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Changelings again?
I really hope that someone (most likely Zach in a blood rage) kills Chrysalis and then genocides any Changelings that don't switch over to Thorax's side.
The amount of times that Zach reaches some kind of normalcy and sense of security, only to have it ripped from her to start another round of suffering, is getting ridiculous.
Ah yes act normal....
It's obvious that something is off about them,ponies are too sensitive to not notice that.Like they reacted to Zecora,so I don't think these minions will succeed at anything. They should be immediately noticed and guards called in to check them.
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even if they are under a spell i do hope that zack just snaps and works out some of her emotions by beating them up
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I know one queen who would love to.
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Like a chapter or 2 again it’s revealed she effectively drained them so they are like, I can’t remember exactly but those aren’t changelings.
Grammar mistake me thinks.
I wanna say nice but that ending isn't. So you get a half nice
A question since I haven't gotten back to this story since finishing chapter 36; was he forced to have the child or no?
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You could say she had a nasty miscarriage.
As much as I like camping, the existence of Flyders in Equestria rules out any chance of me ever going camping there...
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Good to know. Thanks.
I don't really like the idea of him going camping with them, as they're yet to prove they're @#$%ing sorry for anything. Spike is the only person Zack really knows that isn't horrible.
...They met last chapter.
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woops i thought i fixed that. my bad.
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One of the reasons childbirth is so painful (and the primary complication here, crossbreeding aside) is because of the relative sizes. Increase the size of the mother without increasing the size of the off-spring and it'd at least not be nearly as horrific.
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1. I meant the projection of her human-self while tiny winged horny-horse stands off 'camera' until explaining the situation. The reveal would inevitably be 'OH FUCK HE WAS TELLING THE TRUTH' but it'd be less so.
2. The existing mirror portal leads to G4 'earth'. Doesn't mean one can't be *made* especially if you've got chaos magic kicking around helping out your casting. If you use the comics as a source, there were actually a ton of mirror portals at one point - it's one of Starswirl's pet projects. Even if you don't, they already made a gate, the only problem is that Zach cannot go through it, so the idea is partially proven in principle even if not in execution. Heck, at least you could send a letter through.
3. My mistake, I should have been clearer: Zach's heart is not Earth. Zach's heart is his loved ones. Wherever they are is where his heart belongs. So if you can arrange for them be able to visit (as opposed to summoning them without a way back which is just as bad as what happened to him) then Zach being unable to return to Earth isn't as terrible a blow.
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-fair but still this not going to happen.
-i don't use the comics as source because i don't know them, and they are not Canon to the main TV show which 99% of my fics follow. also to make a mirror portal like that, would take who knows how many years. also there is no Chaos magic just drifting around. Zack's body maybe created by chaos magic, but that doesn't mean she can use it. and Discords own magic is not drifting through the world, if it was then i would be writing wild and crazy sht that just pop up because of it just 'existing.
-yes, Zack's heart is his loved ones. but remember it took more power for Discord to bring Zack to Equestria, and the process of doing so ends up vaporizing him and leaving his soul bodiless. so if the ponies try to summon Zack's family and friends, they would be doing the same thing to them. killing them and leaving their souls just drifting. and as stated the reason why Zack can't go back is because she is DEAD in THAT universe by its own LAW OF REALITY! so no matter what, Zack can NEVER go back.
This makes little sense to me. Zack and the others were early as Rarity points out: saving time by flying. And yet AJ and AB apparently were already waiting? If Rarity had been walking would those two have stood there waiting like NPCs waiting for the player to trigger their quest?
Zack is literally one of the few Alicorns of Equestria. One with at least a Nation nr1 enemy on her not to distant past... Why would she not have realisticly at least a personal guard detail?
Answer: Plothole
I can imagen Chrysalis new mindslaves being effectiv in information gathering, but obduction? Unlikely...
Are their eyes not out of the ordinary ?
How do randomstallion without military training are to catch a mare killing Discord? Discord had her absolutly livid. Pretty sure Zack get the same if someone try get her freedom stolen from her...
Abused, raped, forcefully impregnated and than having survived a misscarage... Yeah... Zack would totaly wipe the floor with them...
Magicaly drained, mentaly and physicaly exhausted.
Foalnapping more than a literall Foal seem to be very unlikely...