark in how I'm trying to frame this particular fic. most people who want a fantasy escape will see Equestria as a great place to be, despite the occasional threat, no matter how small or big it is.
however, for one that has a perfectly normal life, and is contempt with that life and is actually enjoying it---suddenly being spirited away to another world via BEING TURNED TO DUST and then have your soul stuffed into a body that you never wanted, and then have people treat your situation like its just a simple band aide rip off, then have the situation of your life actually explained by a 'god' that was board of his world....yeah....i think right now whatever happens to Zack is indeed hell until things change.
How Zack is not demand to have the foal removed or cut out... I would not want to have to bear the burden.
I side with Rainbowdash. Kill it.
Wtf
Your equestria is so backwards. What a horrible place to live